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I tried to push through but i can't. Author keeps devaluing Mc. Author's writing style is also not suitable as this is a fanfic and not some profound original paperback novel. 1 chapter is full of definition and observation with little content or story progression
Pure and hard "Plot Armor", not recommended... The beginning is entertaining, but the plot slowly becomes bland and more and more "Plot Armor" appears, to the point of being repulsive...
Its a meandering mess of a story with hardly any interactions between characters, like 90% of the story is the mc talking to himself or just descriptions and repetitions of things happening or stuff we already know Getting explained again and again. He also doesnt change anything so its basically just the plot of naruto from another POV
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it is a middle of the road novel. but then goes into a crawl. for the last 10 chapters not a single day has passed or plot based thing. instead it is replaced by commentary. 10 chapter of commentary back to back
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The story had a lot of potential, but I lost all interest when the MC actually became evil. Karin had literally fallen in love with him, and then he decides to kill her to give birth to a Queen for his herd. A Queen with a personality I don't even want to bother with. The 'comedy' is extremely annoying as well. He hasn't been allowed to speak a complete sentence to anyone yet, except for Karin, as she was the only to care enough about him to actually bother listening.
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to many error from the start kurenai can go through tree and use pollen but she is no senju author humor is lame and he push it to much don't try
It is a cool concept and I was enjoying the story but whenever the mc is about to speak he is interrupted, it was funny the first couple of times but 20 chapters in mc hasn't finished a single sentence to his teammates. The only person he has had a full conversation with is his father and that was like 3 or 4 lines. I would've kept reading but the constant interruptions of the mc just turned me off the story
After 50 chapters i can tell you that the mc still didnt finish a phrase and that 8/10 of a chapter became just some words to increase the word count.No point in reading this.....
This story started strong but got tedious really fast it seems that the Mc is not trying to get stronger
waste of time the author had an idea that he executed terribly the personality of the protagonist is bland and stupid besides calling him a genius the system is very confusing and cannot be fully defined
Boring, tedious, no progress, no development... the author must find it funny how he writes the mc and their interactions, but it's not, not at all.it's so horrible that you just feel anger and frustration, I don't recommend this useless garbage to anyone, don't waste your time, just look at the comments.
Great concept Bad execution Should’ve written village building style instead of the typical Naruto stuff
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Usually i dun rate novels when they are bad but i had to with this one. The author somehow managed to make the MC very very unlikeable, he seems to be off the charts beta male.
I will give five stars just because the Mc is using bug and you showed love for shino
This story has shino and I at chap 5 and the development is not slow or fast, it's at a moderate pace and recommend you give it try rather than listening to random people on the internet.
Hum... The story is quite entertaining and interesting, there are few times I found an mc with an Aburame background, but that's details. The only thing that seemed bad and stressful to me was that they interrupted the mc when speaking... What a stress.
I rarely did a review, but I had to for this one, such a good theme, a good character to be based on but author has to make the MC seem more insignificant than he was in the original serious type, so far MC has not been able to speak a complete sentence without being interrupted by someone or something surreal, as everyone complains about it but author ignores it.
Dope story. Trash execution. Mc is a doormat. I’m not even sure if MC speaks a proper sentence the entire story. More annoying then anything really. Cool idea though.
So the protagonist reincarnates and can use bugs, but not really. First of all the protagonist lacks any background and his personality is unexplained, he is supposedly intelligent but instead come across as childish and his emotions are exaggerated. He allows others like his friends to disrespect him constantly calling him "Bug man" and say that his bugs are ugly despite his clan's respect for bugs, but doesn't do or say anything. The interactions are awkward and the details and explanations are way to dragged out to the point of tedium, especially when the protagonist's thoughts are poorly written, repeated many times or fail to make any sense. And then his 'Zerg Domnitor system' is a mess, apparently he gains a bloodline from this system which should have been an ability to better control bugs, not a bloodline itself, and it would have made more sense to gain bloodlines and abilities from the bugs. His bugs can evolve but how is that possible when he still has the original bugs? He claims that six months is too little time even though he can evolve his bugs in mere hours, and there's no explanation as to whether the new bugs that are bred have their genes evolve or if their Chakra can increase. And how can bugs use his own biomass after he eats food? The system becomes even more confusing when he mentions that "parasitic insects can help convert organic matters into biomass, but the insects themselves don't have a biomass storage. The drone has its own biomass storage and can be used autonomously to harvest resources." Then it follows some weird Starcraft logic where everything revolves around a Zerg, and where he starts sacrificing bugs and biomass to create a drone bug, structures, and hatcheries, withoit clear explanation. Then his drone bug takes the route of "Once I revert to an egg, I must bury myself underground for three years. There my form matures" and starts digging in the middle of the village.
Would be 5 times better without the instant "DOMINATIOOOON!" mentality. Classmates? How can they help my journey to ma dominance. Emotional feelings? Gosh why did I have to be Isekaid which such an impediment to power. Then dominance system this, dominance system that. I was cringing so d*mn hard when his goal was "Become the strongest shinobi he can be. No, become EVEN stronger and step outside of the shinobi system to be a true Dominatooooor!"...
nice that our Bug Boy get some attention. always thought he was cool 😎 🪲 The story is good and is neither too slow nor too fast. the characters are portrayed convincingly as in the original and have good dialodes. You should definitely give the story a chance criticism (small spoilers) the only bad thing is the system itself. it would be better if it wasn't in the story. it just solves all his problems instantly and makes it feel like it's doing all the work. he immediately realizes that the system can do anything and he can't make mistakes like losing control. and in the later chapters where the system suddenly has a woman's voice and actively talks to him, it's just cringe how he suddenly wants to be called master, for example. I know as a writer it's easy to show character advances and improvements but it just doesn't feel like Naruto anymore because of this system junk it just doesn't fit in the world. is better if he works hard to improve himself and without systems. The fact that he is often interrupted was really funny at the beginning. but when that happens with every sentence after 20 chapters, it really gets on your nerves. That he knows the Naruto plot is a bit cliché. almost everyone does in their fan fics. hope he doesn't know everything that happens in and forgets almost everything in the course of time, butterfly effect or not, he practically knows the future My honest opinion for the authors would be to rewrite the story but without a system. That would improve the story by far. Hope the review helps and we see more from you author.
shino nem consegue terminar uma frase até o final, bem diferente o personagem principal não ter tanto poder de falar, apenas pensamentos, o coisa do zag, ainda não mostrou muitos resultados alem da base subterrânea, ele contuma ficar sonhando com o futuro, no fim um leitura boa sem muito acontecendo
I like this fanfic. Steady to become powerfull. Also there is a little bit comedic lines that made me chuckles 😃. Keep it up Author
This fanfic is about Kiba telling how Shiro's insects are disgusting. He does this 3 times every chapter.
~~ As of Chapter Zero ~~ Nice I really like shino never ran into a fiction with or his clan really. only one I ran into with his clan was the mosquito with a main character had mosquitoes in his body and was kicked out of the clan it was actually pretty funny novel but I haven't seen it update recently anyway this is just a review placeholder what's actually start reading I'll update this review ~~ As of Chapter Zero ~~
It's good story, with nice character development that is true ro mc character Its clearly written with assistance of ai, which isnd bad thing but some descriptions are too mouthfull. Read with caution.
I tried to push through but i can't. Author keeps devaluing Mc. Author's writing style is also not suitable as this is a fanfic and not some profound original paperback novel. 1 chapter is full of definition and observation with little content or story progression
Pure and hard "Plot Armor", not recommended... The beginning is entertaining, but the plot slowly becomes bland and more and more "Plot Armor" appears, to the point of being repulsive...
Its a meandering mess of a story with hardly any interactions between characters, like 90% of the story is the mc talking to himself or just descriptions and repetitions of things happening or stuff we already know Getting explained again and again. He also doesnt change anything so its basically just the plot of naruto from another POV
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it is a middle of the road novel. but then goes into a crawl. for the last 10 chapters not a single day has passed or plot based thing. instead it is replaced by commentary. 10 chapter of commentary back to back
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The story had a lot of potential, but I lost all interest when the MC actually became evil. Karin had literally fallen in love with him, and then he decides to kill her to give birth to a Queen for his herd. A Queen with a personality I don't even want to bother with. The 'comedy' is extremely annoying as well. He hasn't been allowed to speak a complete sentence to anyone yet, except for Karin, as she was the only to care enough about him to actually bother listening.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ to many error from the start kurenai can go through tree and use pollen but she is no senju author humor is lame and he push it to much don't try
It is a cool concept and I was enjoying the story but whenever the mc is about to speak he is interrupted, it was funny the first couple of times but 20 chapters in mc hasn't finished a single sentence to his teammates. The only person he has had a full conversation with is his father and that was like 3 or 4 lines. I would've kept reading but the constant interruptions of the mc just turned me off the story
After 50 chapters i can tell you that the mc still didnt finish a phrase and that 8/10 of a chapter became just some words to increase the word count.No point in reading this.....
This story started strong but got tedious really fast it seems that the Mc is not trying to get stronger
waste of time the author had an idea that he executed terribly the personality of the protagonist is bland and stupid besides calling him a genius the system is very confusing and cannot be fully defined
Boring, tedious, no progress, no development... the author must find it funny how he writes the mc and their interactions, but it's not, not at all.it's so horrible that you just feel anger and frustration, I don't recommend this useless garbage to anyone, don't waste your time, just look at the comments.
Great concept Bad execution Should’ve written village building style instead of the typical Naruto stuff
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Usually i dun rate novels when they are bad but i had to with this one. The author somehow managed to make the MC very very unlikeable, he seems to be off the charts beta male.
I will give five stars just because the Mc is using bug and you showed love for shino
This story has shino and I at chap 5 and the development is not slow or fast, it's at a moderate pace and recommend you give it try rather than listening to random people on the internet.
Hum... The story is quite entertaining and interesting, there are few times I found an mc with an Aburame background, but that's details. The only thing that seemed bad and stressful to me was that they interrupted the mc when speaking... What a stress.
I rarely did a review, but I had to for this one, such a good theme, a good character to be based on but author has to make the MC seem more insignificant than he was in the original serious type, so far MC has not been able to speak a complete sentence without being interrupted by someone or something surreal, as everyone complains about it but author ignores it.
Dope story. Trash execution. Mc is a doormat. I’m not even sure if MC speaks a proper sentence the entire story. More annoying then anything really. Cool idea though.
So the protagonist reincarnates and can use bugs, but not really. First of all the protagonist lacks any background and his personality is unexplained, he is supposedly intelligent but instead come across as childish and his emotions are exaggerated. He allows others like his friends to disrespect him constantly calling him "Bug man" and say that his bugs are ugly despite his clan's respect for bugs, but doesn't do or say anything. The interactions are awkward and the details and explanations are way to dragged out to the point of tedium, especially when the protagonist's thoughts are poorly written, repeated many times or fail to make any sense. And then his 'Zerg Domnitor system' is a mess, apparently he gains a bloodline from this system which should have been an ability to better control bugs, not a bloodline itself, and it would have made more sense to gain bloodlines and abilities from the bugs. His bugs can evolve but how is that possible when he still has the original bugs? He claims that six months is too little time even though he can evolve his bugs in mere hours, and there's no explanation as to whether the new bugs that are bred have their genes evolve or if their Chakra can increase. And how can bugs use his own biomass after he eats food? The system becomes even more confusing when he mentions that "parasitic insects can help convert organic matters into biomass, but the insects themselves don't have a biomass storage. The drone has its own biomass storage and can be used autonomously to harvest resources." Then it follows some weird Starcraft logic where everything revolves around a Zerg, and where he starts sacrificing bugs and biomass to create a drone bug, structures, and hatcheries, withoit clear explanation. Then his drone bug takes the route of "Once I revert to an egg, I must bury myself underground for three years. There my form matures" and starts digging in the middle of the village.
Would be 5 times better without the instant "DOMINATIOOOON!" mentality. Classmates? How can they help my journey to ma dominance. Emotional feelings? Gosh why did I have to be Isekaid which such an impediment to power. Then dominance system this, dominance system that. I was cringing so d*mn hard when his goal was "Become the strongest shinobi he can be. No, become EVEN stronger and step outside of the shinobi system to be a true Dominatooooor!"...
nice that our Bug Boy get some attention. always thought he was cool 😎 🪲 The story is good and is neither too slow nor too fast. the characters are portrayed convincingly as in the original and have good dialodes. You should definitely give the story a chance criticism (small spoilers) the only bad thing is the system itself. it would be better if it wasn't in the story. it just solves all his problems instantly and makes it feel like it's doing all the work. he immediately realizes that the system can do anything and he can't make mistakes like losing control. and in the later chapters where the system suddenly has a woman's voice and actively talks to him, it's just cringe how he suddenly wants to be called master, for example. I know as a writer it's easy to show character advances and improvements but it just doesn't feel like Naruto anymore because of this system junk it just doesn't fit in the world. is better if he works hard to improve himself and without systems. The fact that he is often interrupted was really funny at the beginning. but when that happens with every sentence after 20 chapters, it really gets on your nerves. That he knows the Naruto plot is a bit cliché. almost everyone does in their fan fics. hope he doesn't know everything that happens in and forgets almost everything in the course of time, butterfly effect or not, he practically knows the future My honest opinion for the authors would be to rewrite the story but without a system. That would improve the story by far. Hope the review helps and we see more from you author.
shino nem consegue terminar uma frase até o final, bem diferente o personagem principal não ter tanto poder de falar, apenas pensamentos, o coisa do zag, ainda não mostrou muitos resultados alem da base subterrânea, ele contuma ficar sonhando com o futuro, no fim um leitura boa sem muito acontecendo
I like this fanfic. Steady to become powerfull. Also there is a little bit comedic lines that made me chuckles 😃. Keep it up Author
This fanfic is about Kiba telling how Shiro's insects are disgusting. He does this 3 times every chapter.
~~ As of Chapter Zero ~~ Nice I really like shino never ran into a fiction with or his clan really. only one I ran into with his clan was the mosquito with a main character had mosquitoes in his body and was kicked out of the clan it was actually pretty funny novel but I haven't seen it update recently anyway this is just a review placeholder what's actually start reading I'll update this review ~~ As of Chapter Zero ~~
It's good story, with nice character development that is true ro mc character Its clearly written with assistance of ai, which isnd bad thing but some descriptions are too mouthfull. Read with caution.