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เขียนรีวิวI can painfully tell that the author is either very young or does not possess english as his/her main language. The text reads as though it has been run through AI and has quite a lot of jarring and unnecessary descriptions. Overall its in the top half of webnovels in that it is legible and possesses good potential.
i realy enjoy reading it. But author your mistake is that you explain same thing two times so please don't do that. And give your made an*l plug as gift.
Great book, check it out and you won't be disappointed. I will be awaiting the updates of the author of this book[img=update][img=update][img=update]
The only thing not giving this story a straight 5 star is the update time frame. Last update as of this post is 14 days. I wish the author was encouraged enough to continue the story because it really is good.
I can painfully tell that the author is either very young or does not possess english as his/her main language. The text reads as though it has been run through AI and has quite a lot of jarring and unnecessary descriptions. Overall its in the top half of webnovels in that it is legible and possesses good potential.
i realy enjoy reading it. But author your mistake is that you explain same thing two times so please don't do that. And give your made an*l plug as gift.
Great book, check it out and you won't be disappointed. I will be awaiting the updates of the author of this book[img=update][img=update][img=update]
The only thing not giving this story a straight 5 star is the update time frame. Last update as of this post is 14 days. I wish the author was encouraged enough to continue the story because it really is good.