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THIS IS THE RATING THAT THIS FANFIC DESERVES Ok, stability of updates is perfect, every day 1,2, or 3 chapters are posted... Mc is more like a side character, at first it's fast paced fanfic but slowly and surely mc is becoming interesting... And mc would get future skill of chloe but nerfed version of, atleast that's what author said, grammar is 4.. it isn't perfect but definitely above the average on webnovel.. MC also can be boring at times, but atleast he's not idiot..... he's more spectating type but i hope in future he would become more active...
Don't like gender bend and thank you for the warning and it's not like you are going to lose anything if I don't read it . . .
great story, plz don't drop. the writing is lower quality than normal but still easy to read. quite funny at times, and I think the author also has some character development.
so goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddfddddddddddddddddddso goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddfddddddddddddddddddso goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddfddddddddddddddddddso goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddfddddddddddddddddddso goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddfdddddddddddddddddd
very good, especially when she is ceasing to be a supporting character--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
the story is way too rushed, i am in chapter 15 and season 1 already ended, author-san just fly by the story without giving much detail about what is going on, if you have not seen the seven deadly sins you will NOT be able to understand the story
It’s actually not bad. You can improve on the grammar and try make each chapter longer, maybe 1k words per chapter. Any longer may be streching it.
Dont drop plsssss,I super duper love reincarnation gender bender stories and this book is the one of the few that I like,and btw if you can recommend gender bender stories that would be helpful,thnx
Firstly, the story is pretty nice to read with a realistic Mc who isn’t dumb. The interactions of Veldora/Chloe with the other characters are great but the real problem there is that there is too many tiny time skip which make the story confusing and very difficult to understand if you didn’t watch Sds. Also the grammar is pretty much trash which make the story difficult to read.
i give fair rating for this ff. Also i will give a Warning since the author did not mention it in the synopsis. The Mc is male and reincarnated or transmigrated as a woman. So it's not og character that got gender bender, but the mc.
I am very satisfied by your sacrifise, mortal. As a verified reviewer of the gods, I order you to continue and never stop as we read your writings for eternity in you limited lifespan. Dont Drop😈☠️
Grammar { 5} Updates{5}, one, two or three chapters , at day Story development{ 5} it's 70 same as canon, but as it's said in first chapter, mc is type of side and supportive character... Story development{ 5} mc does interacts with sins, his power is based on the huge difference in power levels, has 3000 power level, i1800 in strength double of Meliodas,, that clears , why he can beat opponents of 1,500 or 2,000 without experience, Character design{5} author tried, mc is type of observative person, he won't jump to save someone if he can't beat the enemy, has some martial arts, which also explains why he can fight , world background:{5}
This is my review, I hope it can help you author sama. : 1. There are some grammatical error that can be improved. Try using grammarly to improve it. 2. Will there be romance for the OC MC ?. I hope it is Yuri romance or at least normal romance when the OC MC in Veldora form. 3. Did this story will go to multiverse after Nanatsu no taizai plot end ? 4. This story need more character interaction, because this is Fanfic try to be creative when making the dialog between character. 5. Keep up the good work and please keep updating this story author sama. Thank you and please give us more chapter 🙏🏻.
2-3 chaps per day and u get my soul 🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛
THIS IS THE RATING THAT THIS FANFIC DESERVES Ok, stability of updates is perfect, every day 1,2, or 3 chapters are posted... Mc is more like a side character, at first it's fast paced fanfic but slowly and surely mc is becoming interesting... And mc would get future skill of chloe but nerfed version of, atleast that's what author said, grammar is 4.. it isn't perfect but definitely above the average on webnovel.. MC also can be boring at times, but atleast he's not idiot..... he's more spectating type but i hope in future he would become more active...
Don't like gender bend and thank you for the warning and it's not like you are going to lose anything if I don't read it . . .
great story, plz don't drop. the writing is lower quality than normal but still easy to read. quite funny at times, and I think the author also has some character development.
so goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddfddddddddddddddddddso goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddfddddddddddddddddddso goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddfddddddddddddddddddso goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddfddddddddddddddddddso goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddfdddddddddddddddddd
very good, especially when she is ceasing to be a supporting character--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
the story is way too rushed, i am in chapter 15 and season 1 already ended, author-san just fly by the story without giving much detail about what is going on, if you have not seen the seven deadly sins you will NOT be able to understand the story
It’s actually not bad. You can improve on the grammar and try make each chapter longer, maybe 1k words per chapter. Any longer may be streching it.
Dont drop plsssss,I super duper love reincarnation gender bender stories and this book is the one of the few that I like,and btw if you can recommend gender bender stories that would be helpful,thnx
Firstly, the story is pretty nice to read with a realistic Mc who isn’t dumb. The interactions of Veldora/Chloe with the other characters are great but the real problem there is that there is too many tiny time skip which make the story confusing and very difficult to understand if you didn’t watch Sds. Also the grammar is pretty much trash which make the story difficult to read.
i give fair rating for this ff. Also i will give a Warning since the author did not mention it in the synopsis. The Mc is male and reincarnated or transmigrated as a woman. So it's not og character that got gender bender, but the mc.
I am very satisfied by your sacrifise, mortal. As a verified reviewer of the gods, I order you to continue and never stop as we read your writings for eternity in you limited lifespan. Dont Drop😈☠️
Grammar { 5} Updates{5}, one, two or three chapters , at day Story development{ 5} it's 70 same as canon, but as it's said in first chapter, mc is type of side and supportive character... Story development{ 5} mc does interacts with sins, his power is based on the huge difference in power levels, has 3000 power level, i1800 in strength double of Meliodas,, that clears , why he can beat opponents of 1,500 or 2,000 without experience, Character design{5} author tried, mc is type of observative person, he won't jump to save someone if he can't beat the enemy, has some martial arts, which also explains why he can fight , world background:{5}
This is my review, I hope it can help you author sama. : 1. There are some grammatical error that can be improved. Try using grammarly to improve it. 2. Will there be romance for the OC MC ?. I hope it is Yuri romance or at least normal romance when the OC MC in Veldora form. 3. Did this story will go to multiverse after Nanatsu no taizai plot end ? 4. This story need more character interaction, because this is Fanfic try to be creative when making the dialog between character. 5. Keep up the good work and please keep updating this story author sama. Thank you and please give us more chapter 🙏🏻.
2-3 chaps per day and u get my soul 🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛