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One Piece: Becoming the strongest pirate (COMPLETED)

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An ordinary person from earth gets transmigrated into One Piece world. He wakes up in an uninhabited unknown island in east blue.
Follow his struggle as he tries to survive in this cruel world and become the strongest pirate.

(MC is not Ace)

Disclaimer: I do not own one piece or any of its characters and I also do not own the cover image.

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Zikiziki

Pretty solid One Piece fanfic right here. The story feels very rushed and I say it as both a good thing and a bad thing. I read several very good One Piece fanfics where MC gathers his crew slowly and the story drags on. And they never get anywhere since at the pace they are going, it would take 500-700 chapters to finish. Meanwhile here, MC is doing the speed run, while also having much important time skips. And so even though there are only 80 chapters out right now, the story already went quite a distance. There is no as much detail put into everything but nonetheless, it's a good story and the next time I look up this bookmark, I can expect to find it finished. A finished One Piece fanfic? I read only two, so i look forward to reading the third. Regardless back to this. We have good MC, lots of good OCs and lots of good fights. The story feels rushed but because of that, it never drags on and feels boring. The beginning is still normal, with author developing his MC and main crew but at some point, he steps on the pedal and it's go go go. Since it's like this just enjoy the rocket speed ride.

1yr
ดู 16 การตอบกลับ
Theodoric_Jager

Truly, there is not many Fan-Fictions here that are like this one. I could probably name a few in one hand. Firstly, the writing is superb, I couldn't find a single grammatical mistake which made me pause and reread the sentence. Secondly, there is a great amount of OCs, more than I expected, and the way the characters all have a set of personality the author built for them. It is fantastic. Lastly, the story keeps you on edge, I mean it make you excited for the next chapter. Fight after fight, battle after battle, so much things happening it is amazing.

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1yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Yoshio_YU

Very good fanfic I've been looking for good fics to be able to read but they've all been very weird but yours has impressed me because it's not like the others who just reincarnated and already had the power of god with them, I like the way you developed to the different characters and how you paid to tell us about each past of the characters, so I congratulate you and continue with the fanfic that is brutal

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Captain_Erebus

Hi there! I am the authour of this one piece fan fiction. I hope you enjoy reading the story. Please leave a review and tell me your opinion about it.

2yr
ดู 13 การตอบกลับ
asdasdssf

I have only read couple chapters but unfortunately story is already just totally ridiculous. For one, mc doesn't have name, secondly he just suddenly learnt Tekkai without any actual training or instruction. Athor is applying classic logic of seeing something done in manga or whatnot and somehow that translates to them being able to learn it. Is he going to build iPhone next? :D I mean soru is relatively simple, even though training it is probably really hard without correct methods, but stuff like tekkai would definitely need proper detailed training. If these were so easy to copy, they would already be spread everywhere.

1yr
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
lindre
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A very one dimensional fast paced boring fanfiction. A one piece fanfiction needs to be more than just sailing from one island to next, having sudden powerups and long narrated fights. It needs elements of kingdom building, information gathering, building alliances, weakening the opponent before the actual fight, betrayals.

1yr
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Shivam_Thakur_1883

without cheat its just plain and boring typical one piece story where mc is another luffy who get crew fight stronger opponent and grow stronger with plot armer... nothing new its same story with decent mc

1yr
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
GENGHIS_KHAN

Pls stop using all caps. It just makes the mc and all other characters look stupid. Ekekjejekekeosbkuusbsukbskjbshkbskhvshkvskhvshksbkhsbkhsbkhsbkhsbhksbhksbhksbkhsbsbkhskbh

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
masbroindo

It's a Good fanfic. I really hope this one to continue until finished. Good job author. It's a Good fanfic. I really hope this one to continue until finished. Good job author.

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Thehighesthol1

A good fanfic, with a mc character suitable for that world he can kill without a doubt if it's his enemies.................................................................................................................................

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Sasa_Ihab

THIS IS THE BEST OP FF TO EXIST ......I HAVE FOUND IT !!!!!!!THE GREATEST OP FF IS REALLLLLLLLLL

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1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Pavlo_Kurachevskyy

Good fanfik. ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

1yr
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FF_AIM_BOT

really good. hope the author will complete the whole fanfic and don't just drop it.

1yr
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Kzk
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Pretty good fanfic, mc rational but sometimes go crazy in dangereous condition and mc not very smart just have standard intelegent but cauitous enough. Mc crew member also have good background to reveal in future

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
LimitlessKing

Well this was an absolutely different look to the Mera Mera no mi devil fruit. The character build up is quite steady and his partner too are well thought out though some episodes seem rushed but a great novel altogether.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ash_D_Born

perfect ending. Now we can concentrate on the Kid fanfic

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Eldesaparecido

Está historia de verdad te hace entender al personaje principal y el porque es como es no se guía solo del canon sino que da un cierre perfecto para alguien como ashen

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1yr
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Imt_Shaz

I have a doubt author ... will our Mc be able to use true potential of flame fruit??? after all magma highest temperature is around 2700 c but highest flame is 3300 c... in Canon... ace did not reach its full potential.... and it's a wrong statement to say flame temperature is less than magma.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
I_am_truck_kun

Absolutely love it. One of the best One Piece fanfics you can ever read the story is very exciting and the suspense is killing me. I didn't even realize that I caught up with the latest chapter.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
LGK_maore

in two days finished this gem until time-being released chapters wooooooow everything perfect

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Miracle_invoker_

Hâte de voir ce qu’il fera avec le mera-mera no mi. Hâte de voir les nouveaux Nakamas qu’il se fera sans l’histoire, les aventure mais surtout quand il va fracasser akainu, insha’Allah.

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1yr
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