Awesome novel bro, the first chapter's pacing was not good but it's alright since like you mentioned you are a first-time author, and like I was saying the plot maybe overused but you are adding your own twist to it which I definitely loved. Overall, hope to see more.
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ok and thanks bhai
A dark novel with some comedy. This is kind of uncommon filled with humorous situation and also filled with seriousness. This Male Protagonist is kind of like a yandere for his family with his protectiveness. Not going to reveal much just read it.
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also a question which novels of mine do you want to see means with more chapters?
thank you bhai and yeah I am going to do that
Shameless Review: Author has vision, with a good creative imagination to top it all of. Cultivation being shown in a new light and novel possessing unique traits not mirroring the already established footnotes. Pls continue this novel author looking forward to more. Also, you are one of the only authors who write about hindu mythology here.
thank you so much for the review
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The story is funny but also has depth in its plot. Sometimes even I imagine scenario like this. Meaning, if I get transferred to my novel would I survive. So this was a good read for me and I recommend
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This story may seem kind of jumbled but read it a little bit and I guarantee you will get hooked plainly due to the narration, the plot and the mystery which overcomes all the faults. I want more
Came back after a long Hiatus with another trash novel which I hope you will give love too since I will improve my writing over the course of the chapters and my mindset since lots of stress which we all have so I hope that you all understand
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