Heaven, Earth, Me

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Mortrexo

Well, I deleted my previous review because of two important things. My update schedule will be every day at 20:30 GMT+7 until further notice. The second point is that I didn't give my novel 5 stars and that is blasphemy, Why did you just think I'm shameless? I'm not, I totally didn't feel envious of all the other authors that do the same. Finally, I'm writing this novel for fun (at least currently)! Moreover, it is my first time writing anything. If that was not enough, English is not my first language. But don't worry! I'm using two different grammar correcting software! So, it shouldn't be bad, I hope you don't leave because of this. I hope I didn't forget anything... I actually did! Any questions or suggestions about the novel write below. I will answer all of them unless they are nonsense of course. And please refrain from using swear words. If you don't like something about my novel, tell me normally. I only have the outline of the plot and some stacked chapters so changing things is possible!

LV 14

Qavid

I can only say that this novel has me hooked its a super good read and I love that the author is limiting the harem [img=recommend][img=update]

LV 2

Mortrexo

Hello, the author here! So, this second review is posted after 200 chapters! What a crazy thing. The other review has some things wrong, so I'm here to correct them and to tell you about other new things. Firstly, I wanted to thank all of you who have read my novel, we are almost at one million views, and I can't believe it. Thank you, dears. Second, the schedule is actually daily at 21:00 UTC+2. You can easily search how to compare it with your local hour on Google. Next, I wanted to say that I've edited the first ten chapters or so, so the grammar is a little bit rough after that point, but I would say that it is readable. Later, I made massive improvements. Following that, this story has a LIMITED harem. The main character won't go collecting women like trophies and cares about all of them dearly. They are also a big part of the story and won't be left behind and forgotten. They all complement each other, creating a healthy relationship between them. Also, there are only Female on Female relationships; there isn't any romantic situation with males. Finally, Any other question you have, you can ask here or in my comment. Thank you for reading this, and I hope you can try my novel and follow Yasenia's adventures in a cultivation world that is slightly different from the norm. ...I hope I didn't forget anything.

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k1ra3x

The novel is very interesting, you have daily updates, and the grammar have improved during the course of the story. There are barely any grammmatical errors in later chapters. Give it a try I don't think you will regret it!

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Zu69

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MalleShi

Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good.

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Noubu

Very good. 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

LV 15

ranaltor

I've seen this book on to other sites but I've read it on this site it is a very good read the world is very well detailed and I love the characters I don't know why anybody would dislike it other than well the sexuality of one of the main characters so if you like cultivation books then give this one a try

LV 3

TatyanaWorshipper

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LV 15

Platypus_Mage

It is a very well put together story. Honestly there is not many problems at all with it. The only thing I could say is I want more. That is all.

LV 13

Leonard321

good yuri harem novel with pampering mc toward her harem and cold almost on everyone

LV 4

Liber8T

well Hello I just noticed your novels in webnovel too 😋 keep making this master piece. its one of few that makes my day more enjoyable .

LV 14

seirei_lina

Nice novel. Very fun to read, lemon’s are good too. keep up the good work.

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Sweetie_me

I honestly like your story.... everything is lovely...... overall it's the best intimatcy harem beauties and I like there passionate connection.... The word building is very detailed and easy to understand.✌️💓😎..

LV 13

GamaLike

one was the best on this platform!!! if you haven't read it yet, I highly recommend it.

LV 4

KingEngineer

I love your novel so far, but the system characters are turning me away. I wa just introduced to Sarah and it seems like she has limited influence on the people with her harem system (including the mc and her harem). Are system users now just characters that are op and can influence the mc group or will they eventually be able to stop them from influencing. I really want to continue but would rather drop it now if that’s the case.

LV 13

HopelessRomantic32

I don't have any complaints, I just wanted to say that i've truly enjoyed your story so far, and thanks for writing it and making it available. it's an easy recommendation for me to make.

LV 10

Steeven_Velez

If you don't like polyamory, don't read this story, it totally ruined the experience of reading this novel for me, they explain to you from the beginning of the work that the protagonist's mother created and gave birth to the protagonist because she wants her love and He looks for love without betrayal from her, that's why he didn't look for anyone else and only loves the protagonist, then why do you make the mother also have relations with her girlfriends, if from the beginning it was clear that he would only be with her, if not It's like she would have already had her own harem, and the girlfriends accept it anyway, if they make it clear that they are in love with the protagonist and the mother by going out a couple of times also makes her fall in love, what rubbish, at least it makes it clear that there will be all that In the synopsis, it screwed up my reading experience, I'm sorry for the words but this was very disappointing for me, I was loving the story so much :'v

LV 12

Liam_000

Perhaps the best yuri/xianxia novel I've read

LV 3

Neva_neba

I love this novel mostly because of the main cast. they feel like people who would have their own stories with or without the protagonist and aren't just there to make the mc seem more relevant