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3.92
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the best Naruto fanfic i have ever read please mr. author keep on updating it, I am loving this👍👍
This was a very good fanfic, that's why I rate it 3/5, the reason is very simple. Author didn't like where the story was going so he killed mc and reincarnated him in different world. Mc can reincarnate - that means he can't really be killed. This was supposed to be only naruto ff and author dropped this ff... So I'm generous with my review. P. S. i'm waiting for your new fic :)
the forced death is trash and made this ff useless to read, since he really wont die then there's no reason to read this and he will easily become a god since he cant die
Это было хорошо, по началу... Но потом парень умер ОПЯТЬ. Вы издеваетесь... вселенная марвел? Что за фигня, зачем тогда я тратил время раньше? Что за тупое развитие событий. Если бы эпоха воюющих государств была настолько кровавой кланов бы не осталось совсем, по причине их смерти!
It's mostly good so far, but there are a problems. 1 The mc likes to state the obvious. Like, obviously training is something very beneficial to you. Duh. It's really annoying. 2 Some actions, reactions and background of the mc ruin the suspension of disbelief. It's like a badly designed robot imitating a human. Perhaps the dialogue is better than the monologue, but I haven't read enough to make a conclusion. Not everything has to be spelled out for us. We can infer some things from his actions, no need to specifically describe everything.
it was literally amazing at first. then the dude died again. i wasted my time reading this. i have wasting my time.
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Unknowingly, I had read it completely. you have to read it. very organized detail and flow. when you start to get a little tired of reading it, new things will come.
I like it I wonder why there are so few chapters? interesting start. I hope the author does not spoil anything. I like it I wonder why there are so few chapters? interesting start. I hope the author does not spoil anything.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Continuing the tradition of an author shamelessly giving himself a 5 star review, but in all honesty i think it deserve it.
the best Naruto fanfic i have ever read please mr. author keep on updating it, I am loving this👍👍
This was a very good fanfic, that's why I rate it 3/5, the reason is very simple. Author didn't like where the story was going so he killed mc and reincarnated him in different world. Mc can reincarnate - that means he can't really be killed. This was supposed to be only naruto ff and author dropped this ff... So I'm generous with my review. P. S. i'm waiting for your new fic :)
the forced death is trash and made this ff useless to read, since he really wont die then there's no reason to read this and he will easily become a god since he cant die
Это было хорошо, по началу... Но потом парень умер ОПЯТЬ. Вы издеваетесь... вселенная марвел? Что за фигня, зачем тогда я тратил время раньше? Что за тупое развитие событий. Если бы эпоха воюющих государств была настолько кровавой кланов бы не осталось совсем, по причине их смерти!
It's mostly good so far, but there are a problems. 1 The mc likes to state the obvious. Like, obviously training is something very beneficial to you. Duh. It's really annoying. 2 Some actions, reactions and background of the mc ruin the suspension of disbelief. It's like a badly designed robot imitating a human. Perhaps the dialogue is better than the monologue, but I haven't read enough to make a conclusion. Not everything has to be spelled out for us. We can infer some things from his actions, no need to specifically describe everything.
it was literally amazing at first. then the dude died again. i wasted my time reading this. i have wasting my time.
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U must try ..........,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,..,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.
Unknowingly, I had read it completely. you have to read it. very organized detail and flow. when you start to get a little tired of reading it, new things will come.
I like it I wonder why there are so few chapters? interesting start. I hope the author does not spoil anything. I like it I wonder why there are so few chapters? interesting start. I hope the author does not spoil anything.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Continuing the tradition of an author shamelessly giving himself a 5 star review, but in all honesty i think it deserve it.