the novel needs serious rewriting, don't mind the grammar mistakes, the writing style itself needs some work, like when changing POV the author does it too many times and for insignificant stuff...
"Kid's dinner is ready!"
Summoner: Monster Girl Harem!
Fantasy · Duke_Asmodeus
finally because I personally think, that Damien's "flashback" was UNNECESSARILY LONG! like please remind me who was the protagonist of the story? because with so many chapters dedicated to him I kinda forgot... I really had to go back to the previous chapters to remember what novel I was reading!
We will be back to Mc's (Roy) story
Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
Fantasy · Crimson_ink
same
"It was a shame how he carried on🎵."
I Quit Being The Villain
Urban · Kurupts
Don. Don. DOONN!!!
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My Necromancer Class
Fantasy · Aero182
what about the necklace...
[Accessory: True Spirit Ring +5 (Ignore Armor, Summon True Spirit, 20% All Resistances)]
Online Game: I Began By Enhancing Endlessly With My SSS Rank Talent
Games · Tobacco Grows Cold Easily
BS
It was not important if the class could deal high damage. Being handsome was the number one priority.
Online Game: I Began By Enhancing Endlessly With My SSS Rank Talent
Games · Tobacco Grows Cold Easily
BS
Zhou Han directly chose to be a Swordsman. He felt that it was convenient to use a sword, and it was quite handsome.
Online Game: I Began By Enhancing Endlessly With My SSS Rank Talent
Games · Tobacco Grows Cold Easily
nightbringer and mage sound good to me
Swordsman, Monk, Archer, Mage, Clergyman, Nightbringer, and Lancer.
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Games · Tobacco Grows Cold Easily
couldn't you make it like.. apprentice mage mage apprentice wizard wizard apprentice sage sage and depending on your attitudes and ways of study, make different wariations like... witch/warlock (female/male), battle mage, imperial mage, Arcane mage and many more
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My Incestuous Life
Fantasy · _taki
maybe "most of the planet" as in literally the planet itself 😆
To reach its original state as a 200,000-ton paragon of annihilation would likely require consuming most of this planet.
Alien Evolution System
Fantasy · John_Doever