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I must say that it's definitely one of the best GOT fanfic I read in my whole life. It's well written, the character evolved and the author created backgrounds suitable with the original but not entirely based on that. He made his own inputs and is one of the only GOT fanfic writer who managed to make the reincarnated hero (Harry Potter) not become overpowered but still quite strong. The point is that he isn't the only strong person in this world. Harry has evolved and isn't just a naive, positive or negative character. He has insecurities but has learned to go against them. I gave 5 stars in background development due to the work on the story and background : even if it's a fanfic. The author made his own system, characters and gave them each his individuality. Thanks for this novel ! Please continue like that !
Not sure why I just simply dislike the idea of Harry Potter in game of thrones
decent story. both GoT fanfics of this author have terrible character growth catalyst events. very cliche and abrupt. a happy loving child goes full blown emo revenge monster after a tragic event. its cheesy and lazy writing. Now he's the cold pragmatic protagonist that shows no mercy to his enemies and stays neutral to everything except what benefits him. haha the same as every other MC on this app. Honestly other than that the story is amazing. grammar is great, the premise awesome, the kingdom building unique and entertaining. It falls short in character growth and overall just likeability of the MC. He went from positive, smart, charming, nice, and successful to.. well.. like every other MC you'll find above and below this story. you'll like the first 100 or so chapters though so id still give it a read and maybe you'll appreciate what I didn't.
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I AM ADDICTED TO THIS. It is great in every way, a must read compared to most GOT fanfics. sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
I like the idea of HP X GOT I just wentedto knew if you recreted hogward in Westerns? because to see doran(harry potter) as a teacher and a school Director + Founder of hogward should be fun. Anyway, thenks to you hard work
author did a good job capturing harry potter's character....insecure, needy, rash to jump into trouble, overly rigtheous, taking personal resposibily for all thing bad in the world, easily manipulated, lack of self confidence and clinging to every scrap of friend he can find no matter how bad they are or took advantage of him. im not being sarcastic, writing is good and author really make it seems like HP but the mc himself was never relatable or likable to me since my preteen years. i'd have personally rated 2.5 but +1.5 for author and i hope to see more from him with a better mc.
Just for the picture alone will give it 5⭐ he's hot.. I'll read this novel... .................... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Boooooommmmmm
Where the chapters 🤴 we waiting you to release something and tanx for all chapters and a good story ...............................................................
Very good quality when it comes to dialouge and grammar. I made it up until chat 37 until I had to drop it. For me it was incredibly slow and I think the author should've spent more time showing us how doran/harry thinks rather then him just watching tournaments for 20 chapters.
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Evaluation: Average WQ: With less to no mistake grammatical errors. Well thought and long chapters. 5/5 SD: With a slow to average pace development. In my humble opinion kickstart the plot progression or do timeskip as well so as to avoid plot holes & redundancy. (I dislike the narration chapters). 4/5 CD: MC/Harry is a bit lame and underplayed from what he is doing ever since. He is a reincarnated individual yet can't adapt wholly in the medieval era part. He is still the naive & kind boy from HP. 2/5 US: The stability of updates is quite qood. 5/5 WB: Not there yet as he hasn't started exploring the westeros & planetos as of the moment. 5/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
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قصة مذهلة اعجز عن وصفها ان لم تكن الافضل فهي من الافضل قرات بدايتها منذ مدة طويلة ولم اقراها لأن فيها شخصية هاري بوتر وادخالها في عالم لعبة العروش ولكن عندنا قراتها عرفت مالذي قد فاتني الفترة الزمنية شي اخر اول مرة أقرأ لعبة العروش في هذه الفترة الزمنية الحميع يريد ان ياتي مع الفترة الزمنية الاصلية ولايريد التغير لافهم مالفائدة من ذلك قمة الروعة عندما تجد قصة معحب ويوجد فيها تغير للافضل
A great story that was written well. I like and especially found the author's take on GoT fic and the timeline he picked as the start of the story to be very interesting. This was also my first time reading wherein the MC was born in Dorne so just that part is a plus for me. Would love to see more fight scenes though. But I do understand that the story is still on its building phase to pave way for important future narrative of the story so all of the mini arcs so far are all lacking combat especially army warfare ones is a given. I don't typically like stories that are a bit slow and starts with mc that is very young especially if there is a toddler and children arc but this story is one of the few exceptions. The pacing is just right, not too slow and not too fast to give more emphasis on Kingdom and World Building which I especially like. Overall, in my opinion at the time of writing this review that this is currently the best on-going Game of Thrones fic in Webnovel that isn't dropped or on a hiatus. Looking forward to more.
The story is so slow paced that you can literally skip to the end and nothing of importance would’ve happened, and surprisingly that got worse on the last few chapters that have been turned into lore dumps. And while the story is well written and the grammar is good, the chapters are painfully short and nothing of note ever happens, it’s like reading a slice of life in the GOT world without it actually being good. I would wait until there’s at least 100 to start reading this again cause at the pace we’re going right now that’s what it’ll take for the story to actually progress.
overall I'm loving the story, and while it's harder for me to see any Grammer mistakes or spelling due to me listening to it with he audio playback. it sounds pretty good. the last chapter really got me thinking about the world of plantetos and is starting to make me think about it in depth as to how and why certain events happened. I hope you keep going and can't wait for more
Honestly, im just randomly scrolling down some list of fan fic. And then found this story. Thank god. Relishing. Nice concept. Overall = ADDICTIVE. 👍👍👍👍
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Hey man dont now if its a hassle but can you upload your fanfic somewhere else? Royalroad ao3 scribblehub? New update on webnovel. Cant read on a browser anymore only that stupid app... If not i will not read on webnovel anymore had enought from this site. Hope you can would be sad otherwise.
I want to read this but the Author just introduces too many character too quickly by name and relation to one another, I have to put in the effort to memorize them so that I can keep up which is not worth it, after all, people read Fanfics to relax.
Uma boa historia, com uma boa discrição, as coisas fazem sentido, juntando tudo sai uma fanfic maravilhosa, recomendo para todos que gostam e procuram uma boa fanfic.
I absolutely love this story! I give your narration 5 stars all the way. I haven't found a HPxGOT Martell-centric xover better than this one so I hope to follow this story to its end (I hope we get there plz).
O how rare a good fanfic with stable updates. No egelord or psycho as prota just a good person so far. And halleluja no harem. Webnovel is as dry as a desert for those. Keep up the great writing i hope of more good time with your fanfic. 😁
Great in terms of writing and grammar, but, the pacing is terribly slow to the point i get bored reading because nothing is really happening.
Story just started, might be too soon for a full review but 15+ chapter and I can already say I'm excited to read more. Unique start for a game of thrones fanfic, a well written, detailed backstory for the MC thats still ongoing, and good grammar. Keep up the good work.
English is my third lenguague so apologizes for any grammar or typo mistake. Also please leave a review if you liked it. I will be posting at least 2 or 3 chapters every week.
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I must say that it's definitely one of the best GOT fanfic I read in my whole life. It's well written, the character evolved and the author created backgrounds suitable with the original but not entirely based on that. He made his own inputs and is one of the only GOT fanfic writer who managed to make the reincarnated hero (Harry Potter) not become overpowered but still quite strong. The point is that he isn't the only strong person in this world. Harry has evolved and isn't just a naive, positive or negative character. He has insecurities but has learned to go against them. I gave 5 stars in background development due to the work on the story and background : even if it's a fanfic. The author made his own system, characters and gave them each his individuality. Thanks for this novel ! Please continue like that !
Not sure why I just simply dislike the idea of Harry Potter in game of thrones
decent story. both GoT fanfics of this author have terrible character growth catalyst events. very cliche and abrupt. a happy loving child goes full blown emo revenge monster after a tragic event. its cheesy and lazy writing. Now he's the cold pragmatic protagonist that shows no mercy to his enemies and stays neutral to everything except what benefits him. haha the same as every other MC on this app. Honestly other than that the story is amazing. grammar is great, the premise awesome, the kingdom building unique and entertaining. It falls short in character growth and overall just likeability of the MC. He went from positive, smart, charming, nice, and successful to.. well.. like every other MC you'll find above and below this story. you'll like the first 100 or so chapters though so id still give it a read and maybe you'll appreciate what I didn't.
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I AM ADDICTED TO THIS. It is great in every way, a must read compared to most GOT fanfics. sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
I like the idea of HP X GOT I just wentedto knew if you recreted hogward in Westerns? because to see doran(harry potter) as a teacher and a school Director + Founder of hogward should be fun. Anyway, thenks to you hard work
author did a good job capturing harry potter's character....insecure, needy, rash to jump into trouble, overly rigtheous, taking personal resposibily for all thing bad in the world, easily manipulated, lack of self confidence and clinging to every scrap of friend he can find no matter how bad they are or took advantage of him. im not being sarcastic, writing is good and author really make it seems like HP but the mc himself was never relatable or likable to me since my preteen years. i'd have personally rated 2.5 but +1.5 for author and i hope to see more from him with a better mc.
Just for the picture alone will give it 5⭐ he's hot.. I'll read this novel... .................... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Boooooommmmmm
Where the chapters 🤴 we waiting you to release something and tanx for all chapters and a good story ...............................................................
Very good quality when it comes to dialouge and grammar. I made it up until chat 37 until I had to drop it. For me it was incredibly slow and I think the author should've spent more time showing us how doran/harry thinks rather then him just watching tournaments for 20 chapters.
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Evaluation: Average WQ: With less to no mistake grammatical errors. Well thought and long chapters. 5/5 SD: With a slow to average pace development. In my humble opinion kickstart the plot progression or do timeskip as well so as to avoid plot holes & redundancy. (I dislike the narration chapters). 4/5 CD: MC/Harry is a bit lame and underplayed from what he is doing ever since. He is a reincarnated individual yet can't adapt wholly in the medieval era part. He is still the naive & kind boy from HP. 2/5 US: The stability of updates is quite qood. 5/5 WB: Not there yet as he hasn't started exploring the westeros & planetos as of the moment. 5/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
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قصة مذهلة اعجز عن وصفها ان لم تكن الافضل فهي من الافضل قرات بدايتها منذ مدة طويلة ولم اقراها لأن فيها شخصية هاري بوتر وادخالها في عالم لعبة العروش ولكن عندنا قراتها عرفت مالذي قد فاتني الفترة الزمنية شي اخر اول مرة أقرأ لعبة العروش في هذه الفترة الزمنية الحميع يريد ان ياتي مع الفترة الزمنية الاصلية ولايريد التغير لافهم مالفائدة من ذلك قمة الروعة عندما تجد قصة معحب ويوجد فيها تغير للافضل
A great story that was written well. I like and especially found the author's take on GoT fic and the timeline he picked as the start of the story to be very interesting. This was also my first time reading wherein the MC was born in Dorne so just that part is a plus for me. Would love to see more fight scenes though. But I do understand that the story is still on its building phase to pave way for important future narrative of the story so all of the mini arcs so far are all lacking combat especially army warfare ones is a given. I don't typically like stories that are a bit slow and starts with mc that is very young especially if there is a toddler and children arc but this story is one of the few exceptions. The pacing is just right, not too slow and not too fast to give more emphasis on Kingdom and World Building which I especially like. Overall, in my opinion at the time of writing this review that this is currently the best on-going Game of Thrones fic in Webnovel that isn't dropped or on a hiatus. Looking forward to more.
The story is so slow paced that you can literally skip to the end and nothing of importance would’ve happened, and surprisingly that got worse on the last few chapters that have been turned into lore dumps. And while the story is well written and the grammar is good, the chapters are painfully short and nothing of note ever happens, it’s like reading a slice of life in the GOT world without it actually being good. I would wait until there’s at least 100 to start reading this again cause at the pace we’re going right now that’s what it’ll take for the story to actually progress.
overall I'm loving the story, and while it's harder for me to see any Grammer mistakes or spelling due to me listening to it with he audio playback. it sounds pretty good. the last chapter really got me thinking about the world of plantetos and is starting to make me think about it in depth as to how and why certain events happened. I hope you keep going and can't wait for more
Honestly, im just randomly scrolling down some list of fan fic. And then found this story. Thank god. Relishing. Nice concept. Overall = ADDICTIVE. 👍👍👍👍
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Hey man dont now if its a hassle but can you upload your fanfic somewhere else? Royalroad ao3 scribblehub? New update on webnovel. Cant read on a browser anymore only that stupid app... If not i will not read on webnovel anymore had enought from this site. Hope you can would be sad otherwise.
I want to read this but the Author just introduces too many character too quickly by name and relation to one another, I have to put in the effort to memorize them so that I can keep up which is not worth it, after all, people read Fanfics to relax.
Uma boa historia, com uma boa discrição, as coisas fazem sentido, juntando tudo sai uma fanfic maravilhosa, recomendo para todos que gostam e procuram uma boa fanfic.
I absolutely love this story! I give your narration 5 stars all the way. I haven't found a HPxGOT Martell-centric xover better than this one so I hope to follow this story to its end (I hope we get there plz).
O how rare a good fanfic with stable updates. No egelord or psycho as prota just a good person so far. And halleluja no harem. Webnovel is as dry as a desert for those. Keep up the great writing i hope of more good time with your fanfic. 😁
Great in terms of writing and grammar, but, the pacing is terribly slow to the point i get bored reading because nothing is really happening.
Story just started, might be too soon for a full review but 15+ chapter and I can already say I'm excited to read more. Unique start for a game of thrones fanfic, a well written, detailed backstory for the MC thats still ongoing, and good grammar. Keep up the good work.
English is my third lenguague so apologizes for any grammar or typo mistake. Also please leave a review if you liked it. I will be posting at least 2 or 3 chapters every week.