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Ah yes. “Refine chakra” and “cultivate.” The two things every Chinese fanfic says even though that’s not how chakra works. This wasn’t even edited by a human either. Wind “Escape” instead of Wind Release. “Human Pillar” instead of Jinchuriki. Magatama instead of Tomoe. And what is Earth - Earth - Spear? Is it supposed to be hand seals? Is it Earth Release: Earth Spear? No one knows.
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This is currently the best Naruto fanfic I've read so far. it's absolutely brilliant
after reading several chapter I am surprised this novel have much more reader than Reincarnation Paradise although the premise is interesting but after a while you can see the flaws like the other reviewers says
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I just can't get behind this novel, it's cool and all but it just doesn't make sense at some points. Minor words are just missing from sentences. People can "eat" his radiation to become stronger instead of getting cancer and outright dying. I just finding confusing and less interesting than the title would suggest. Not to mention it feels like a Chinese adaption of a Japanese based manga/anime. And idk about everyone else, but Chinese written styles absolutely ruined Japanese based anime/manga for me.
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as the story continues the translation becomes worse... please translate properly....
I am giving it stars's just because of it being Naruto fanfic. I don't like the peace wanting nature of MC, because he is not like Naruto, he do evil but love peace. MC try to help others by giving or telling them what they can get or achieve without his help.
I like the story but the grammar really need to be improved but the story is in teresting
I thought this novel will be super disappointing, I guessed wrong. I really like the concept of radiation. The only problem I have is the translator. He translates this novel as if it was wuxia, when it's not. Sometimes it's also hard to understand what's going on, because the translation from English > Chinese > English just doesn't make sense. Don't translate mindlessly - think and make corrections!
Amazing translation it doesn't even sound like its translated! MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA
Сюжет клас чем остальных потому что гг не тупой и не добрый очень круто 👍мне понравилось давай ещё таких сюжетов надеюсь ты быстро выпустис ещё много глав
The only thing wrong is translation this thing is a work of art, get past into the later chapters and it isn’t even bad anymore, I recommend with all my soul
this will damage your braincell for every subsequent chapter because chinese language is dumb and it is difficult to translate to english language that make any sense. chinese language is one of the most dull-witted language ever. for example the name obito, when translated from chinese to english is the following: -(the people who brought the soil)= uchiha obito -Taito=obito -(blackened soil)= uchiha obito -(Uchiha brought soil)= uchiha obito -( the soil)= Obito -(bringing the soil)= obito -(with soil)=Obito -(on soil)= on obito ......etc many more just for one uchiha lol how many uchiha do we have? chinese are dumb
Romance scene please.....👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
If you get past the bad translation it’s honestly really good, it has a goal, the mc is smart and ruthless, and doesn’t stick to the story creating his own plans and manipulating characters
The story was good. It interested me to read more than half of the story. Sometimes I wanna drop it but I still wanna read more. There are many things in this story that bothers me. Like another review said, the chinese novel feels very apparent, the grammar is readable but very much bothers me, and sometimes the pronouns are wrong.
It's really weird, I already read this till chapter 200 and I find this story is very similar to"Reincarnation in Naruto World" . . .
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It's really good, and no I'm not a bot I'm just bored of all the hardcore 1 way plot direction novels, sometimes I like to read about topics that interest me and godzilla in naruto is high on that list. So, it's good if you're just desensitized by all of those novels that focus on 1 tag and do nothing else, and you just want to relax and read something that isn't too complex. sometimes alot of things are mixed up but besides that it's a pretty good novel, I do read alot of qidian novels and I enjoy a lot of them, such as: Cultivation! My Augmented Statuses Have Unlimited Duration, I Have A Super USB Drive, Top Tier Providence Secretly Cultivate For A Thousand Years, Livestream: The Adjudicator of Death, 80 Years Of Signing-In At The Cold Palace I Am Unrivalled, It's Lonely to Be Invincible, and Black Tech Internet Cafe System.
Godzilla absolutely dog walks the Naruto verse so imma just let it stay a 3 star rating for the inconsistency in the power scaling but hey, this is a FF which is also Chinese so can’t expect the greatest
Drop and i will hunt u like an animal.............. ......... don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop ..
Hmm.. the story is going well, very creative. The logic in this is quite realistic, it is a little bit disturbing. (is the original author a real doctor or did he search the internet?) Because this is a translated book, the writing quality is so bad it deserves to be a comedy book. It is still readable for the most part.
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Ah yes. “Refine chakra” and “cultivate.” The two things every Chinese fanfic says even though that’s not how chakra works. This wasn’t even edited by a human either. Wind “Escape” instead of Wind Release. “Human Pillar” instead of Jinchuriki. Magatama instead of Tomoe. And what is Earth - Earth - Spear? Is it supposed to be hand seals? Is it Earth Release: Earth Spear? No one knows.
good fanfic ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Очень класно читать далее жду что будет .човшлцфлыгсбчщвгыбчгашубв слвлышбчщслвбвлвлвшслбыдвошцы стяжку бывшего кладбища бывшей Дубравушка слубщыдвбцжды
This is currently the best Naruto fanfic I've read so far. it's absolutely brilliant
after reading several chapter I am surprised this novel have much more reader than Reincarnation Paradise although the premise is interesting but after a while you can see the flaws like the other reviewers says
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I just can't get behind this novel, it's cool and all but it just doesn't make sense at some points. Minor words are just missing from sentences. People can "eat" his radiation to become stronger instead of getting cancer and outright dying. I just finding confusing and less interesting than the title would suggest. Not to mention it feels like a Chinese adaption of a Japanese based manga/anime. And idk about everyone else, but Chinese written styles absolutely ruined Japanese based anime/manga for me.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ as the story continues the translation becomes worse... please translate properly....
I am giving it stars's just because of it being Naruto fanfic. I don't like the peace wanting nature of MC, because he is not like Naruto, he do evil but love peace. MC try to help others by giving or telling them what they can get or achieve without his help.
I like the story but the grammar really need to be improved but the story is in teresting
I thought this novel will be super disappointing, I guessed wrong. I really like the concept of radiation. The only problem I have is the translator. He translates this novel as if it was wuxia, when it's not. Sometimes it's also hard to understand what's going on, because the translation from English > Chinese > English just doesn't make sense. Don't translate mindlessly - think and make corrections!
Amazing translation it doesn't even sound like its translated! MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA
Сюжет клас чем остальных потому что гг не тупой и не добрый очень круто 👍мне понравилось давай ещё таких сюжетов надеюсь ты быстро выпустис ещё много глав
The only thing wrong is translation this thing is a work of art, get past into the later chapters and it isn’t even bad anymore, I recommend with all my soul
this will damage your braincell for every subsequent chapter because chinese language is dumb and it is difficult to translate to english language that make any sense. chinese language is one of the most dull-witted language ever. for example the name obito, when translated from chinese to english is the following: -(the people who brought the soil)= uchiha obito -Taito=obito -(blackened soil)= uchiha obito -(Uchiha brought soil)= uchiha obito -( the soil)= Obito -(bringing the soil)= obito -(with soil)=Obito -(on soil)= on obito ......etc many more just for one uchiha lol how many uchiha do we have? chinese are dumb
Romance scene please.....👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
If you get past the bad translation it’s honestly really good, it has a goal, the mc is smart and ruthless, and doesn’t stick to the story creating his own plans and manipulating characters
The story was good. It interested me to read more than half of the story. Sometimes I wanna drop it but I still wanna read more. There are many things in this story that bothers me. Like another review said, the chinese novel feels very apparent, the grammar is readable but very much bothers me, and sometimes the pronouns are wrong.
It's really weird, I already read this till chapter 200 and I find this story is very similar to"Reincarnation in Naruto World" . . .
good translation . ...................................................................................................
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It's really good, and no I'm not a bot I'm just bored of all the hardcore 1 way plot direction novels, sometimes I like to read about topics that interest me and godzilla in naruto is high on that list. So, it's good if you're just desensitized by all of those novels that focus on 1 tag and do nothing else, and you just want to relax and read something that isn't too complex. sometimes alot of things are mixed up but besides that it's a pretty good novel, I do read alot of qidian novels and I enjoy a lot of them, such as: Cultivation! My Augmented Statuses Have Unlimited Duration, I Have A Super USB Drive, Top Tier Providence Secretly Cultivate For A Thousand Years, Livestream: The Adjudicator of Death, 80 Years Of Signing-In At The Cold Palace I Am Unrivalled, It's Lonely to Be Invincible, and Black Tech Internet Cafe System.
Godzilla absolutely dog walks the Naruto verse so imma just let it stay a 3 star rating for the inconsistency in the power scaling but hey, this is a FF which is also Chinese so can’t expect the greatest
Drop and i will hunt u like an animal.............. ......... don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop ..
Hmm.. the story is going well, very creative. The logic in this is quite realistic, it is a little bit disturbing. (is the original author a real doctor or did he search the internet?) Because this is a translated book, the writing quality is so bad it deserves to be a comedy book. It is still readable for the most part.
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everything is good except mc and translation so i give 4.6 star