Tainowarchief

Tainowarchief

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2019-01-16 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
2 days ago
Replied to Martin_Leong_4647

Next it will be megazords 😂

He had done his best, after all. How could he compete with the likes of the mighty Gundams?

Starting from the Planetary Governor

Starting from the Planetary Governor

Sci-fi · Red Heart Fabric

Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
18 days ago
Replied to Smurfette

The author is making artificial difficulty because he made him too strong.

Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
20 days ago
Replied to Tainowarchief

My mistake he wasn’t I Minotaur his robot was. I was just under the impression he had bionic enhancements as well.

Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
20 days ago
Replied to Shazorwy

The leader of the mercenaries. Thunderclap or something like that

Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
21 days ago
Commented

They aren’t in the aquarium anymore. Is this story AI generated or something?

He pushed the door open, stepping into the chamber containing the specially-made glass aquarium, large enough to accommodate a mini-ecosystem for his growing chimera colony. His eyes immediately fell on the tiny figure within the container, nestled in a corner. There it was—the newly hatched frog variant, its glossy dark green body glinting under the dim light.

The Eccentric Entomologist is Now a Queen's Consort

The Eccentric Entomologist is Now a Queen's Consort

Fantasy · Arkalphaze

Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
21 days ago
Commented

Why can’t Carlos have nanobots like nobles? Not at the level of Rex but if even that minataur could have them why can’t Carlos?

Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
22 days ago
Commented

I imagined them almost gorilla like.

Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
1 months ago
Commented

Yea I don’t know what’s wrong with this author. He needs to have some long chats with a shrink.

But as he read, he thought. 'Well, when I rape her, it won't matter!'

The Magical Path Of The Wizard With A Biological Chip

The Magical Path Of The Wizard With A Biological Chip

Fantasy · WOODD

Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
1 months ago
Commented

This chapter needs editing. It jumps around way to much. Almost like you wrote the paragraphs separately and put them in the wrong place.

Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
2 months ago
Posted

Very good so far and unique which I find is the most important in this genre. As long as the MC doesn’t get too ridiculous and a few side characters are given their time to shine and aren’t just trade bots for the story.