1รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
แบ่งปันความคิดของคุณกับผู้อื่น
เขียนรีวิว
LV 10 ![Badge]()
So far so good I guess, a bit lost in world building, but it's in the early stages so stick with it. Although if I can say that the choice of the mc is wrong, are you really thinking that someone with psychological and emotional problems, who committed suicide, will need courage and the will to follow the path of power... It is ridiculous and it should be noted that I laughed a lot thinking about a mc like that. I would like them to explain why the mc looks like someone without the information, when they gave it to him and I'm not talking about the questions that I know that he doesn't remember those answers.
So far so good I guess, a bit lost in world building, but it's in the early stages so stick with it. Although if I can say that the choice of the mc is wrong, are you really thinking that someone with psychological and emotional problems, who committed suicide, will need courage and the will to follow the path of power... It is ridiculous and it should be noted that I laughed a lot thinking about a mc like that. I would like them to explain why the mc looks like someone without the information, when they gave it to him and I'm not talking about the questions that I know that he doesn't remember those answers.