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I found this story. I buyed skyrim. I will start reading when im done with the game. Im 100 hours in. Didnt even start the main quest. HOW ARE THERE SO MANY QUESTS
This was pleasing to read. I like the world takeover. It is well thought out and written. Thank you for the hard work.
Great world building and expanding without breaking lore, very well written and engaging, also funny af
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Never thought a Skyrim FanFic could be so wholesomely perfect. For everyone with basic elderscrolls knowledge this is worth reading! High quality stuff this one!
This book has exceeded any expectation i had for it. The characters do not feel like they are one sided in my eyes, while the worldbuilding allows the characters to interact naturally and not forced like so many other novels. The worldbuilding in general is what i would rate as the best thing of the entire book since the author took the time to research and actually implement the finer details. While i will say there are points in the book where it does feel kind of slow, they are actually used to cool down and give perspective for later things that will happen or forshadow some events. The only gripe i may have with the novel is that he acts like the dunmer are the end all be all for his power base. I get that it has been explained by the difference in culture and religion but i would just personally like more representation of the other races. Overall this has been one of the best books i have ever read and personally recommend this book for anyone who has time to read it.
I like the fact that you didn't leave out any detail when it came to the relationship between Morriwind, Oblivion and Skyrim. The other thing is that you gave Savos a backstory that makes sense. 👌🏿👌🏿👌🏿🫡🫡🫡
Apparently they are working on a Dagoth Ur companion mod for Skyrim, there are a few videos on tiktok.
Фанфик интересный и размеренный гг не одолеет всех врагов за 100 глав после чего автор не будет знать о чём писать и быстренько закончит работу надеюсь глав будет еще очень много автор даже упоминал о других мирах от лица гг надеюсь это не дешевый байт и он сможет это реализовать хоть и слабо верится))
Отличная работа, но эти намёки на другие миры очень хочется, чтобы они осуществились, и автор отправил гг, скажем, в мир ведьмака или мир Middle-earth: Shadow of Mordor но каков шанс?
one of the most marvelous Skyrim fanfic on this website. Definitely recommended to read. Review: The story is very interesting with MC going mage focused build (probably cuz magik can go brrrr) with a very good world building and very entertaining interaction between MC and the OG character of Skyrim NPC. Not forgetting about the smooth comedy and in-game lore accurate jokes that every n'wah would definitely appreciate to read 😁. In my opinion, the best part of this fanfic is MC's journey in order to achieve personal power while being the most shameless and unhinged person spreading chaos upon the unfortunate land of tamriel is the thing that can keep you addicted in reading this story. The bad thing that I can think about this fanfiction is probably the civil war arc that I personally isn't really my favorite cuz there's we know the real climax (at least one of the climax) on the story happened after the civil war making me feeling Little bit impatient to read the next arc. Also the fact that I don't really quite in-depth with in-game lore while the story introducing some of these important characters to hype up the opposition doesn't really catch my attention cuz we know how the arc going to end (kinda feels like boring cut scene before the Final boss fight that not many people like hence they skip it). Other than that one particular Arc, everything goes super hype and I can safely say I can't wait for more chapters to be released. This is evidence of how much I get addicted to this fanfic: (sorry for the low power stone donation Author-sama. Sometimes I forgor to submit mine XD)
Very well written , probably the best Skyrim fanfic out there . Just something that in my opinion lacks a tiny bit is the unfortunate underwhelming system and I feel like it could play a more significant role .
C'est la meilleure fan-fiction de skyrim que j'ai eu à lire avec un bon développement et des personnages bien développé avec un scénario cohérent je le conseille vivement.
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After reading every chapter, which took weeks by the way, I can safely say that this is not only the best slyrim fic I have ever read, but also one of the best fic period. Well done Author-kun. We'll done.
At chapter 261 this ***** Author just makes Mc the Most pathetic cringe unnecessary move in history of all of my so far over thousands of read Books/Novels in all my accounts and in real books.
amazing work from an amazing author! the updat speed is sounding, and the fact that they felt that taking only one extra day was bad is a testament to their dedication!
I really hate the romance in recent chapters the monuments between the mc and the drgonborn have felt excessively cringe and pointless like when they were infiltrating that dragon priest place the vampire woman was so much better
Loving the story but when you see a correction you just like the comment and make no effort to fix them!
The writing quality is excellent, only at 4 stars instead of 5 for the occasional typo. The conversations feel real, the characters are believable, and the descriptors are vivid. The story is phenomenal. I'm caught up as of now, and I can honestly say I've only ever been so invested in two other fics. Excellent use of side characters to build up the main cast, and the pacing is on point. Character Design is just, *chef's kiss*. MC and the rest or the primary characters are believable and as grounded as anyone in a fictional world can be expected to be. Updates are extremely regular. There's been, what, maybe a small handful of instances in the past year I can remember when a chapter was late? 10/10, absolutely can not complain. The background of TES is treated with love here. There's so much care given to the history of the world, and it really shows. There are, of course, a few liberties taken. But on the whole, this is a very faithful fan-fic. I cannot recommend this fic enough. just read it, man.
Binge read this until there was nothing left and tried to read “The Dragonborn Saga” to fill the Skyrim fanfic niche I crave. This fic has half the chapters the latter has but wow is the quality night and day. This fic reads like someone who has a proficient grasp on the English language and a deeper understanding of the Elder Scrolls lore than I have rather than the latter with someone who took maybe one or two classes of English and is relying entirely on the wiki for information. Always nice to see authors make peak fiction on a subject they are clearly well read in. Not to mention the protagonist being a massive troll the levels of fandom Zelretch which may be a tad grating at times but makes the moment the protagonist actually have a heart to heart with others more impactful.
Ah... it got tiring. The way the MC acts is normal at first, but then he becomes mocking and annoying. The narrative of the story also changed, the way the point of view keeps varying between present and past, with flashbacks or different perspectives is acceptable at first, but due to a great increase in the use of this type of writing it becomes annoying. Finally, the story got boring, his interaction with the other characters became kind of... pointless? Well, at least that's what I feel. In any case, what used to make me excited now just makes me tired, trying to keep progressing to wait for an improvement, but it's too exhausting to continue, in any case, thanks for the story. Honestly, it's not easy to find a good TES-V story, so I'm still grateful for the chapters read so far -284-.
This is most definitely the greatest fantasy book based off of any game or other franchise that I have read since began reading.
My favorite Skyrim FF ever, 5/5, highly recommended. Btw, I don't even know why he has a System, it doesn't do anything except tell him his stats at this point. He barely got any Quests from it in 350+ chapters.
The story is good but i fell like the mc got too strong too fast and haven't even explored the rest of Tamriel yet now where ever he goes nothing is gonna be threat to him so it will probably get boring fast
everything is good except the character design and the comedy i would've liked it more if it was a bit more serious it's still a good read though
Absolute banger, pure perfection, totally not word-vomit. Jk, I am totally new to writing and there will be mistakes, but I think I learn somewhat quickly from my mistakes so it should get progressively better, I hope you give it a chance.
I found this story. I buyed skyrim. I will start reading when im done with the game. Im 100 hours in. Didnt even start the main quest. HOW ARE THERE SO MANY QUESTS
This was pleasing to read. I like the world takeover. It is well thought out and written. Thank you for the hard work.
Great world building and expanding without breaking lore, very well written and engaging, also funny af
love it grate story [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Never thought a Skyrim FanFic could be so wholesomely perfect. For everyone with basic elderscrolls knowledge this is worth reading! High quality stuff this one!
This book has exceeded any expectation i had for it. The characters do not feel like they are one sided in my eyes, while the worldbuilding allows the characters to interact naturally and not forced like so many other novels. The worldbuilding in general is what i would rate as the best thing of the entire book since the author took the time to research and actually implement the finer details. While i will say there are points in the book where it does feel kind of slow, they are actually used to cool down and give perspective for later things that will happen or forshadow some events. The only gripe i may have with the novel is that he acts like the dunmer are the end all be all for his power base. I get that it has been explained by the difference in culture and religion but i would just personally like more representation of the other races. Overall this has been one of the best books i have ever read and personally recommend this book for anyone who has time to read it.
I like the fact that you didn't leave out any detail when it came to the relationship between Morriwind, Oblivion and Skyrim. The other thing is that you gave Savos a backstory that makes sense. 👌🏿👌🏿👌🏿🫡🫡🫡
Apparently they are working on a Dagoth Ur companion mod for Skyrim, there are a few videos on tiktok.
Фанфик интересный и размеренный гг не одолеет всех врагов за 100 глав после чего автор не будет знать о чём писать и быстренько закончит работу надеюсь глав будет еще очень много автор даже упоминал о других мирах от лица гг надеюсь это не дешевый байт и он сможет это реализовать хоть и слабо верится))
Отличная работа, но эти намёки на другие миры очень хочется, чтобы они осуществились, и автор отправил гг, скажем, в мир ведьмака или мир Middle-earth: Shadow of Mordor но каков шанс?
one of the most marvelous Skyrim fanfic on this website. Definitely recommended to read. Review: The story is very interesting with MC going mage focused build (probably cuz magik can go brrrr) with a very good world building and very entertaining interaction between MC and the OG character of Skyrim NPC. Not forgetting about the smooth comedy and in-game lore accurate jokes that every n'wah would definitely appreciate to read 😁. In my opinion, the best part of this fanfic is MC's journey in order to achieve personal power while being the most shameless and unhinged person spreading chaos upon the unfortunate land of tamriel is the thing that can keep you addicted in reading this story. The bad thing that I can think about this fanfiction is probably the civil war arc that I personally isn't really my favorite cuz there's we know the real climax (at least one of the climax) on the story happened after the civil war making me feeling Little bit impatient to read the next arc. Also the fact that I don't really quite in-depth with in-game lore while the story introducing some of these important characters to hype up the opposition doesn't really catch my attention cuz we know how the arc going to end (kinda feels like boring cut scene before the Final boss fight that not many people like hence they skip it). Other than that one particular Arc, everything goes super hype and I can safely say I can't wait for more chapters to be released. This is evidence of how much I get addicted to this fanfic: (sorry for the low power stone donation Author-sama. Sometimes I forgor to submit mine XD)
Very well written , probably the best Skyrim fanfic out there . Just something that in my opinion lacks a tiny bit is the unfortunate underwhelming system and I feel like it could play a more significant role .
C'est la meilleure fan-fiction de skyrim que j'ai eu à lire avec un bon développement et des personnages bien développé avec un scénario cohérent je le conseille vivement.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ After reading every chapter, which took weeks by the way, I can safely say that this is not only the best slyrim fic I have ever read, but also one of the best fic period. Well done Author-kun. We'll done.
At chapter 261 this ***** Author just makes Mc the Most pathetic cringe unnecessary move in history of all of my so far over thousands of read Books/Novels in all my accounts and in real books.
amazing work from an amazing author! the updat speed is sounding, and the fact that they felt that taking only one extra day was bad is a testament to their dedication!
I really hate the romance in recent chapters the monuments between the mc and the drgonborn have felt excessively cringe and pointless like when they were infiltrating that dragon priest place the vampire woman was so much better
Loving the story but when you see a correction you just like the comment and make no effort to fix them!
The writing quality is excellent, only at 4 stars instead of 5 for the occasional typo. The conversations feel real, the characters are believable, and the descriptors are vivid. The story is phenomenal. I'm caught up as of now, and I can honestly say I've only ever been so invested in two other fics. Excellent use of side characters to build up the main cast, and the pacing is on point. Character Design is just, *chef's kiss*. MC and the rest or the primary characters are believable and as grounded as anyone in a fictional world can be expected to be. Updates are extremely regular. There's been, what, maybe a small handful of instances in the past year I can remember when a chapter was late? 10/10, absolutely can not complain. The background of TES is treated with love here. There's so much care given to the history of the world, and it really shows. There are, of course, a few liberties taken. But on the whole, this is a very faithful fan-fic. I cannot recommend this fic enough. just read it, man.
Binge read this until there was nothing left and tried to read “The Dragonborn Saga” to fill the Skyrim fanfic niche I crave. This fic has half the chapters the latter has but wow is the quality night and day. This fic reads like someone who has a proficient grasp on the English language and a deeper understanding of the Elder Scrolls lore than I have rather than the latter with someone who took maybe one or two classes of English and is relying entirely on the wiki for information. Always nice to see authors make peak fiction on a subject they are clearly well read in. Not to mention the protagonist being a massive troll the levels of fandom Zelretch which may be a tad grating at times but makes the moment the protagonist actually have a heart to heart with others more impactful.
Ah... it got tiring. The way the MC acts is normal at first, but then he becomes mocking and annoying. The narrative of the story also changed, the way the point of view keeps varying between present and past, with flashbacks or different perspectives is acceptable at first, but due to a great increase in the use of this type of writing it becomes annoying. Finally, the story got boring, his interaction with the other characters became kind of... pointless? Well, at least that's what I feel. In any case, what used to make me excited now just makes me tired, trying to keep progressing to wait for an improvement, but it's too exhausting to continue, in any case, thanks for the story. Honestly, it's not easy to find a good TES-V story, so I'm still grateful for the chapters read so far -284-.
This is most definitely the greatest fantasy book based off of any game or other franchise that I have read since began reading.
My favorite Skyrim FF ever, 5/5, highly recommended. Btw, I don't even know why he has a System, it doesn't do anything except tell him his stats at this point. He barely got any Quests from it in 350+ chapters.
The story is good but i fell like the mc got too strong too fast and haven't even explored the rest of Tamriel yet now where ever he goes nothing is gonna be threat to him so it will probably get boring fast
everything is good except the character design and the comedy i would've liked it more if it was a bit more serious it's still a good read though
Absolute banger, pure perfection, totally not word-vomit. Jk, I am totally new to writing and there will be mistakes, but I think I learn somewhat quickly from my mistakes so it should get progressively better, I hope you give it a chance.