THOR : THE GOD OF THUNDER

LV 15

AkiraLight

The narrative lacks intrigue and the writing exhibits amateurish qualities. Although the idea of a wish fulfillment fanfic isn't inherently bad, the execution in this case is simply horrendous. The fanfic lacks a coherent structure, with the plot jumping haphazardly from one topic to another, resulting in a confusing reading experience. Furthermore, the presence of numerous grammar errors exacerbates the overall quality. The story fails to offer any meaningful character development or evoke genuine emotions in both the main and side characters. In my opinion, this novel is devoid of any thoughtful execution and therefore not worth reading

LV 10

aswsok

I suggest the author, Write and write new books. And read comics whenever possible. Because the author sometimes greatly overestimates the strength of the characters even though they are not, also get to know the level of the characters (1A, 1B, and so on). Also read many other books to improve the quality of the writing.

LV 4

OrganicEmu

This is not readable. The grammatical errors are one thing but all the misspellings make it tiring to read. The idea is very good. I like a good Thor fanfition and this has potential. Try to reread your chapters before you upload them. sincerely A loyal reader

LV 1

DaoistT5J81E

Demasiado malo, creo que la peor historia que he leído, mala narrativa, no hay nada que atraiga a leer. Un mundo que no tiene sentido y personajes poco entretenidos

LV 14

Charles_Picard

My guys it’s worst then Chinese novel translation from google translate

LV 11

The_Flash_4638

Its just bad ... . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. .. .. . . . . .

LV 3

Morningstars_Hell

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LV 4

Weizenbrot14

I'm so sorry little bro but this monster you created is beyon saving ... unreadable can't do read s a story with a lot of grammar mistakes. The MC is too OP at the beginning with no drawbacks it's also too good to be true. Because the MC is too poweful no development is possible.

LV 14

CrimsonRoseDevil

Honestly the writing quality of the first chapter was so bad I couldn't even get past it.

LV 4

BLatman

Yeah so this novel reads like it was written by a 13 year old, along with that the “5 wishes” was more like 8.

LV 4

LastGod

I lost brain cells reading this. It's written like a five year old who fell down the stairs multiple times and had a Concussion. You didn't use spell check you didn't Use any kind of grammar check. You kind of just slapped some sentences together. That sounded like words, and that's about it, right.

LV 3

GOULA

What the hell is this sheet I read now nothing well make for saving this novel is boring you can't understand anything in't don't react it's a waist of time.