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Ça fait 2 ans que je cherche une bonne fanfiction sur le docteur Manhattan ne me déçois pas... Par contre attention au prénom "Bruce" ça veut dire qu'il est Bruce Wayne ? enfin je vais bien voir
It's refreshing to see a take on someone getting op powers without the edginess or neutral evil BS. I greatly enjoyed the first three chapters and I'm definitely excited for more. Keep up the good work author 👍.
can you make more chapters this fanfic is so good[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is extremely interesting. Always wanted to see a God with actual human feelings and morals in DC especiall Dr.Manhattan. Man I just hope u cotinue this story
The writing quality is good with few mistakes… carbon dioxide is CO2, not C2O, that was typed multiple times for example. A small mistake that most readers will know what was meant. Updates occur often at this point since the story is early.story and character development are both a little rushed and needs more, still early of course. Making the MC as powerful as he is so early will severely hurt the story as time goes on. There is not much to say about the world background yet as nothing has happened yet needing good descriptions. For now an ok story that just needs a little more planning and content.
Hope this story keeps going cause its an idea alot have thought but no one has implemented....................................................
seems as if the author dropped the fanfic 😞😞😞. it's a pity I truly enjoyed it
Ça fait 2 ans que je cherche une bonne fanfiction sur le docteur Manhattan ne me déçois pas... Par contre attention au prénom "Bruce" ça veut dire qu'il est Bruce Wayne ? enfin je vais bien voir
It's refreshing to see a take on someone getting op powers without the edginess or neutral evil BS. I greatly enjoyed the first three chapters and I'm definitely excited for more. Keep up the good work author 👍.
can you make more chapters this fanfic is so good[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is extremely interesting. Always wanted to see a God with actual human feelings and morals in DC especiall Dr.Manhattan. Man I just hope u cotinue this story
The writing quality is good with few mistakes… carbon dioxide is CO2, not C2O, that was typed multiple times for example. A small mistake that most readers will know what was meant. Updates occur often at this point since the story is early.story and character development are both a little rushed and needs more, still early of course. Making the MC as powerful as he is so early will severely hurt the story as time goes on. There is not much to say about the world background yet as nothing has happened yet needing good descriptions. For now an ok story that just needs a little more planning and content.
Hope this story keeps going cause its an idea alot have thought but no one has implemented....................................................
seems as if the author dropped the fanfic 😞😞😞. it's a pity I truly enjoyed it