Transmigrating to Modern Earth from the Future

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TheUngod

Shameless author review here! This is my new novel that I have entered into WPC August 2023! This novel is still fresh so if there are any mistakes don't hesitate to leave a review or comment to let me know so I can fix them! [img=recommend]

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Kergonan

Transmigrating to Modern Earth from the Future I started to read this novel because I wanted a good short story between the often thousand chapters long chapters tales I’m fond of. So, let’s go first with the one good thing about this book, the author has good grammar. Everything else is a letdown. It is not a short story, it’s a supposed-to-be long novel that has been abandoned by the author, so it’s not a completed story, more a short road leading to nowhere. The original premises, a hyper advanced AI from the ten of thousand of year in the future, sick of its pointless existence, tries to self-destroy ends up in a modern Earth in a human body, is wasted. The main character (Lumen) is a generic isekai character who ends up a collection of tropes, appears quite stupid at the end. And I say Isekai purposefully, as in the first 10 chapters, the action leaves Earth for an unoriginal fantasy tutorial then fantasy world setting, with a system trope which is good at first but unexploited. Finally, the writing is alright at the beginning, but toward the end of the first volume, it starts to go bad, and for the second (and final volume of the tale), the storytelling becomes incoherent, sloppy, repetitive (filler), just bad to the point I had to force myself to read the last chapters. In conclusion, this novel is a wasted opportunity, in character and setting (a cheat, as it almost doesn’t take place in modern Earth), the writing is awful and it is no wonder the author gave it up. My final verdict is a 1 out of 10. P.S: I can’t even thank the author for the effort of writing this novel, as the last 10 chapter were a torture to read, and he did not even have the sincerity to say in the synopsis that it was not a completed tale, but one which would remain unfinished. I wasted my coins for nothing.

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SlimeBread2

Author .Your Novel is similar to "The God of Virus"

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Jk_Rowdy

I have been following the author's other work since the early chapters have been released, and I can say that this new novel that he is working on may be even more promising than his other one! I have seen very few novels with the main protagonist as an AI so I am looking forward to where this story is heading! [img=recommend]

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milimo_simuyuni

I wish the mc wasn't dummed done by the Author, it doesn't make sense for an advance AI to become dumb but good novel so far

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festival_night_89

hey saw this book on wpc figured id give it a try and its decent read and enjoy :)

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Kaishepard28

A good story reminded me of a favorite series like this. A spear instead of a bow is nice. even though It was finished too soon I say give this a read especially for others like me that do not like bad translation to English.

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CastlePanda

How dare you complete this fine piece of work!

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novelline00

Why was the novel tagged as completed when it is not yet complete?

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Alexys_Holmes

I love this story out of all the stories I read on this app

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jamaica_misoles

Bogs reviews: Why bother putting health if u can be one shot.look at shivi's death even if he had 1M health u can still die for 1 arrow so why bother. Over all this is good recommended. Nindot sya gamay tistinge lang basa ninyu guys.

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Morggyb

I’m unsure if I should be terrified since this novel is about an AI turning into the best human in the multiverse and is almost certainly written by an AI. Or in tandem with an AI. I’m not sure at which chapter it stops feeling like maybe a nerd wrote and became overbearingly computerized. Still, specific points give me deja vu from having AI translate novels and seeing the AI take off on its own and continue writing. Overall, the story isn’t bad, but the sitcom style of having everyone taking turns to say something (ironically making the MC the most human character), the stale and repetitive narration, and the unexplained changes in the MC all take away from the read, which would otherwise be good.

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TheLONGnose

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Robert_Rogue

let's be clear first the AI isn't gender confused right??? is it male or female or other things

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Kate_4127

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John_Johnson_4890

This novel feels like it ticks a lot of the litRPG boxes for me. There seems to also be a very interesting plot brewing and maybe we can even see some cultivation vs magic systems in the future????