One Piece: Pokemon Gacha System

LV 3

DaoistEntropY

Writing is good english is also good . The idea is good but author needs a price reference to avoid being confused. Need a lot of chapter at least 10 more to have accurate review. good job author.

LV 4

Darius_Chromwell

Author i respect you for your choice of honedge but between the cheap harem and the deez 🥜 joke you’ve lost my interest. ☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️

LV 5

Vastoking

There is a lot of missing info that the author just skipped through, and rushed it all with a timeskip of a whole 5 years, That killed the immersion

LV 13

Clasher_805

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LV 10

DaoistAXe9PI

Ótima fan-fic, muito bom 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍

LV 5

Zero_619

The concept for the fanfic is good and the system is not too op at the moment as well so it is balanced right now. The grammar and spelling mistakes could use some correction but it good enough for reading. Hopefully it'll be a good novel for the foreseeable future.

LV 1

Rysangel

Good job ^_^. Need more One piece fanfic with good harem [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update]

LV 1

CrystalRose_3900

exp, hope to see a nice blend between pokemon and one piece [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 2

MarSus

Story flow is good! And english is quite decent :) hopefully author can continue to keep this up![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 10

Kevinsan3141

keep up the good work, and hope he will get kaya as one of his harem >_< [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]