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The New Continent

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นักเขียน: Dr_Dred

4.62 (21 เรตติ้ง)

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Jarvis Maximus has awoken on an unknown continent on Earth though in this universe Earth was different as leaders for each nation was different from the ones in reality

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Ardenleigh

Terrible , this book doesnt even hry to be something that has meaning , nothing to set it aside from other books . Story absolute s*it Characters mentality is absolute random , jimping from one thing to another , no backstory on the summons ( i guess that works when its one use type , but …) Update stability , none Writing quality , fine not special Dont reccomend even giving this a try , currently waste of time

3yr
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khodohadi

The author is this dropped? ........................................................ ......................................................... .

3yr
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Samuel_Batista

Well, Author by the way is maybe a beginner, since you simply accelerated things a lot, there was no development of love and feelings between the characters they just decided to 'date' out of nowhere but apart from that the story has great potential for development, thank you .

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3yr
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OrIgIn
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Honestly, the author is way too fast paced with this story, they could have started slow, progressed the character and world development and then prepared Jarvis for the fight against the demon lord or whatever. It takes just a couple of chapters for Jarvis to win the fight and it takes even less time for him to develop better technology. Also, the system, it would have been better if he got knowledge rewards instead of straight up real people, it makes the story and effort shallow and the people feel soul-less. The characters as well feel a little shallow and empty, let them develop with more screen time or whatever is the equivalent. Overall, a great story concept and execution for a first try attempt, I assume. Just slow down to story and let it breath and settle a little.

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3yr
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akira3

did you drop this story?? ................................................................................................................................

3yr
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OHO
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Nicely done, please update. .............................................................................................................. ................

3yr
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TianTu

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3yr
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Trever1337

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3yr
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leoreview1

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3yr
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Zay_Hayden

Waiting to see how the story develops. Current chapter is 1

1yr
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unseenpickle

This is fanfic of what?⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️⭐️⭐️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

1yr
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LazyLord

Please drop more chapters, this story is a masterpiece. 💯

1yr
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Creativityiskey

This is a amazing book i see nothing wrong with it I recommend reading this book you wont regret it and in the future I might give this book my powerstones!!

1yr
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Oji_san_ecchi

cerita yang keren, semua ceritamu keren, saya harap semua novel kerenmu tetap dilanjutkan, saya tunggu bab bab selanjutnya!!

1yr
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BOOM_M

hello author is this dropped as of now ? as I wanted to read it but don't wanna read incompleted work as it ruins the mood if I get addicted to it

2yr
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Daniel_Setchell

Good book…………………………………………………………………………….

2yr
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IsekaiLord

So, i like the story and where this is going, but remove the indian monarch. It can pretty much make the wifey balance go downhill bc she's a royal. I had been vibing till she came in the picture- so it would not be bad if in the next 1-3 chapters she would die... you know, for character development too, and you could push the mc's way of conquering with a great justification right?

3yr
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Imperialista

Like kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkajjakakakakakakakakakakkakakakakakakakakakakakakkaakakkakahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhhahahaha

3yr
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Azazel_70

good story don't drop .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . .. . . . .. .. . .. . ........ . . . . . .. . .. . .

3yr
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DaoistNUiOlx

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3yr
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Chapter 70: The destruction of the Orc Fleet 5 months ago

จำนวน 0 : Auxiliary Volume

  1. Characters 9 months ago

จำนวน 1

  1. 1
    The New Continent (Reworked Version) 1 years ago
  2. 2
    The Hive's Skirmish 1 years ago
  3. 3
    Taming the First Hive Queen 1 years ago
  4. 4
    Taming the Second Hive Queen 1 years ago
  5. 5
    New Quests From the System 1 years ago
  6. 6
    New Discovery 1 years ago
  7. 7
    Time Skip 1 years ago
  8. 8
    Demon Lord 1 years ago
  9. 9
    The Start of the Demon War 1 years ago
  10. 10
    The Forbidden Skill Is weak 1 years ago
  11. 11
    The Demon Lord's Demise 1 years ago
  12. 12
    The Continent is revealed 1 years ago
  13. 13
    Diplomatic Meeting's 1 years ago
  14. 14
    The 1st Year 1 years ago
  15. 15
    Supporting the Manchukuo Government 1 years ago
  16. 16
    The Start of the Manchukuo War For Freedom 1 years ago
  17. 17
    The Empire's Army Arrives 1 years ago
  18. 18
    The Empire's army advances 1 years ago
  19. 19
    The Manchukuo Emperor has returned 1 years ago
  20. 20
    African Expansion Begins 1 years ago
  21. 21
    The Rebel Demons 1 years ago
  22. 22
    The End of the War 1 years ago
  23. 23
    Arriving in Kyoto 1 years ago
  24. 24
    Failed Negotiations 1 years ago
  25. 25
    The Invasion of Kyoto 1 years ago
  26. 26
    The War is Still Going on? 1 years ago
  27. 27
    Peace At Last 1 years ago
  28. 28
    The beginning of the Chinese Unification War 1 years ago
  29. 29
    The US and UK Phone Call 1 years ago
  30. 30
    The New African Organization 1 years ago
  31. 31
    The First Meeting of the UAN 1 years ago
  32. 32
    False Claims by the Pope 1 years ago
  33. 33
    The start of the 30 Day War 1 years ago
  34. 34
    The Republic of China is no More 1 years ago
  35. 35
    The Unification of the Chinese Empire 1 years ago
  36. 36
    General of the UAN 1 years ago
  37. 37
    The World 1 years ago
  38. 38
    Diplomacy works 1 years ago
  39. 39
    A Major Conflict in the making 1 years ago
  40. 40
    The Middle East Situation 1 years ago
  41. 41
    Human Greed 1 years ago
  42. 42
    Russia is Guilty 1 years ago
  43. 43
    A New Problem arises 1 years ago
  44. 44
    Space Station 1 years ago
  45. 45
    Cuban Crisis 1 years ago
  46. 46
    Cuba Saved? 1 years ago
  47. 47
    A Situation in the making 1 years ago
  48. 48
    The Rebuilding of Cuba 1 years ago
  49. 49
    The New President of Cuba 1 years ago
  50. 50
    Foundation of a New Alliance 11 months ago
  51. 51
    Indian Membership? 11 months ago
  52. 52
    Her Highness Visits 11 months ago
  53. 53
    Protection from the future 11 months ago
  54. 54
    India Meeting 10 months ago
  55. 55
    Cooperation between members 10 months ago
  56. 56
    French Embargo on Morocco 10 months ago
  57. 57
    Progress on the Space Station 9 months ago
  58. 58
    Demon Base 9 months ago
  59. 59
    Announcement 9 months ago
  60. 60
    War with Russia Part 1 9 months ago
  61. 61
    War with Russia Part 2 8 months ago
  62. 62
    The World's Reaction 8 months ago
  63. 63
    Alien Invasion 7 months ago
  64. 64
    Global Crisis 7 months ago
  65. 65
    The World On Fire 7 months ago
  66. 66
    African Campaign 1 6 months ago
  67. 67
    How the world is doing 6 months ago
  68. 68
    Victory over the Orc Commander 5 months ago
  69. 69
    The Space Marines are Here 5 months ago
  70. 70
    The destruction of the Orc Fleet 5 months ago

นักเขียน Dr_Dred