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Hands down my favorite fanfic I’ve read on this app. Love everything about it. Characters attitude within the galaxy, the characters youve introduced have stayed true to their CANNON roots, and this is only the buildup. I’m excited to read the intro of the training of his kids as well as anakin. Maybe we let quigon live? Kinda cliche I know but I’d love to see your take on how his presence would affect anakin
Brilliant story always jump straight to the updates when they come 👌 Love the fact the yuatja clicking is always there cant help but imagine it when reading.
GoldDragonMachina A Star Wars Fanfic where it is two years before the Naboo blockade. Our MC Jack Raquette after meeting a God gets put into the Star Wars Galaxy after he dies from being struck by lightning in his previous world. Can he build up his Sovereign in this Galaxy while bringing peace and prosperity to the Galaxy, or will he succumb to the pressure . Home Base Planet: Nar Shadaa Harem Padme Amidala Duchess Satine Kryze Tiplee Tiplar Nala Se Miraj Scintel Aura Sing Queen Julia Luminara Unduli Aayla Secura Ahsoka Barriss Offee
great perfect fast paced a bit could be longer and more detailed but its a good plot and read and the characters are a 10 out of 10 actually part of the Yautja race as well creating his own clan is just pure bliss and a force and lightsaber user is just godly
very goo author keep it up hope for more stories...........................................................................................................and hope you can set up a patreon or kofi
Olá, Autor-San. Sou um novo leitor do Brasil. Estou aconpanhando essa Fanfic e, como um fã do universo Predador, estou gostando bastante. Por favor, não deixe cair. É raro encontrar boas Fanfics desse universo!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Idk how you even came up for a story like this, but I think it's genius. Absolutely zero complaints.
I stopped reading when the author made the force a sentient being that gave quests to the mc just because he killed a fiew beings and took their traits.
amazing novel my only issue is with how short each chapter is and the frequency of release of said small chapters. I'll save up 5-6 chapters and finish within 10 minutes.
First time in a long time that I got a fanfic with a Predator in it that was actually interesting. The fic is a decent length and pretty solid in terms of updated and story progression, the “romance” is a bit stiff but I don’t think anyone came here for that anyways. Overall this fic is 10/10 would read again, keep up the good work author!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………
This story is top tier for sure. Not many fan fics out there for predators or star wars so its great to see a good one here. the author has also been able to keep the book creative and interesting. Only problem this book has is it needs more chapters 😭
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Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!!!! Such a great story and respect to lore for both universes. Please keep updating even if only once a week, was so looking forward to the next chapter and then it suddenly stopped was so worried. Keep up the good work.
This is one of the most interestin fanfics I read about Star Wars. I’m really loving it. it is an absolute masterpiece. I guarantee if your try it you’l enjoy it as long as you like Star Wars and have watched the alien/predator movies. Only complaints I have is the updating time is a little slow. Looks to be about one every week. And the lemon scenes could use more detail, I mean I am a man of culture.
The story is well thought out and extremely detailed which shows the dedication of the author which I deeply respect. The author clearly is dedicated to this story and I can't wait for more chapters.
i want more chapters please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good good good good gooooooooooood=)))))) thanks ))))))))))))))))))))). )))))) cull Five star. He-he. Oooooooooooooooooooooooo Eeeeeeeeeeeeee
Everything is perfect, world combination for cross-over is unique this was the first time I saw one for the Predator, just the update rate is extremely slow...
Yo this story is really good read 30 chapter's i really like how mc is not good or evil just pragmatic i have a question though will he ever go back to the predator universe later on in the story i can't wait to read more pls continue this story it really scratched the itch after searching for a good story
love it and am just waiting for more chapters. it is unique and thr characters have development and personality, even the characters he only meets once. overall one of, if not the best fanfics I've read on webnovel. keep it up author.
A story that you can really get into I would suggest est it to anyone who likes the star wars universe and it's lore with the interesting moral compass of the predators
love the idea e exp exp eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Now that was a good story hope you keep the story going. Good job author San keep up the goid work. The idea of putting a yautja in the star wars universe was genius. Here's an idea that I don't know if anyone has thought of but what about trying to combine Ben 10 and star wars?
Hands down my favorite fanfic I’ve read on this app. Love everything about it. Characters attitude within the galaxy, the characters youve introduced have stayed true to their CANNON roots, and this is only the buildup. I’m excited to read the intro of the training of his kids as well as anakin. Maybe we let quigon live? Kinda cliche I know but I’d love to see your take on how his presence would affect anakin
Brilliant story always jump straight to the updates when they come 👌 Love the fact the yuatja clicking is always there cant help but imagine it when reading.
GoldDragonMachina A Star Wars Fanfic where it is two years before the Naboo blockade. Our MC Jack Raquette after meeting a God gets put into the Star Wars Galaxy after he dies from being struck by lightning in his previous world. Can he build up his Sovereign in this Galaxy while bringing peace and prosperity to the Galaxy, or will he succumb to the pressure . Home Base Planet: Nar Shadaa Harem Padme Amidala Duchess Satine Kryze Tiplee Tiplar Nala Se Miraj Scintel Aura Sing Queen Julia Luminara Unduli Aayla Secura Ahsoka Barriss Offee
great perfect fast paced a bit could be longer and more detailed but its a good plot and read and the characters are a 10 out of 10 actually part of the Yautja race as well creating his own clan is just pure bliss and a force and lightsaber user is just godly
very goo author keep it up hope for more stories...........................................................................................................and hope you can set up a patreon or kofi
Olá, Autor-San. Sou um novo leitor do Brasil. Estou aconpanhando essa Fanfic e, como um fã do universo Predador, estou gostando bastante. Por favor, não deixe cair. É raro encontrar boas Fanfics desse universo!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Idk how you even came up for a story like this, but I think it's genius. Absolutely zero complaints.
I stopped reading when the author made the force a sentient being that gave quests to the mc just because he killed a fiew beings and took their traits.
amazing novel my only issue is with how short each chapter is and the frequency of release of said small chapters. I'll save up 5-6 chapters and finish within 10 minutes.
First time in a long time that I got a fanfic with a Predator in it that was actually interesting. The fic is a decent length and pretty solid in terms of updated and story progression, the “romance” is a bit stiff but I don’t think anyone came here for that anyways. Overall this fic is 10/10 would read again, keep up the good work author!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………
This story is top tier for sure. Not many fan fics out there for predators or star wars so its great to see a good one here. the author has also been able to keep the book creative and interesting. Only problem this book has is it needs more chapters 😭
Loved the read but I am hoping the author will come back to write more. [img=update]
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Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!!!! Such a great story and respect to lore for both universes. Please keep updating even if only once a week, was so looking forward to the next chapter and then it suddenly stopped was so worried. Keep up the good work.
This is one of the most interestin fanfics I read about Star Wars. I’m really loving it. it is an absolute masterpiece. I guarantee if your try it you’l enjoy it as long as you like Star Wars and have watched the alien/predator movies. Only complaints I have is the updating time is a little slow. Looks to be about one every week. And the lemon scenes could use more detail, I mean I am a man of culture.
The story is well thought out and extremely detailed which shows the dedication of the author which I deeply respect. The author clearly is dedicated to this story and I can't wait for more chapters.
i want more chapters please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good good good good gooooooooooood=)))))) thanks ))))))))))))))))))))). )))))) cull Five star. He-he. Oooooooooooooooooooooooo Eeeeeeeeeeeeee
Everything is perfect, world combination for cross-over is unique this was the first time I saw one for the Predator, just the update rate is extremely slow...
Yo this story is really good read 30 chapter's i really like how mc is not good or evil just pragmatic i have a question though will he ever go back to the predator universe later on in the story i can't wait to read more pls continue this story it really scratched the itch after searching for a good story
love it and am just waiting for more chapters. it is unique and thr characters have development and personality, even the characters he only meets once. overall one of, if not the best fanfics I've read on webnovel. keep it up author.
A story that you can really get into I would suggest est it to anyone who likes the star wars universe and it's lore with the interesting moral compass of the predators
love the idea e exp exp eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Now that was a good story hope you keep the story going. Good job author San keep up the goid work. The idea of putting a yautja in the star wars universe was genius. Here's an idea that I don't know if anyone has thought of but what about trying to combine Ben 10 and star wars?