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4.53
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iam pretty disappointed mc didn't want to join griffindor because he didn't want to stay in Harry's shadow but then keeps himself hidden no interesting interaction no adventures no getting point just acting like a sise character, even the system is quite stupid and has many wrong thing this story is so bad,i don't recommend reading it.
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Buena historia y trama, espero la actualización. Por favor, no te tardes, te lo suplico, lo ando esperando.. plis
Перс то ныкается то палится по чем зря. Есть нестабильность в поведении и характере. Было бы не плохо обыграть это например поглащение души дракона и тп, но увы. В целом весма ин ентересно, гг не иба за неделю что также плюс. Однако не особо и суетится в сборе ништяков. Этакий пофигист с читами и не понятно какая цель у гг чего он хочет в итоге? Мир как мир персонажи живые в лютый дарк или добрейшее добро не скатывается довольно рационально все. Но и без всяких -- ВОТ ЭТО ПОВОРОТ!!!
The idea of the story is good, but the author is not doing it right. For a guy that lived to 22 years old he is disappointingly STUPID. MC’s wand didn’t work for him since he got it and instead of telling his parents about this so they take him to olivanders for a new wand, he goes to hogwarts with the incompatible wand, FOR MORE THAN A MONTH, then he gets one from the room of requirement. Which DOES NOT make any sense. everything the room makes is conjured and you can’t take it out of the room. Also there is some writing mistakes.
Some decisions are kind of forced/don't make sense, but its not that big of a deal and the story is enjoyable and easy to read, so you get full marks from me.
Stories good, my onpy gripe is how the MC outright ignores his powers sometimes for the point of plot. I can understand forgetting or even ubderutilizing skills and powers as that’s just a human limitation. However I feel as though the MC conveniently forgets things sometimes. The most recent of course being him not putting the horcrux diary in his pocket simension. Which why? Why wouldn’t he do that? It’s what one of the most inportant things pertaining to what could be a deadly enemy. Why didn’t he outright sell the thing to the shop? What could he have possibly wanted from it that didn’t have him do these things immediately? He’s shown to have thought out these issues too. He should realize what’s her face has taken it and just use Clairvoyence to immediately go and get it. However I can feel how he going to go confront her on it, Dumbledore will get involved someonehow, and he’s going to be watched. I understand a-lot of the things that happen in this story and appreciate how the MC has flaws and limitations. What I don’t like is how he struggles to do what needs to be done, or actually confirm some of the most important things to his survival are secure. Realistically he should just go and get the diary without talking to anyone nicking it. What is she gonna do? Accuse him of stealing his own property. Overall I feel like this occurence is like watching the Flash TV show all over again. The MC is getting to the point where he should be able to handle children his age. However because we need conflict the author makes him forget, or suddenly nerfs him in some regard. Again I’m fine with flaws, I’m not those people whining about how he should be perfect. There however should be a certain level of capability because no matter what the guy was what 24 in his past life? At that age you understand that there are some things you cannot forget and make sure get done. And if this situation escalates into a huge issue where the MC couldn’t bring himself to steal his stuff back. Then I’m not to hopeful for what comes next to create conflict. I really like the story I just get the vibes that this is a prelude to a lot of forced conflict that shouldn’t exist.
The cover is awesome, interesting cross over don't know much about skyrim, however the system pacing is not hard or easy making it believable.
I dont normally like SI's because for most part they are trash. But this one is good and entertaining. Writing quality is pretty good and shenanigans aplenty along with munchkining.
Это шедевр. побольше бы таких фанфиков.прочиьал на одном дыхании проработка деталей на высоте и сюжета.но я бы выбрал его тётю любовным интересом.как говарится ин.ест это семейное.удачи в написание новых глав вам.
the story is great , funy and engaging , the only cons i see is : - updates - some time MC do thing that he specifically mentioned in previous chapter that he won’t and it seems he don't see that all in all story is good and recommend to give it a try
Is this dropped, please reply I really like this series and hope for it to continue, also hope your health is good author. Well do please continue this masterpiece it deserves a good ending.
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1. Grammar: Excellent, I have no real notes. 2. Plot: well executed, and the transmigration wasn't a cliche. 3. Potential: 100/10 I'm personally hoping for some Skyrim-style vampirism of lycanthropy. And possibly some lore-friendly Mod content. Update speed: let's be honest it never is enough right?
Recently downgraded rating, so I publish my own, otherwise it's too much. Great story with an interesting plot, the pace of development is ok. The report is over comrade major!
Probably second best Harry potter fanfic till now, after HP: A Magical Journey. Writing quality and character development is great along with a good plot.
I just want know something , the novel is harem or noy harem. And how is the waifu of the novem? I love harry potter fanfic//////////////////////////////////////%%/////$&$&$&$*#&$&$[^[$
Well the story is very mid. Nothing really happened in 40 chapters. Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space,
It has one of best and unique start I have ever read . Give it a try , I dont think you will regret it .
uma novel de qualidade padrão do webnovel. não tem grande erros, o personagem principal treinar desesperado mas aos poucos está aprendendo a aproveitar, a primeira travessura dele foi um pouco do nada mas deu inicio as travessuras dele, como ele não sentou com os colegas do quarto mas ficou com o trio, achei que ele ia para grifinoria, que é um espaço bom para desenvolvimentos dos companheiros do protagonista mas como não foi usado, os "amigos" ficaram bem de segundo plano e sem personalidade até agora os mais desenvolvidos foram o laço com o dragão e a cena da irmã da mãe do protagonista. foi uma bela cena deu um suspense se ele ia ser sequestrado ou alguma mudança na trama. o sistema dele achei fraco mas ta evoluindo, 100 de atributo deveria ser alto para os padrões, e nem ferrando que os bruxos sabem combate corpo a corpo bem poucos um exagero disse isso, acho que algumas notas da forma que foi feito atrapalha a experiência também
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Pretty fun story. Really enjoyed it. MC is fun and believable. Interesting Skyrim gimmick. Feels a bit cheesy that mc can get infinite money by throwing trash into the system. But infinite money gives more room to create a more interesting story and the author does not need to focus on grinding money to slowly get all Skyrim spells.
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iam pretty disappointed mc didn't want to join griffindor because he didn't want to stay in Harry's shadow but then keeps himself hidden no interesting interaction no adventures no getting point just acting like a sise character, even the system is quite stupid and has many wrong thing this story is so bad,i don't recommend reading it.
Great♥......................................................................................................................................................
Buena historia y trama, espero la actualización. Por favor, no te tardes, te lo suplico, lo ando esperando.. plis
Перс то ныкается то палится по чем зря. Есть нестабильность в поведении и характере. Было бы не плохо обыграть это например поглащение души дракона и тп, но увы. В целом весма ин ентересно, гг не иба за неделю что также плюс. Однако не особо и суетится в сборе ништяков. Этакий пофигист с читами и не понятно какая цель у гг чего он хочет в итоге? Мир как мир персонажи живые в лютый дарк или добрейшее добро не скатывается довольно рационально все. Но и без всяких -- ВОТ ЭТО ПОВОРОТ!!!
The idea of the story is good, but the author is not doing it right. For a guy that lived to 22 years old he is disappointingly STUPID. MC’s wand didn’t work for him since he got it and instead of telling his parents about this so they take him to olivanders for a new wand, he goes to hogwarts with the incompatible wand, FOR MORE THAN A MONTH, then he gets one from the room of requirement. Which DOES NOT make any sense. everything the room makes is conjured and you can’t take it out of the room. Also there is some writing mistakes.
Some decisions are kind of forced/don't make sense, but its not that big of a deal and the story is enjoyable and easy to read, so you get full marks from me.
Stories good, my onpy gripe is how the MC outright ignores his powers sometimes for the point of plot. I can understand forgetting or even ubderutilizing skills and powers as that’s just a human limitation. However I feel as though the MC conveniently forgets things sometimes. The most recent of course being him not putting the horcrux diary in his pocket simension. Which why? Why wouldn’t he do that? It’s what one of the most inportant things pertaining to what could be a deadly enemy. Why didn’t he outright sell the thing to the shop? What could he have possibly wanted from it that didn’t have him do these things immediately? He’s shown to have thought out these issues too. He should realize what’s her face has taken it and just use Clairvoyence to immediately go and get it. However I can feel how he going to go confront her on it, Dumbledore will get involved someonehow, and he’s going to be watched. I understand a-lot of the things that happen in this story and appreciate how the MC has flaws and limitations. What I don’t like is how he struggles to do what needs to be done, or actually confirm some of the most important things to his survival are secure. Realistically he should just go and get the diary without talking to anyone nicking it. What is she gonna do? Accuse him of stealing his own property. Overall I feel like this occurence is like watching the Flash TV show all over again. The MC is getting to the point where he should be able to handle children his age. However because we need conflict the author makes him forget, or suddenly nerfs him in some regard. Again I’m fine with flaws, I’m not those people whining about how he should be perfect. There however should be a certain level of capability because no matter what the guy was what 24 in his past life? At that age you understand that there are some things you cannot forget and make sure get done. And if this situation escalates into a huge issue where the MC couldn’t bring himself to steal his stuff back. Then I’m not to hopeful for what comes next to create conflict. I really like the story I just get the vibes that this is a prelude to a lot of forced conflict that shouldn’t exist.
The cover is awesome, interesting cross over don't know much about skyrim, however the system pacing is not hard or easy making it believable.
I dont normally like SI's because for most part they are trash. But this one is good and entertaining. Writing quality is pretty good and shenanigans aplenty along with munchkining.
Это шедевр. побольше бы таких фанфиков.прочиьал на одном дыхании проработка деталей на высоте и сюжета.но я бы выбрал его тётю любовным интересом.как говарится ин.ест это семейное.удачи в написание новых глав вам.
the story is great , funy and engaging , the only cons i see is : - updates - some time MC do thing that he specifically mentioned in previous chapter that he won’t and it seems he don't see that all in all story is good and recommend to give it a try
Is this dropped, please reply I really like this series and hope for it to continue, also hope your health is good author. Well do please continue this masterpiece it deserves a good ending.
I want to continue I want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continueI want to continue
1. Grammar: Excellent, I have no real notes. 2. Plot: well executed, and the transmigration wasn't a cliche. 3. Potential: 100/10 I'm personally hoping for some Skyrim-style vampirism of lycanthropy. And possibly some lore-friendly Mod content. Update speed: let's be honest it never is enough right?
Recently downgraded rating, so I publish my own, otherwise it's too much. Great story with an interesting plot, the pace of development is ok. The report is over comrade major!
Probably second best Harry potter fanfic till now, after HP: A Magical Journey. Writing quality and character development is great along with a good plot.
I just want know something , the novel is harem or noy harem. And how is the waifu of the novem? I love harry potter fanfic//////////////////////////////////////%%/////$&$&$&$*#&$&$[^[$
Well the story is very mid. Nothing really happened in 40 chapters. Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space,
It has one of best and unique start I have ever read . Give it a try , I dont think you will regret it .
uma novel de qualidade padrão do webnovel. não tem grande erros, o personagem principal treinar desesperado mas aos poucos está aprendendo a aproveitar, a primeira travessura dele foi um pouco do nada mas deu inicio as travessuras dele, como ele não sentou com os colegas do quarto mas ficou com o trio, achei que ele ia para grifinoria, que é um espaço bom para desenvolvimentos dos companheiros do protagonista mas como não foi usado, os "amigos" ficaram bem de segundo plano e sem personalidade até agora os mais desenvolvidos foram o laço com o dragão e a cena da irmã da mãe do protagonista. foi uma bela cena deu um suspense se ele ia ser sequestrado ou alguma mudança na trama. o sistema dele achei fraco mas ta evoluindo, 100 de atributo deveria ser alto para os padrões, e nem ferrando que os bruxos sabem combate corpo a corpo bem poucos um exagero disse isso, acho que algumas notas da forma que foi feito atrapalha a experiência também
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Pretty fun story. Really enjoyed it. MC is fun and believable. Interesting Skyrim gimmick. Feels a bit cheesy that mc can get infinite money by throwing trash into the system. But infinite money gives more room to create a more interesting story and the author does not need to focus on grinding money to slowly get all Skyrim spells.
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This was a good read but unfortunately idk if it’s in hiatus or been dropped