No, the quotation marks slipped in when I was writing ir from my cel O.o
"This is progressing painfully slowly. I liked this arc at first, but now I can't wait for it to be over."
It was a good read until chapter 81, where everything went to hell. It’s by no means the best Naruto fanfiction I’ve read, but it was enjoyable, if we overlook the fact that it introduced Senju characters from some unknown place, knowing that the only Senju is Tsunade. Setting aside the main female character, who seemed to support something in the story, I really thought she would die and trigger the Sharingan, but that was fine. Everything changed with chapter 81; he was steadfast in his decision not to join that clan for too many plausible reasons, but one damn meal made him change. Ugh, what a huge disappointment. I can’t say if it gets better later, but we know that his ideals and convictions are made of paper.
Everything was fine until this chapter... But what the hell, why did all the security and conviction of not going to the Uchiha clan vanish with a damn meal? Damn these paper decisions.
Hey, great chapter! Quick question, how often do you release new chapters? I’m really enjoying this fanfic.
Shisui is suitable for the Wind or Lightning Breathing Techniques, and he could possibly be one of a kind in terms of Illusionary Techniques (if there are techniques like Butterfly Breathing and others, it's undeniable that he can master an Illusion Technique). But I never imagined him having the Flame Breathing Technique; after all, he was known to be an extremely fast ninja.
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Is this a translation? Because if so, I understand the repetitiveness of some phrases that repeat in each chapter or even within the same chapter. It would also be better to stop using the previous name he had in his past life; now it's Harry, there's no sense in continuing to refer to him with another name that isn't Harry. The protagonist's mentality seems strange and by each chapter it appears as though he becomes more stupid in his decisions. The way he tries to dodge Hermione's questions is also silly... the only good and redeeming aspect of this FF is the idea of including the "Lord of Mysteries" sequence.
Beautiful chapter, I love this novel, keep up the good work.
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original En Miraculous, Con la voluntad de la Araña. (Español)
Una persona ordinaria fue tomada de su universo y llevada a la fuerza a otro mundo, que conoce a medias, con poderes, habilidades y recuerdos que no son suyos. ¿Qué va a hacer a continuación? ¿Dará la talla al gran peso que le dieron? -------- ---------- ----------- Autor: esto es solo para practicar mi mano al escribir, tomé un mundo realmente simple como es el mundo de Ladybug (Miraculous), porque el giro mundial es pequeño, centralizado y un concepto muy simple de moldear. El prota tiene poderes de Spiderman porque estoy pensando en una gran historia de Spiderman en Marvel y quiero ver si puedo escribir bien algunas escenas, además de que Marvel es demasiado extenso para comenzar a escribir directamente en él. No se tomen esto enserio porque es de práctica y sacar ideas de la cabeza, nada más ... Puede ser algo bueno como algo basura.3 Chs 71 คอลเลกชัน
🙄Waiting for the episode where they finally sing, and then there are no more chp. QwQ
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