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Shameless author here :) Writing a review for your own book is not easy, so I'll just say a few things. Also, if you have any questions about the novel, you can leave them in the comments! "First of all, what is this book about?" "It's about a guy named Karna who lived a normal life on earth. but was forcefully summoned to another world. Yeah, the same old Isekai. Every reader of a webnovel must have read one or more Isekai novels in their life by now. What makes this one any different? Well, like the other ones, mine also has action, adventure, mind-blowing new creatures and monsters, world-building, a demon lord with a big army, dwarfs, elves, dragons, etc. I even have eight heroes. What more do you want, man? Harem? Romance? I also have that prepared. And the differnce? That is giong to be revealed slowly so if you want know, then read it. ^_^ "Second, why should we read this?" "I've got to tell you, if you are checking this review, that means you already want to and just aren't sure of your choice yet. As a new writer, I can only request that you try my work." "Try reading, and if you like it, continue and also leave a review." "If you don't like it, then comment and try to tell me what you didn't like."
After reading six chapters, I can confidently say that this book is worth checking out. The characters are well-crafted and relatable, making it easy to get invested in their stories.One of the things that stood out to me was the quality of the writing. The author has done an excellent job with the word buildup, and I have yet to come across any grammatical errors. The writing quality is top-notch, and every scene is described in such detail that it creates a vivid picture in your mind.Overall, I believe this book has a lot of potentials and could become quite popular if the author continues to write in this manner. I highly recommend giving it a read if you're looking for an engaging and well-written webnovel book.
This is easily the best isekai i have ever read.The world building is amazing and the mc actually seems to be working hard for his power instead getting overpowered in less than 3 chapters.The story is very well written.I can not wait for the chapters
Using the story of moonled journey across another world and other Japanese isekai novels as a general inspiration this novel does a adequate job setting up its own story despite that because the author has sufficient writing skill.Unfortunately the author hasn't done well in turning the plot development more suited for visual mediums to novel form. Up to a certain point in the story does an excellent job knowing where to point the camera and which characters to point it at but the author vetoes starting from chapter 64 that introducing side characters that he lacks the writing flair to make immediately interesting compared to a visual medium. There is also a deep contradiction when it comes to creating that initial investment in these characters. The main character himself is hostile or wants to avoid them entirely. It makes me feel making such an investment of interest is pointless or more likely suggests a chain of future events forcing the maelstrom of things happening against his will or with a convoluted resolve. Leaning on the humans versus Demons thing is fine but I feel the author took the wrong approach with the main character he created. The characterisation of the main character is more suited to a war of shadows and corruptions whilst the author chose to make it a war of blood and terror. I find it a shame the novel couldn't live up its full potential because of these circumstances but I actively looked forward to the author's next novel because he is a good writer but shackled himself to his inspirations dragging down his novel.TL;DR Author-san stop reading isekai manga and read more webnovels.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
I’ve read 9 chapters and literally nothing has happened. Just a whole bunch of talking.
So far it's really good, the mc is also different than usual. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
It's refreshing to see an Indian-themed story, the writing is above average and easy to read. I read the first chapter and kept going. Keep up the good work author kun
Excellent world building, everything is explained well and doesn't feel like an info dump. The story is easy to follow and adds some touches to the genre that make it more unique.
I don’t normally read novels (isekai) like this as this isn’t exactly my cup of tea. However, so far, I like the main character Karna and the way he’s written.
I am still reading it .I like the character karna. But you need to take care of some grammer errors. Overall the story is good. Keep writing......
I don’t usually read novels like this but i thought it doesn’t look bad. So far, the mc karna seems sensible to me. I don’t found anything wrong with the characters, except writing errors. In most chapters I noticed you used comma instead of full-stop in some sentences. You also mostly used “he” while narrating what mc was doing. I don’t know if it was me, but the repeating words were kinda annoying. Overall I only read 5 chapters, so I can’t say much about the story. Hopefully the plot opens up in the future. This story does have potential. All the best author.
I am currently still reading this but I am loving it yeah many will say its kind of cliche but no worries no story is free of cliche but I like Karna in this novel the most not only because of his personality but also because of the world devouring system. My favorite thing in fiction is system. So author please continue it
Usually, I write my reviews basing myself on synopsis and the first chapter. In this case I read the second one too, because from the first one it could seem a normal slice of life without any fantasy element and the first chapter felt quite short. It being my first impression, I could edit it in the future. The writing quality seems to be over the average:I could catch some grammar errors but did not ruin substantially the fluency of the read. The psychological and external descriptions of the characters seems detailed. Hopefully in the future the update frequency will become daily. Finally, the world background seems a good mix between isekai and various mythologies. In the complex, the read is recommended to the fans of the genre. Keep it up author👍
The story so far is a bit cliché guy gets teleported, meets the goddess along with 8 other people. Told they will be heroes that will save the world. However MC wasn't suppose to be there and is forced into the world without his will. I will say I don't have any major problems so far with the story to me it is pretty good. My only problem was how the goddess went about dealing with the mc. Now the goddess did treat him in a very lax with just sending him to his death instead of personally doing it. I also found it weird how the goddess while did try to find out how the mc got there just kinda allowed it and brushed it off saying it was a mistake which doesn't make sense to me. There are a few other characters as well I have somewhat problems with but i'm to lazy to go read it again right now to fat check so I could be wrong about them. Overall I am enjoying the story and hope for more chapters.
Not bad so far kinda interested to see where it goes. Especially like the fact the MC feels different and not just the generic sort you see in alot of novels. Either way keep it up and good luck homie!
Finally, a fantasy novel where an Indian transferred to another world. I like the setting of the world and looking forward for the challenges and adventure Karna is going to face in future.
So far its an amazing story with great world building, and although I have seen similar tropes in manga played out, I think there is enough twists to give itself its own fresh take. The writing is really well done and the character development, while having only just started, is progressing well. Keep up the good work!
Shameless author here :) Writing a review for your own book is not easy, so I'll just say a few things. Also, if you have any questions about the novel, you can leave them in the comments! "First of all, what is this book about?" "It's about a guy named Karna who lived a normal life on earth. but was forcefully summoned to another world. Yeah, the same old Isekai. Every reader of a webnovel must have read one or more Isekai novels in their life by now. What makes this one any different? Well, like the other ones, mine also has action, adventure, mind-blowing new creatures and monsters, world-building, a demon lord with a big army, dwarfs, elves, dragons, etc. I even have eight heroes. What more do you want, man? Harem? Romance? I also have that prepared. And the differnce? That is giong to be revealed slowly so if you want know, then read it. ^_^ "Second, why should we read this?" "I've got to tell you, if you are checking this review, that means you already want to and just aren't sure of your choice yet. As a new writer, I can only request that you try my work." "Try reading, and if you like it, continue and also leave a review." "If you don't like it, then comment and try to tell me what you didn't like."
After reading six chapters, I can confidently say that this book is worth checking out. The characters are well-crafted and relatable, making it easy to get invested in their stories.One of the things that stood out to me was the quality of the writing. The author has done an excellent job with the word buildup, and I have yet to come across any grammatical errors. The writing quality is top-notch, and every scene is described in such detail that it creates a vivid picture in your mind.Overall, I believe this book has a lot of potentials and could become quite popular if the author continues to write in this manner. I highly recommend giving it a read if you're looking for an engaging and well-written webnovel book.
This is easily the best isekai i have ever read.The world building is amazing and the mc actually seems to be working hard for his power instead getting overpowered in less than 3 chapters.The story is very well written.I can not wait for the chapters
Using the story of moonled journey across another world and other Japanese isekai novels as a general inspiration this novel does a adequate job setting up its own story despite that because the author has sufficient writing skill.Unfortunately the author hasn't done well in turning the plot development more suited for visual mediums to novel form. Up to a certain point in the story does an excellent job knowing where to point the camera and which characters to point it at but the author vetoes starting from chapter 64 that introducing side characters that he lacks the writing flair to make immediately interesting compared to a visual medium. There is also a deep contradiction when it comes to creating that initial investment in these characters. The main character himself is hostile or wants to avoid them entirely. It makes me feel making such an investment of interest is pointless or more likely suggests a chain of future events forcing the maelstrom of things happening against his will or with a convoluted resolve. Leaning on the humans versus Demons thing is fine but I feel the author took the wrong approach with the main character he created. The characterisation of the main character is more suited to a war of shadows and corruptions whilst the author chose to make it a war of blood and terror. I find it a shame the novel couldn't live up its full potential because of these circumstances but I actively looked forward to the author's next novel because he is a good writer but shackled himself to his inspirations dragging down his novel.TL;DR Author-san stop reading isekai manga and read more webnovels.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I’ve read 9 chapters and literally nothing has happened. Just a whole bunch of talking.
So far it's really good, the mc is also different than usual. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
It's refreshing to see an Indian-themed story, the writing is above average and easy to read. I read the first chapter and kept going. Keep up the good work author kun
Excellent world building, everything is explained well and doesn't feel like an info dump. The story is easy to follow and adds some touches to the genre that make it more unique.
I don’t normally read novels (isekai) like this as this isn’t exactly my cup of tea. However, so far, I like the main character Karna and the way he’s written.
I am still reading it .I like the character karna. But you need to take care of some grammer errors. Overall the story is good. Keep writing......
I don’t usually read novels like this but i thought it doesn’t look bad. So far, the mc karna seems sensible to me. I don’t found anything wrong with the characters, except writing errors. In most chapters I noticed you used comma instead of full-stop in some sentences. You also mostly used “he” while narrating what mc was doing. I don’t know if it was me, but the repeating words were kinda annoying. Overall I only read 5 chapters, so I can’t say much about the story. Hopefully the plot opens up in the future. This story does have potential. All the best author.
I am currently still reading this but I am loving it yeah many will say its kind of cliche but no worries no story is free of cliche but I like Karna in this novel the most not only because of his personality but also because of the world devouring system. My favorite thing in fiction is system. So author please continue it
Usually, I write my reviews basing myself on synopsis and the first chapter. In this case I read the second one too, because from the first one it could seem a normal slice of life without any fantasy element and the first chapter felt quite short. It being my first impression, I could edit it in the future. The writing quality seems to be over the average:I could catch some grammar errors but did not ruin substantially the fluency of the read. The psychological and external descriptions of the characters seems detailed. Hopefully in the future the update frequency will become daily. Finally, the world background seems a good mix between isekai and various mythologies. In the complex, the read is recommended to the fans of the genre. Keep it up author👍
The story so far is a bit cliché guy gets teleported, meets the goddess along with 8 other people. Told they will be heroes that will save the world. However MC wasn't suppose to be there and is forced into the world without his will. I will say I don't have any major problems so far with the story to me it is pretty good. My only problem was how the goddess went about dealing with the mc. Now the goddess did treat him in a very lax with just sending him to his death instead of personally doing it. I also found it weird how the goddess while did try to find out how the mc got there just kinda allowed it and brushed it off saying it was a mistake which doesn't make sense to me. There are a few other characters as well I have somewhat problems with but i'm to lazy to go read it again right now to fat check so I could be wrong about them. Overall I am enjoying the story and hope for more chapters.
Not bad so far kinda interested to see where it goes. Especially like the fact the MC feels different and not just the generic sort you see in alot of novels. Either way keep it up and good luck homie!
Finally, a fantasy novel where an Indian transferred to another world. I like the setting of the world and looking forward for the challenges and adventure Karna is going to face in future.
So far its an amazing story with great world building, and although I have seen similar tropes in manga played out, I think there is enough twists to give itself its own fresh take. The writing is really well done and the character development, while having only just started, is progressing well. Keep up the good work!