Kuroko's Basketball: The Forgotten Miracle

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human_man_69

Your story has the same problem of a few other stories in the fact that it seems like you are writing a summary of what was meant to be in the chapter instead of writing what was supposed to be in the chapter.

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MrSheta

If there is a way to describe this ff, it would be that this is the summary of the real ff... Now, surprisingly this is the real ff, so we can conclude that the narrative is badly done, badly focused and without much substance, He has a somewhat interesting idea, but he doesn't know how to take advantage of it with this summary.

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Dalurino

the author's way of writing bothers me, the author writes as if he were making a summary. the story would be good if the author changes his way of writing, I can't continue.

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GhostAKilla

love it so far keep it up and please don't drop it