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Awakened As A Dungeon Core?

Fantasy 155 ตอน 1.2M จำนวนคนดู
นักเขียน: Bietarnu

4.12 (19 เรตติ้ง)

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What happens when a normal man awakens in a world of magic and monsters? What if he awakens as a gemstone that can't move, eat, or communicate but is somehow alive? What happens when this stone learns to cast magic and create rooms, to bring life to monsters of its own and defend itself from invaders? This is the story of that mans journey from a small one room tunnel to a magnificent challenge to the universe.

Chapters range from 1k-1.5k words usually! First time writing this type of novel but always wanted to try so any feedback helps!
Also below is my patreon! Most things to influence my novel are free but by subscribing to it you help me afford more time to write instead of working two jobs as well as to commission artists to turn my monsters and manic dream creatures into reality!
https://patreon.com/user?u=71062598

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    เขียนรีวิว
    KING_Core7619

    well I got tricked in the first 19 chapters that this is a good novel but from chapter 20 it gets trashy the mc is a absolute idiot like come man is the mc the mc or his subordinates or intruders because they get seen more and decides everything for him even things about him self

    3yr
    ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
    JesusXChrist

    Good book, interesting view as a Dungeon Core, Mc is a bit naive and stupid at times, but still a pretty good MC. Not much lore yet, but there's seems to be some coming up, recently established ranking system for the bosses of his Dungeon, although no ranks for the normal mobs yet I believe there will be. Interesting take on how when creatures or humanoids die in the Dungeon, he Becomes able to make them. Although there is no summoning of his own type of creatures, he is able to spawn in multipul copys of anything that dies within his Dungeon minus any intelligence they had when alive. Although the MC is a bit late on the uptake that he is a rock/Dungeon Core & not a human. I believe he will be able to grow soon enough to become a Ruthless Dungeon Core. Book is very similar to those Demon ruling a Dungeon type Tropes with a bit of a twist where it's the core itself, so it's not the enemy of humans. So far, I'd say this book is 8/10, but if/when the MC becomes more ruthless it has the possibility to be a 10/10

    1yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Tainowarchief

    Very good glad your back, keep up the good work

    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    j_the_gamer_yo

    At 1st I like the story but in the main character start to become way too nice.

    1yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Ignacio_Gimeno

    It has a dungeon vibe, but thats all. The writing is weird sometimes, with typos there and there, the characters are bidimensional and the story goes too fast, making any evolution in characters akward. The main character is a secondary character and the story is writen in first person in present, a curious choice, but also harder to use. To be fair I only read a third of the book, mainly because a got bored. Is very light, but this factor is more of a personal taste. The main character is also extremly naive, and aparently everyone is. If you want a light non complex dungeon "theme" novel, this would do the trick, but not very good otherwise.

    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Lestda
    LV 15 Badge

    The concept of the novel was good till the MC transformed into a total Little Pony Naive Simp, the Dungeon was a dungeon for the first 5chaps and then turned into a typical employee slave... This was a total disappointment, and for the great top of the crop, the novel is already being dropped little by little. Don't waste your time here, the Author took a very easy and good concept (dungeon maker, dungeon core being) and ruined it in just 20 chaps.

    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    zxjan08
    LV 14 Badge

    If the dungeon ever gets a revamp I think it would be cool to have style transition floors that make sence like the castle, for example you could do a mining cave -> mining cave -> underground pool leading to an water themed level (beach, underwater, whatever) transition to a jungle/forest -> dead forest area -> dealands/desert -> volcano -> mountains -> snowy mountains -> cloud area

    1yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    KingPumpkin3

    Why is my name in another book hahahahahha what is going on

    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    OzzMan
    LV 14 Badge

    I've read up to 100, and so far I've been enjoying it. This story feels like a slow burn, moving the story forward wise. Maybe too convenient getting super rare demon summon, but I'm okay with that. Dunno if giving him crazy super dungeon to fight so early is the way to go, but we'll see how it progresses.

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    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    _Heavenly_Demon_

    the only bad thing about this novel is there is not enough chapters

    1mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Derek_Beane

    it's a good read to be honest I wasn't sure if I'd like it but now I'm worried it got dropped since there's been no update in 5 months

    2mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    HighLordWarden

    great read so far, looking forward to how it may develop

    11mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    NorskyMcNorskFace

    Really enjoying this story! The world and description of the monsters is great and refreshing! All types of skills, powers, etc.

    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Victor_32

    Please don’t drop this till 1000 + chapters really good development so far!!!! Keep up the hard work

    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Lopy2323

    Great novel ...........,. .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

    2yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Greg_Holinger

    honestly i dont like kyle much but it doesnt focus on him too much which i do like also the plenty of perspectives is really cool pretty rare to see it so you get everyones perspective which i really like honestly i just hope this novel doesnt get abandoned like many others because its pretty good

    2yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Bellandi

    I will wait until the story has 50ch and revise the score. Work well, author~ ...............................................................

    3yr
    ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
    Live_And_Let_Go

    A very well thought out and executed book. Nothing feels forced and it has a very natural flow to it. I hope you keep going with this. .....

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
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    Chapter 155: Hunters Collide 8 months ago

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    1. 1
      Awaken 3 years ago
    2. 2
      It's been how long?!?! 3 years ago
    3. 3
      Monsters and Mana 3 years ago
    4. 4
      Rotten Luck 3 years ago
    5. 5
      Bosses and Baddies 3 years ago
    6. 6
      Advent...urers? 3 years ago
    7. 7
      Level up! 3 years ago
    8. 8
      Class is In Session 3 years ago
    9. 9
      Casting the Line 3 years ago
    10. 10
      A Big Catch 3 years ago
    11. 11
      Dungeon Corruption 3 years ago
    12. 12
      Side Chapter-Jogur and the Bandits 3 years ago
    13. 13
      Dungeon Updates 3 years ago
    14. 14
      A Truce? 3 years ago
    15. 15
      The First Floor 3 years ago
    16. 16
      Spooky Round 2 3 years ago
    17. 17
      The Second Floors Debut 3 years ago
    18. 18
      Snakes and Shank 3 years ago
    19. 19
      Making a Deal 3 years ago
    20. 20
      Side Chapter-Tyr 3 years ago
    21. 21
      Dungeon Abilities 3 years ago
    22. 22
      A Valuable Asset 3 years ago
    23. 23
      Adoption 3 years ago
    24. 24
      Floor Upgrades! 3 years ago
    25. 25
      New Challengers Appear 3 years ago
    26. 26
      The First Floor 3 years ago
    27. 27
      Vindictive Spook 3 years ago
    28. 28
      Baby Steps 3 years ago
    29. 29
      Tyr and the Iron 3 years ago
    30. 30
      Spectres and Scritchers 3 years ago
    31. 31
      The Scritcher Nest 3 years ago
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      Alpha Attack 3 years ago
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      Flippy 3 years ago
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      Dethroned Despot 3 years ago
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      Lanyo 3 years ago
    36. 36
      Abyssal Assistance 3 years ago
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      Getting the goods 2 years ago
    38. 38
      Gacha and the demon 2 years ago
    39. 39
      The Abyss looks back 2 years ago
    40. 40
      Lanyo's Woes 2 years ago
    41. 41
      Dungeoneering 101 2 years ago
    42. 42
      The Noobs Struggle 2 years ago
    43. 43
      Chunks Secret 2 years ago
    44. 44
      Blighted Boar 2 years ago
    45. 45
      Castyr Camping 2 years ago
    46. 46
      Bigoted Boss Battles 2 years ago
    47. 47
      The Trio VS Spooky 2 years ago
    48. 48
      The Dungeons Gift 2 years ago
    49. 49
      Side Chapter-Sarah 2 years ago
    50. 50
      Dressed to Distress 2 years ago
    51. 51
      Deranged Damsels 2 years ago
    52. 52
      Battle of the Blacksmith 2 years ago
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      Henwick 2 years ago
    54. 54
      Henwick Part 2 2 years ago
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      Henwick Part 3 2 years ago
    56. 56
      Shank N' Spank 2 years ago
    57. 57
      The Snail Shuffle 2 years ago
    58. 58
      Snuffed Out Spanks 2 years ago
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      Lanyo's Foes 2 years ago
    60. 60
      Dread Servant 2 years ago
    61. 61
      Psychedelic 2 years ago
    62. 62
      Skills and Thrills(This is an ability choice chapter! Actual Chapter tomorrow!) 2 years ago
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      Choices and Caretakers 2 years ago
    64. 64
      The Duo 2 years ago
    65. 65
      Guzzle's Grand Gulp 2 years ago
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      Cruelty for Cruelty's Sake 2 years ago
    67. 67
      Magically Malicious 2 years ago
    68. 68
      Bertram's Band of Bandits 2 years ago
    69. 69
      Broken Pact And Boss Attack 2 years ago
    70. 70
      Beggar and Zod 2 years ago
    71. 71
      The Kings Karma 1 years ago
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      Lycan Artist 1 years ago
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      In-A-Net Troll 1 years ago
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      The Chief Concern 1 years ago
    75. 75
      Big Boy's Don't Die 1 years ago
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      Despot's Denial 1 years ago
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      Bandits Breach 1 years ago
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      Secret Surprise Inside! 1 years ago
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      Mountains Collide 1 years ago
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      3 Strike Distraction 1 years ago
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      Fraz The Shroom Boomer 1 years ago
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      The Boom Shroom 1 years ago
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      Law of the Dungeon 1 years ago
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      Calm Before the Storm(Ability Choices) 1 years ago
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      Operation Exorcism 1 years ago
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      Homebuilding 1 years ago
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      Marching Orders 1 years ago
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      A Womping Good Time 1 years ago
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      Trail Of Fears 1 years ago
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      Homes and Horror 1 years ago
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      Side Story-Wompa 1 years ago
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      Jaded 1 years ago
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      First Floor 1 years ago
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      Bridges and Battle 1 years ago
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      Ridscar the Wyrm Rider 1 years ago
    96. 96
      The Merchant of Souls? 1 years ago
    97. 97
      Third Floor Troubles 1 years ago
    98. 98
      The Start of The Fall 1 years ago
    99. 99
      The Fall 1 years ago
    100. 100
      The Fall Part 2 1 years ago
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      The Crones Obsession 1 years ago
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      Blood and Diamonds 1 years ago
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      Orphans Anger 1 years ago
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      Blood Ties 1 years ago
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      Buying Buffs 1 years ago
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      Meating a Monster 1 years ago
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      Gristle and Bone 1 years ago
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      Tinker, Tailor, Toy Maker 1 years ago
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      Jack Be Nimble Jack Be Quick 1 years ago
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      Slumming It 1 years ago
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      Invasion of the Apprentice 1 years ago
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      The Trio Unite 1 years ago
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      Abominable Orphans 1 years ago
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      Religious Differences 1 years ago
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      Fanatics Fervor 1 years ago
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      Combatting Insanity (Warning-Explicit Chapter) 1 years ago
    117. 117
      Guild Ghouls 1 years ago
    118. 118
      Twins of a Feather 1 years ago
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      Ghoulish Gauntlet 1 years ago
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      Gladiator Games 1 years ago
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      Balgura Bashing 1 years ago
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      Crystal Crushing 1 years ago
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      A Surprise From Nature 1 years ago
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      Bloody Job Interviews 1 years ago
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      Massacre of the Matriarch 1 years ago
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      Ancient Enemies 1 years ago
    127. 127
      [Bonus chapter]A Glimpse into the Past 1 years ago
    128. 128
      Presents From The Past 1 years ago
    129. 129
      Warriors Woe 1 years ago
    130. 130
      Round Five! Fight! 1 years ago
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      Horker's Demise 1 years ago
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      Chibby and Earl 1 years ago
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      Noble Intentions 1 years ago
    134. 134
      Battle of the Bards 1 years ago
    135. 135
      [Bonus chapter] Misadventures of Gorask and Friends 1 years ago
    136. 136
      Race to the Finish 1 years ago
    137. 137
      Mounting Up 1 years ago
    138. 138
      The Great Race 1 years ago
    139. 139
      Area One 1 years ago
    140. 140
      Through the Woods 11 months ago
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      Over the Mountains 11 months ago
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      Across the Peaks 10 months ago
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      Into the Sea 10 months ago
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      Fighting the Waves 10 months ago
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      Leafing the Sands 10 months ago
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      The Finesh 9 months ago
    147. 147
      The Finish 9 months ago
    148. 148
      The Hunter and Prey 9 months ago
    149. 149
      Into The Woods We Go 9 months ago
    150. 150
      Rapid Battle and Realizations 9 months ago
    151. 151
      Talent Acquisition 9 months ago
    152. 152
      Shadows Within Shadows 8 months ago
    153. 153
      Royal Clash 8 months ago
    154. 154
      Master Of The Hunt 8 months ago
    155. 155
      Hunters Collide 8 months ago

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