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"huh, gods.... how fun" Madara had just been killed by one, now he was in a world filled by them. With a fledgling circle of hatred brewing, will he try to stop it once more? Or will the old battle maniac just kill some monsters and be done with it? Can the warm world of Orario melt the cold hard exterior that has led the man down a path of mindless bloodshed or will it bring him to insanity? Find out next time on dragon ball z
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เขียนรีวิวNice novel and good idea, but full of grammatical errors and unbelievable events and realism. Even if he is Madara, that's not an excuse for him being stronger and faster than his body should allow for his stats. Even with chakra being a factor; chakra that he never trained in his new body too. There are also a lot of small inconsistent plot holes about how the monsters and people behave... but those are more of a nitpick. Overall, this is a madara wish fulfillment; if you expect a fun op madara novel then this is fine, but if you want a more realistic/serious approach, it's not. The grammar errors are a lot, but they don't disturb the novel too much. The first 5-6 chapters are a good indication for what the novel is like, read those and decide for yourself if you like it.
grammar could do some work, use grammarly to fix the typos and stuff, but overall the story is great.
With the read he actually feels like madara ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
His personality is nothing like madara and not to mention the many grammatical mistakes but what really got to me is how you made madara's pride and unbendable will and tyrant like persona non existent plus you made him a little submissive follower
Scary amount of spelling mistakes but besides that the author did incredibly good. If he used grammarly like a review suggests or had a english friend look over it id give it about 4.8 out of 5
Now, this is good fanfic and I love how Madra is developing in it. especially that I love danmachi world. In the end, I will give it 4,8. just because of the Grammer.
My guy, this here fic is a hidden gem waiting to be polished. The only visible fault here is the lackluster grammar. I offer to edit for you free of charge if you're interested. Otherwise keep up the good work😎
I love you please more chapters I have been waiting for a naruto/danmachi crossover like this and I absolutely love Madara excellent execution 10/10
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I hope there is a possibility of more chapters ..................................................................................................................
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Excelente fic, buena historia, buena secuencia de eventos, buena interpretación de los personajes, execelente representación de Madara Uchiha, buena elección de miembros del harem, todo excelente, más capítulos por favor que esto ya se convirtió en una adicción.
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นักเขียน JJstired
The author does not know who the madara is. Madara learns about the currency, learns what can be bought with money. Madara is not stupid. Madara does not play the hero, does not do unnecessary favors. The author ruined the novel.