5รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
Wonderful story so far, I like the changes of personality in the characters. I just wish the update was better...
The story is well written. The first chapter felt like an actual novel, not fanfic. I hope you will continue updating. -////////////////////
This story just started and can't wait to see how it unfolds. I hope this goes on for a good long while.
This fic will spiral into forced and rushed plots along with character developments like all the other fics this author has discarded. No more than 4 chapters and the amount of Bs is astonishing. Don't waste your time.
Wonderful story so far, I like the changes of personality in the characters. I just wish the update was better...
The story is well written. The first chapter felt like an actual novel, not fanfic. I hope you will continue updating. -////////////////////
This story just started and can't wait to see how it unfolds. I hope this goes on for a good long while.
This fic will spiral into forced and rushed plots along with character developments like all the other fics this author has discarded. No more than 4 chapters and the amount of Bs is astonishing. Don't waste your time.