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it has been so long since I read a good gamer story, I looooooove it 5 stars and I usually hate au's but this was great. I just hope you keep the updates coming and not drop this wonderful story. Good Day!
Good Fic. I like how the MC isn't emotional or unstable and is actually acting his age even if it is in minor things. I also like his views on the world and his way of gaining power. No waiting or playing by the books only. Potions and repetitive actions till he gets skills and/or levels them up. I like the constraints needed to get a skill or spell, and the explanation as to the importance of age (13 and 17). Really stopped plotholes with that one, so BRAVO!! Very good play.
It's kind of annoying. He spends most of every chapter in his own head constantly tuning out everything around him. As professor oak would say, there's a time and place for everything, but not now. Could be good if he just monologues to himself every now and then, but it's never ending.
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I'll be the first to say that it's a solid start to a Harry Potter fic, and I hope to see more.
The writing is very good, and the flow, structure and tone story is also good. This writer has a very good foundation for some actually decent fics.The only problem is the creative decisions made at the start, which turns a lot of people from continuing to read, but I suggest you try first. If you don't mind them, itll be a good read.
it has been so long since I read a good gamer story, I looooooove it 5 stars and I usually hate au's but this was great. I just hope you keep the updates coming and not drop this wonderful story. Good Day!
Good Fic. I like how the MC isn't emotional or unstable and is actually acting his age even if it is in minor things. I also like his views on the world and his way of gaining power. No waiting or playing by the books only. Potions and repetitive actions till he gets skills and/or levels them up. I like the constraints needed to get a skill or spell, and the explanation as to the importance of age (13 and 17). Really stopped plotholes with that one, so BRAVO!! Very good play.
It's kind of annoying. He spends most of every chapter in his own head constantly tuning out everything around him. As professor oak would say, there's a time and place for everything, but not now. Could be good if he just monologues to himself every now and then, but it's never ending.
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I'll be the first to say that it's a solid start to a Harry Potter fic, and I hope to see more.
The writing is very good, and the flow, structure and tone story is also good. This writer has a very good foundation for some actually decent fics.The only problem is the creative decisions made at the start, which turns a lot of people from continuing to read, but I suggest you try first. If you don't mind them, itll be a good read.