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First review in a while, but hey, to you ape-author ! Gotta say it's starting in the right tracks, try to not deviate and and just end up with another lackey to the golden trio or a young master Stu who spends his time threatening everyone without consequences will ya ? Both are the right way to land in dumbles' twinkling crosshairs. For the first few years, except for emergency canon rectification, just keep away from the main plot and keep on learning and growing, gotta gring on that Voice to shout voldy apart ! I personnaly wouldn't interfere too much until at least the tournament or the DA's time. Still wondering if you are gonna include spells from skyrim mods or make OC ones (maybe not whole schools but just something to flesh it out a bit?). That also brings the question of how the two magic system stack up against each other. From what i saw, raw power goes to Skyrim, versatility to HP. Same for TES enchanting and alchemy, they should be quite different from their HP counterpart, but by how much ? At least he can buy the filled soul gems and the giants toes from the system, so we can keep Hagrid alive. For a bit longer at least. Finally, while it IS very soon to talk about it since they are still at the stage of the cooties, (and dumbles is the only groomer here) you should maybe think about what is gonna be the love interest. To me, we read way too much with Hermionne, Daphnée, Susan Bones or Fleur. So you could stay with the clichés (they are clichés for a reason) but i would be partial to a original one, like Su Li (go asian wuxia power) or one of the Patil sister (go indian power) they are atypical enough to me. Keep up with the love and bananas young apes
I don't know why mc doesn't already fix his wand I mean Olvander should have nothing against a wand exchange Just say you don't know what happened The wand is his weapon and ignoring it like that is annoying And i saw too much reliance on Skyrim spells i mean ya they are cool and all, but ignoring one thing for the sake of another is bad I hate the AN interruptingthe story it is annoying I know this has to do with reviews but WN won't allow any comment
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Can you pass this FF to Scribble Hub and also continue the other one there, what webnovel have done to force us to download the app and no consider a lot of us use laptops or PC that are no compatible is just stupid
Haven't read any of the chaps. But the Dovahkiin and HP in a fic are totally banger. I hope you somehow can finish the story. 5 Stars for support🔥🔥
to tired to give an actual review but is 👍 /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
So far so good. I hope you explore the world of Harry Potter outside of Hogwarts too. New adventures with the OC are what I am looking forward to.
I am leaving this review here after reading the first chapter in good faith that you will finish this fan-fiction author-san. I like it so far.
I like the start, had that conversation too many times. Didn't see any major mistakes, maybe that's because I'm not a native English speaker. I hope you keep going and I am waiting for🍋🍋if you'll be so kind😁
Author-Ape here, this is my Aubligatory 5 start rating. If you are reading this, then please give this novel a read, it will mean the world to me. I am waiting for your comments and reviews.
First review in a while, but hey, to you ape-author ! Gotta say it's starting in the right tracks, try to not deviate and and just end up with another lackey to the golden trio or a young master Stu who spends his time threatening everyone without consequences will ya ? Both are the right way to land in dumbles' twinkling crosshairs. For the first few years, except for emergency canon rectification, just keep away from the main plot and keep on learning and growing, gotta gring on that Voice to shout voldy apart ! I personnaly wouldn't interfere too much until at least the tournament or the DA's time. Still wondering if you are gonna include spells from skyrim mods or make OC ones (maybe not whole schools but just something to flesh it out a bit?). That also brings the question of how the two magic system stack up against each other. From what i saw, raw power goes to Skyrim, versatility to HP. Same for TES enchanting and alchemy, they should be quite different from their HP counterpart, but by how much ? At least he can buy the filled soul gems and the giants toes from the system, so we can keep Hagrid alive. For a bit longer at least. Finally, while it IS very soon to talk about it since they are still at the stage of the cooties, (and dumbles is the only groomer here) you should maybe think about what is gonna be the love interest. To me, we read way too much with Hermionne, Daphnée, Susan Bones or Fleur. So you could stay with the clichés (they are clichés for a reason) but i would be partial to a original one, like Su Li (go asian wuxia power) or one of the Patil sister (go indian power) they are atypical enough to me. Keep up with the love and bananas young apes
I don't know why mc doesn't already fix his wand I mean Olvander should have nothing against a wand exchange Just say you don't know what happened The wand is his weapon and ignoring it like that is annoying And i saw too much reliance on Skyrim spells i mean ya they are cool and all, but ignoring one thing for the sake of another is bad I hate the AN interruptingthe story it is annoying I know this has to do with reviews but WN won't allow any comment
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Can you pass this FF to Scribble Hub and also continue the other one there, what webnovel have done to force us to download the app and no consider a lot of us use laptops or PC that are no compatible is just stupid
Haven't read any of the chaps. But the Dovahkiin and HP in a fic are totally banger. I hope you somehow can finish the story. 5 Stars for support🔥🔥
to tired to give an actual review but is 👍 /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
So far so good. I hope you explore the world of Harry Potter outside of Hogwarts too. New adventures with the OC are what I am looking forward to.
I am leaving this review here after reading the first chapter in good faith that you will finish this fan-fiction author-san. I like it so far.
I like the start, had that conversation too many times. Didn't see any major mistakes, maybe that's because I'm not a native English speaker. I hope you keep going and I am waiting for🍋🍋if you'll be so kind😁
Author-Ape here, this is my Aubligatory 5 start rating. If you are reading this, then please give this novel a read, it will mean the world to me. I am waiting for your comments and reviews.
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