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4.04
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I’m going to be honest, the story is decent and it’s clear that the author spared a lot of efforts in creating this book, but there are quiet a few downsides. First of all, any person that even remotely knows how strong Rimuru is by the end of the story, will be severely disappointed by the fact that he was nerfed by a fair amount. The issue is clearly in the fact that the author simply does not posses the necessary knowledge or simply does not understand his power to a certain extent. Also, the grammar is decent, at most.
bad idea carried out badly. Putting two protagonists that move together is stupid since one will be filler and the other will stand out more. up to here the story goes back to arifureta's novel which is stupid considering that they have a being that can travel between worlds whenever it wants
Good story and I can't wait for more specialy that this is the first time I saw a fanfiction that reach this far in ARIFURETA novels
HELLO EVERYONE AUTHOR HERE HOPE YOU GUYS ARE HAVING A GOOD TIME THANKS FOR READING.
It's very good I like how story devlopment I am excited for luminous valentine's and kurumi , shiraori's entry new members in rimuru's harem keep it up and please don't drop this
Writing Quality - ⭐⭐⭐ Story Development - ⭐ Character Design - ⭐⭐ Updating Stability - ⭐⭐⭐ World Background - ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Sir you are really amazing and using other anime character so properly I love that so much . And I am excited for rimuru's harem keep it up.
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Well. In general: Rimuru's unclear goals, since we are shown in the initial chapters that he got bored and wants to visit other worlds, then we find out that he is looking for the soul of his beloved and is matting by measures. The plot is not clear and everything is mixed up in some trash. Very dry, if not to say not at all, any interactions between the persanages, and even more so between the Rimuru and Hajime brothers. Ciel is just disguised knowledge about the canon (as for me it is generally superfluous). The plot is moving at the moment with the filing of Ciel according to the canon, with the frills of memories and the goals of Rimuru. The addition of the third main character (wife, girlfriend) Chloe (nothing is clear with her at all), while the author does not seem to be able to process the main two..... In general, at the moment, the rails of the canon keep this story afloat, and jumping with dubious memories and distorted goals only aggravate Rimuru. Conclusion: this is only my subjective opinion, as for me it was necessary to add everything dosed, otherwise it turns out some kind of dubious (torn) plot.
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Good job its a work of words Kskskskzbhzjshshshhzgshhhshskjhshgsgfddsyghgdgfdudvhdbhdgdhjhdhgddggdbvdcydbjhsfshgfgejhdhgegevstyfshgfefbgdvygcfhdg!mfer find y have e veg did during gdfghdueyv hdh
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2 MC? Brothers at that? Recipe for a writer's block..... You have a lot of bots for reviewers I see.
I’m going to be honest, the story is decent and it’s clear that the author spared a lot of efforts in creating this book, but there are quiet a few downsides. First of all, any person that even remotely knows how strong Rimuru is by the end of the story, will be severely disappointed by the fact that he was nerfed by a fair amount. The issue is clearly in the fact that the author simply does not posses the necessary knowledge or simply does not understand his power to a certain extent. Also, the grammar is decent, at most.
bad idea carried out badly. Putting two protagonists that move together is stupid since one will be filler and the other will stand out more. up to here the story goes back to arifureta's novel which is stupid considering that they have a being that can travel between worlds whenever it wants
Good story and I can't wait for more specialy that this is the first time I saw a fanfiction that reach this far in ARIFURETA novels
HELLO EVERYONE AUTHOR HERE HOPE YOU GUYS ARE HAVING A GOOD TIME THANKS FOR READING.
It's very good I like how story devlopment I am excited for luminous valentine's and kurumi , shiraori's entry new members in rimuru's harem keep it up and please don't drop this
Writing Quality - ⭐⭐⭐ Story Development - ⭐ Character Design - ⭐⭐ Updating Stability - ⭐⭐⭐ World Background - ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Sir you are really amazing and using other anime character so properly I love that so much . And I am excited for rimuru's harem keep it up.
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Well. In general: Rimuru's unclear goals, since we are shown in the initial chapters that he got bored and wants to visit other worlds, then we find out that he is looking for the soul of his beloved and is matting by measures. The plot is not clear and everything is mixed up in some trash. Very dry, if not to say not at all, any interactions between the persanages, and even more so between the Rimuru and Hajime brothers. Ciel is just disguised knowledge about the canon (as for me it is generally superfluous). The plot is moving at the moment with the filing of Ciel according to the canon, with the frills of memories and the goals of Rimuru. The addition of the third main character (wife, girlfriend) Chloe (nothing is clear with her at all), while the author does not seem to be able to process the main two..... In general, at the moment, the rails of the canon keep this story afloat, and jumping with dubious memories and distorted goals only aggravate Rimuru. Conclusion: this is only my subjective opinion, as for me it was necessary to add everything dosed, otherwise it turns out some kind of dubious (torn) plot.
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2 MC? Brothers at that? Recipe for a writer's block..... You have a lot of bots for reviewers I see.