This is one of the highest quality translations of a chinese fic. This chapter was great too with that satisfying conclusion.
TL: Was my translation up to par?
Book&Literature · Iceswallowcome
I've misjudged you old man.
"When I cast you out three years ago, I was prepared for you to hate me forever. If you want to achieve great things, you can't let sentimentality hold you back."
Book&Literature · Iceswallowcome
What I don't understand is how Dorne can afford to break the king's peace without any repercussions. Maybe it gets addressed later on or I missed an explanation.
Falcon isn't wrong considering the Mc is planning to put Cottonmouth and Morgan six feet under. Though anything can happen and maybe the Mc can avoid drifting towards the anti hero route.
"Yeah." Colleen answered. "Harlem aside, New York at large faces new threats every other day. You are new to the scene but any disruption to the dynamic in a huge cause of worry. Falcon thought you might be chasing after fame and thus wouldn't care of the path you would take. He was probably worried that you might be going down the wrong path."
Anime & Comics · Drifting_Embers
It doesn't quite roll off the tongue but maybe it'll grow on me.
Thinking about it in retrospect, choosing Aevitas as my name probably wasn't a good idea. I had to stop myself from cringing when I mentioned it to the two women. They clearly had no idea of the meaning behind the name, but they accepted my designation and asked me to follow them.
Anime & Comics · Drifting_Embers
This is a really entertaining start, I like the start and how he is steadily gaining powers.
My boy Enzo will become a powerhouse in no time. He's my favorite crew member so far.
"Master! Master! Teach me!" Enzo could no longer contain its excitement. Its eyes sparkled with eagerness as it hopped toward Ron, its enthusiasm almost tangible.
Anime & Comics · ElvenKing20
It's so satisfying seeing the Witcher order coming together.
An age of exploration would be cool since Witcher stories take place on only one continent. Apparently the books hint at other lands across the vast sea.
Wayne envisioned expanding maritime trade and possibly initiating an age of exploration. Such an achievement would not only transform commerce but also cement the Wayne Chamber of Commerce as a dominant force in the Northern Realms.
Book&Literature · LIl_wretch
This is a wonderful translation that you did, I enjoyed this story and binged it pretty quickly. I wasn't quite satisfied with how abrupt the ending was. I'd have liked the ending to be spread across 5-10 chapters. Considering the unfinished source material I can't blame the fic though.
Game of Thrones: Lord of the Flames
Book&Literature · Iceswallowcome