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"Erhard."
Her voice was bold like her fiery hair.

"Who are you?!" The Saint of Water wasn't pleased.

But Andromeda wasn't deterred.
"I'm your future monarch. So I have kindly come to declare war on you~"
"I will come to claim you and the crown, Erhard."

"Lets play this game once more~"

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At the end of her life, Andromeda strikes a deal with the Deity of darkness to rewrite the chapters of her life.

The story unfolds as Andromeda, the Saintess of the Sacred Flame, returns to her past with a mission: to exact revenge on those who orchestrated her downfall and make Erhard hers.

Andromeda's obsessive love for Erhard, the fallen King of an enemy kingdom, despite her previous cruelty, unravels a tale of passion, forgiveness, and unexpected alliances in the face of the greatest dangers, cunning enemies, and even in the hands of fickle Deities.

Will Andromeda and Erhard be able to unite, or will they be ripped apart by the hands of destiny and the Gods playing their own games?

Join them on this journey of Love, Revenge, and Obsession.

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The story is on hiatus since I am trying to stockpile chapters.

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    FantasyL

    Alright, this piece is something! The writing quality, I would say is top notch... the command and use of words is impressive. Talk about Character Design... Splendid! The characters are interesting too and there are twists here and there. One should have this in their libraries if one is a sucker for fantasies!

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    MIMI24

    The writing is fantastic, and the description was done very well. In some parts I find it more than necessary. In the first chapter, some parts are repeated. Long sentences should split into many small ones. The pace is slowed down by ton of description. (I don't tell that it's bad, but more action scenes will drew reader in) I liked the FL's character. Her vengeance nature is good. The synopsis is vague. More details should be revealed. Good job.

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    Elvlin
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    The novel's writing brilliantly conveys the female lead's emotions,. As readers anticipate the main characters' reunion and journey of revenge, the rich world-building and dialogues deepen the experience. For those who enjoy a touch of angst, this is a captivating read

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    Cloudee77

    The protagonist of this book is really grey on moral spectrum, which kind of leaves a lot of interesting choices for later development. She is, though a very archetypal 'villainous', but she is no dainty innocent 'victim'— very well put by the author, a 'scorned' character hellbent on revenge (and for which she can do anything).The background setting is very cool, all serve the story very well. the later chapters I hope will flesh out many background characters and their intentions. Though it appears to have too many adjectives and description in the beginning— if anyone is impressed by the story introduction and wants to read, I would recommend jumping to chapter 3/4 and then re-read the first two as a prologue. interestingly paced storyline that really pushes you into scrolling and keep scrolling.

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    GMSJakers

    The sheer writing is an absolute joy to read. But what makes it so good is the powerful use of their characters. Their characters are done so well that they evoke feeling into the story.

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    AbdulfatahFatima

    Wow this is absolutely amazing, am waiting for more my dear.

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    KK_Khine

    Hey there, I've been diving into your story, and it's quite the rollercoaster! I'm loving the emotional depth of characters like Andromeda, but I gotta admit, sometimes the plot feels a bit confusing. It's like untying a knot sometimes. Maybe a bit more straightforward storytelling in a few chapters could help. Still, I'm hooked, and your storytelling skills are impressive. Keep it up, and find that sweet spot between complexity and clarity!😆

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    Jin_moon

    The writing is great... Story is hooking, and love the character development, so far it is great... Keep releasing more such content...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    TsukasaFrier

    I really like the way how you write those vivid descriptions for your story! I find your plot is interesting and is enjoyable to read. I found that some of your paragraphs are too long and you might want to separate it and make it easier to read. Keep up your good work!

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    LordShivaStories

    Read all the 8 chapters and it was really interesting. I am excited to see how the mc reunites with ml who loved her and how she changes herself while getting revenge. I like the world building, conversations, descriptions etc. I also like good angst so it is a good novel for me

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    Nikage

    Writing quality solid, it's interesting how you describe the characters. What can I say after the first three chapters? well done author

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    LanumKing

    I like the description, writing style and grammar however i found it hard to connect with the story idk if its cause I'm not familiar with the genre but the beginning felt drawn out.

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    UelUel

    The Writing quality/style of the book was very consistent. It never fails to show the emotion of the FL MC at every chapter. Her anger, sadness, the darkness of the story, and how proud and strong the FL MC is. I hope that will stay the same even after the ML MC gets reunited with her. All so, the storyline makes me feel like I'm reading a story about Witch-hunt And the way she was burned reminds me of the story of Jeane de Arc.

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