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"Five years! Do you know how these five years have been for me?"
It had been five years since Gongzi Liang was transmigrated to a fantasy world and had received the Legendary Gold System.
However, the system kept nagging him to top up every time.
[$3 for God's Ring, $6 for first-time reward, $18 for enhancement, $28 for God-tier Beast...]
Gongzi Liang could only look at all the god-tier rewards and couldn't do anything because he didn't have money.
But, he did realize that he could level up his skills and strengthen his body by using copper coins. It could save him 99.99% of training.
It wasn't even hard for him to jump a few ranks in one day.
He would also gain coupons by completing the daily missions.
Just like that, Gongzi Liang became obsessed with completing his daily missions...
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เขียนรีวิวThe story's basically combining a number of systems to create one system that provides basically everything to the MC without him having to really do anything. It's also got the usual cliche super handsome MC, but made worse by the MC being a complete idiot who blanks out on noticing there's a girl with him, and also who responds to someone attacking him and trying to kill him (and straight up telling him) with confusion and, again, blanking out. He also constantly gets lost in his own head, where the author takes time to dole out exposition in situations where he should really be focusing on what's in front of him. I don't expect a hypercompetent MC, but I'm certainly not interested in reading about a mentally challenged, milquetoast of an MC who behaves like he's never held a girl's hand before.
Don’t waste your time on this novel. Right from chapter 8 the mc became brain dead. Despite transmigrating and living in this world for 5 years he just acts like he just got transmigrated and doing things like a noobie. I thought this novel would be different from the others but it is indeed worse because it makes you think it’s different but later on looks at you like a fool. Hope this doesn’t get picked and other novels with better potential does.
Oh This Sound Cool I Wonder If It Will Be Like The Others I Choose Which WAS DENIED BECAUSE IT WASN'T ROMANCE OR CULTIVATION, SERIOUSLY WEBNOVELS? Sure The Reader Awaiting For It Was Not Comparable To The Absolutely Garbage Cultivation Novel(No Offense) Was Released, BUT PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD GIVE US SOMETHING UNIQUE
I don't understand person talking its unique. If you compare it with current trash. It's actually good but it's still copy of novels from before. There were few novels with such cheat. Charging system with money and getting stronger. Currently, I don't feel much about this story. Many things are cliche. Considering its standing out to other trash. I feel like it will end at 60th chapter. I will check on this later if I don't forget about it.
story good can be little more detailed and world building is also good not very fast as regular manhua I liked it and also recommend it for enjoyment funny and interesting story would be great if it continues here
The story's basically combining a number of systems to create one system that provides basically everything to the MC without him having to really do anything. It's also got the usual cliche super handsome MC, but made worse by the MC being a complete idiot who blanks out on noticing there's a girl with him, and also who responds to someone attacking him and trying to kill him (and straight up telling him) with confusion and, again, blanking out. He also constantly gets lost in his own head, where the author takes time to dole out exposition in situations where he should really be focusing on what's in front of him. I don't expect a hypercompetent MC, but I'm certainly not interested in reading about a mentally challenged, milquetoast of an MC who behaves like he's never held a girl's hand before.
The story idea of needing of using a pay-to-play system is interesting. Unfortunately most of the sayings and catchphrases use so much of a specific cultures idioms that the translation is garbled on actions, thoughts and descriptions of various things. The mc is so obnoxious that it's hard to find him interesting. With a some solid assistance and some rewriting in other areas it would become a more passable read.
don't know why author made the MC become so stupid and not realize about a lot of logic things that happened. Bottom line the story is below average.
The story is meh the plot is weird and the mc gets betrayed by someone that hired him and the evil person basically does the I’m gonna explain my evil plan to you and the mc goes full retard and thinks maybe he didn’t mean to attack me
A surprisingly great novel! The MC is funny and likable, the author writes the system in a unique and entertaining way that doesn’t make it into a carbon copy of other novels, and the translation quality is very great with almost no mistakes that I could notice! Highly recommend this fast paced and lighthearted read.
Bad just horrifically bad. I almost never leave reviews but this story is bad to the point that I feel the need to leave one. The system is overly complicated to the point of not needing a cheat sheet. The mechanics behind everything is even worse. The MC is so dumb I feel like I am less intelligent for having any insight into his thoughts. The cliches are ridiculous without being funny. This is a few hours of my life I will never get back and I am mad about it
the MC is basically... not a person? has no motivation, randomly goes to where The Plot is happening, and the story just feels cheap? like I could not care any less about any of the characters, they all just feel super flat
Honestly, at first I thought this was a good novel. But after reading a few pages I realized that this novel was too classic, and the plot was predictable. I'm slowly getting bored. When I was in my tens I didn't really want to read any more, this oath was really bad.
The story is good and mc is not stupid and the system is not broken until the eighth chapter, when parkour started, he no longer needs the worker now when he started parkour and he won in ten minutes 100 “ingots”, meaning he has more than one hundred million copper coins, and I know that he needs one hundred thousand To upgrade any skill or ability
The ultimate problem with this story is that the system is too all-encompassing and intrusive. There are many moments where something urgent is happening RIGHT NOW in front of the MCs face, but then there will be paragraphs of digression because of the system. The feeling that the MC is just standing and staring slack-jawed off into space (interacting with his system) while important plot events happen around him appears just a few too many times for my taste. Moreover, the system really just has too many features (just like a real pay-to-win shop). There's a section for MCs cultivation, techniques, and body tempering, there's a section for mounts, for battle pets, for random daily events like parkour, for a "trial tower" he can climb for rewards, for an instance space where he can fight "bosses" he's met in the real world(daily), for a gold farming space, for his personal equipment which he collects by killing monsters and getting "drops", for "synthesis" which can combine pills, techniques, or equipment to make them stronger/higher-grade, for a "gem" sub-section which includes a gem dungeon he can run daily to accumulate gems which can be socketed into his equipment for minor stat increases, for a daily sign-in reward, for a shop that sells items and limited-time gift-bags and not one, not two, but THREE separate currencies to make the whole thing run. And you know what all that stuff actually is? That's word count bayyybeeee~ Seriously, so much of the word count is just MC interacting with the system to get stronger, and so much of the plot just IS the system. The plot feels at once both rushed and like it's dragging because the MC gets stronger so quickly using the system (making it feel rushed) but "quickly" is only relative to time passing in-universe, we readers have to read chapter after chapter of system nonsense to justify his speedy power-ups (making it feel like the story is dragging). At least, that was my impression. The few good points of the story (like MC's bond with his two friends from the sect, which was actually written surprisingly well for a cultivation novel) all get drowned out by a torrent of different system-related shenanigans and its ever-increasing feature creep.
Ight so this story is bad don’t waste your time everything is written like a funny parody without the funny the mc lived for five years saving money so he could activate the system but as soon as he activated it he instantly became a wasteful idiot. I had high hopes but all I received was endless cringe and dumb characters
In my opinion, if the translation and updates section were removed, this story would only get a 3.0 rating. Why? Well, for starters, although the world background looks well thought out, it isn't that great, in my opinion - at least at the beginning, since we don't know much about the wider scope. All we know is the sect - I mean, come on, at least tell us what's beyond the sect and it's scope of influence at the beginning, so we know what we're dealing with and how much to sympathize with the travel and influence systems of the MC's world. Next, let's take a look at character design. All I have to say for this is that there's nothing riveting about the character design. Also, I have a hundred different impressions of the MC because of this storytelling. Speaking of which, the storytelling. I have to say, the plot idea of the author was amazing, but his storytelling was not quite up to mark. He seems to be trying to speed up and breeze through everything, but if you're gonna explain, try and explain everything. Also, if you read my books and think I'm a hypocrite, you're free to think so - it's because I contracted Author's Disease - the disease where suddenly every book other than yours is more interesting to you, so you read them and don't write yours.
I used to write review for no reason so I will do this once more----- so the premise has broken through the heavenly mind blowing realm but if the execution will be shallow then it cannot survive the heavenly lightning tribulations of fellow daoist readers.
Not sure what's going on with some of these reviews. This story is bad. I mean it might be better than most of this batch of stories, but that's not exactly a high bar. It's almost written like it is supposed to be a parody of some system novels the problem is the jokes just don't land that well and are just kind of eh. The MC is kind of meh as well. The system is just terrible.