Snake Evolution System [ Legend Of Hebi]

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SHIVAM_Chouksey

Hello, guys, your dear author is here, I just wanted to say that my English is not good because English is not my first language, but I am trying very hard to improve myself, please keep loving and keep supporting my work.

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Kentaikan

It's a good book but It doesn't have many chapters yet so I cant really talk about update stability or world/character development but I will say its a good story that reminds me of The Snake Report and Tales of the World Devouring Serpent the only issue is the grammar which the author is getting better at after each chapter so overall its a read.

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SHIVAM_Chouksey

HI, Author here! Shamelessly reviewing his work the second time after completing one month. Of course, I rated it for 5. But if you have free time and nothing to do, try to peek and read in this novel. Maybe what you’re looking for is here. [img=recommend] The greatness of this novel cannot be found in the early chapter. Every character in this novel is 4d😉. So try and see. Then don’t forget to leave a review. And if you are more than generous, I will be happy and be more motivated if you can drop some power stones or send gifts. BIG THANKS FOR READING!!

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BloodyArk

dear author I'm going to be honest with you I really like the story development and even the fact that you let your readers create the image of your main character can be overlooked but. . . you should seriously think about stopping the releases for a while and fix the already posted chapters because at the start your grammar mistakes were bearable but instead of improving you worsened the quality of your writing. . . I have to literally guess what you were trying to say in certain lines and you often use wrong words if you use autocorrect turn it off and if you're not using it then turn it on I don't know what to say. . . aside from that you have poor description of the world background like you only say that the place is really beautiful, there are some ruins, a forest and that's it dude turn on your imagination if not just the readers for some pointers this app is not just for posting chapters also the character development is too fast like in just 10 short chapters the main character is akin to a boss also you haven't described the characters at all aside from the small details like their hair length, hair color, eye color and their gender and instead of describing their cloths you always use robes. . . you can't fool us😅 I honestly don't want to drop this book because it has potential just work on it and your writing.

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ElaryWakefield

This is an amazing story! I am really hooked from the begining. I want the MC to grow and gain levels. I love the imagery from the MC hatching. I can just see a snake feeling the same! And it just gets better from there!

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ForgottenHope

I really like what you got going on here, but the grammar is pretty bad. Regardless am enjoying this a lot, but please re-read your chapters at least 3 times before updating the story. Also, you might wanna correct some/alot of grammatical mistakes on the last chapters, because for a lot of people the first chapters are always their first impressions of the book.

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Jjjonse

This is going to be the most honest review you will find. This book is a fun read and thats what it is. There are many grmmar mistakes but you can deal with them and the author is indian so understandable. Also the charecters are really stale and corny. Overall iff you want a really solid book with an in depth story this is not the one but if you just want a fun read to relax to this is it.

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yawn26

I started reading but found it difficult due to the words not being used or structured right, you can get the jist of what your trying to say in it but it is difficult to read the English, I hope you can reread and fix them or get someone who can proof read your work before hand might help.

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Little_Foxxy

We've seen spider, fox, ant and slime. And now the author present you with his creative way of writing, a snake reincarnation! I say, who tf care about a little problem of grammar. I for one don't come for a novel to learn language. As long the words reaches me, the world is there, the character is there. So this novel did well sketching interests. I recommend you this novel, to follow an adventure that you wouldn't have in real sad life.

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Xeon_17

it's nice to see a fellow Indian write a novel. Although the English is kinda poor at some points, it's understandable so I don't mind. Anyways keep up the great work.

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Stephanie_Rasanya_1576

actually, this is a nice story. The plot of the story is super exciting and it makes me want to read it more. keep it up, author. good luck with your future.

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Heavenly_Demon007

Wow an op serpent, this is something new and kind of interesting, I have read only two chapters and here I am leaving a rating, please support this author he is best.

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Strdie21

the story seems to be interesting but lot grammar mistakes. i understand English is not native language but when you publish a work you should put out good quality. would recommend for everyone to give a read and ecide for themselves

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FlowingLqD

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Avatar_of_pain

A great start a good MC but I am at chapter 20 but I had to say something this novel is a story worth reading a following it has some unique elements you don't see often

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smoker_re

I love the beauty of this book, the background is awesome. I love this kind of plot, the author is doing a great job and I hope he continued his amazing work.

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KAMEHAMEHA2020

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Prince_jr

this is awesome i like this novel most and i add this novel to my library and well i give three star rating so please see my review now im reading the 81 th chapter this novel , you reached 180 chapters please slow down your writing this is only for two week so that i can read it faster and even more .

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Tzakar

Everything is going too fast, maybe it's going to be better in the following chapters but I can't immerse myself in the story due to many grammar and vocabulary mistakes. English isn't my first language either so I can understand that is not easy but still, it's too much mistakes for me... As i was saying, everuthing is going too fast, many things happen without any explication... but well i'm only at chapter 27 so who knows. The story is interesting and I hope the author continue with his good ideas. If you don't mind the numerous mistakes and fast pace novel then i suggest you give this novel a try.