A Hollow in DC and Beyond.

LV 4

mow

Disappointing read, its your typical human thats reincarnated into a non human being that wants to go back to being as human as possible and return to society. Ends up joining the Young justice and thats as far as i got. Also it seems like the author doesn't really research much on the stuff he's writing and im talking about how hollows evolve/work. He's just a Vasto Lord but somehow looks human, lost most of his mask when turning into a vasto lord annd the hole in his chest also filled up, even Arrancars which are above Vasto lords in term of evolution line have it but oh well.

LV 4

TheMotherLand

The grammar is atrocious. Author doesn’t understand the difference between a Vasto Lorde and an Arrancar. Mc doesn’t have a hollow hole, like bruh even Arrancars and Vasto Lordes have it, why did you remove it without an explanation? In conclusion, mc is a human race simp monster main character who right after evolving into a “Vasto Lorde” as authors refers to it, which he is not. He is an Arrancar. Immediately uses garganta to rush to Earth. As soon he arrived at Earth he decides to look for Superman so he could get help getting an object which allow him to walk amongst humans.

LV 5

Alien_Space_Bat

The Biggest problem is Authors really aren't sure with powerlevels..........like sometimes MC could slaughter demons and great demons as a hollow and now struggles against peak humans and enhanced as a vasto lorde......how is that even possible.

LV 5

Monsterb620

It’s just another Young Justice fanfic. The description made me think it would be cool and unique, but as stated previously. Its just a young Justice fanfic with meh writing quality and a si hollow.

LV 4

Dissapointed_One

Not a good book. 5 star reviewers never read anything before this i guess. Most of info on powers are wrong making MC weaker grammar is chinese translation level and the beginning is trash.

LV 3

Yassine_5947

if you are a bleach fan just don't read this

LV 14

Darnelljoe

Grammar makes me want to splatter my brain matter with a 12-gauge shotgun. .

LV 14

NotSoBigShlong

First two chapters looked promising then it went completely downhill. Typical Young Justice fic that giga boys over Batman without having anything in common with a Hollow except the power package

LV 13

Baldysalino

honestly doesn't deserve anything higher than a 3-star. the grammar is not good, the characters are quite bland, and the storytelling is on speed mode. its quite clearly the work of a beginner

LV 4

pervy_sloth

pretty good so far, hopefully author doesn't ruin it with a harem...........................................................................

LV 14

ItsDragonking

This story dose not make any sense peapol with no power can see him

LV 14

garrett_switzer

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LV 1

SLevel1_Sl1

OMG!!!!!!!!!! Author you f***d Bleach and put it into a grinder then inside a woodchipper. Grammar is lol gave me a migraine and maybe some amnesia. Use ms word or Grammarly to fix them.

LV 4

S1LV3RS

It is one of the coolest Idea i have ever encounter in the fanfiction community. And you sir definitely dont have it... I thought this would be one of the gold bearers of fanfic section of this site... I guess not... Well in your defense you didnt really take this seriously and its not even your main focus... So meh

LV 14

DarkDemon_KING

really uninteresting and kind of a disappointment

LV 4

Azathoth2

°✓✓✓ is this a harem...?

LV 14

Micra_L

Absolutely disappointing. Author never put effort on the mc and just kept moving quickly to the next arc.

LV 1

TheCartoonist

this fanfic isn't that good, the author clearly doesn't know what a vastolorde is, the mc has a clear lack of a mask and no hole, what's left of his mask is a crown like structure and only arrancars have a small portion of a mask and are pretty much human but here the author says the mc is a vastolorde when he looks human with only a bit of mask and no hole which are all things that define an arrancar(except the hole, arrancars still have holes), the writing quality is subpar. If the author fixed the hollow issue and the writing quality this would be a little better, this is a ok read if you have nothing else to read.

LV 3

Zeroz7

no suelo hacer criticas tan basura, pero la historia es igual de basura asi que nada que hacer. El hollow en el titulo es de adorno, el mc es un princeso sensible y muy inocente en eso, fin

LV 14

Rad_Reader

I haven’t really watched/read bleach but I already know from reading all the comments that this story is factual incorrect and the mc is very bland no redeeming qualities