Reviews of Percy Jackson: Human Gamer by Plebston323 - Webnovel

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Plebston323

A shameless review on my own story, If you didn't know the story is about then heres a summery. There is a teen named Nathan Parker who is a clear sighted mortal, who suffers at the knowledge of the supernatural world. Nathan lost both his parents at a young age with no one believing him about the monsters that live around them. One day Nathan wakes up to the system greeting him, before it leading him on a adventure never seen before.

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Oleg_Nikitin

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Numera

more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

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Nar_cisse

After 15 chapters : - The story is too fast paced, there is no development of relationships with percy or (SPOIL: Magnus) and they are briefly mentionned - The dungeons on which the MC goes are brushed over, we see absolutely nothing - The qualité of writing show that even if it's not poorly written, the author does not read his story before posting. So, in summary : The idea is interesting but the way it was executed does not serve justice to what - I think - the author truly wanted at the beginning. - The MC gains levels way too fast

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Fikerrr

I really liked this FF that is about Percy Jackson world. It's just sad that its dropped, but anyways good job author! If you ever decide to continue writing this, I'll support you with a lot of stones :)

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Nah_U_Stupid

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Nah_U_Stupid

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Koushik_Dutta_2648

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Jashandeep_Sandhu

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CookieFighter

it's a good story, change from the usual ff in percy jackson. keep on writing it author and i'll read it. .

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Jashandeep_Sandhu

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Sheptshept

Lo mismo Que la película o libro sólo que el mc es la niñera autoproclamada de percy y también es una historia muy infantil en algunos puntos no es que odie la historia pero me da asquito seguir leyendo esto el protagonista tiene 14 pero al parecer se adapta muy pero muy rápido al sistema gamer es una historia aburrida de un autor con ganas de llamar la atención a lo grande no digo que el autor este mal pero no se necesita poner el put0 Estado del mc cada ves que hace algo y tampoco hagas que con sólo un par de giros ya sea un prodigio de nivel 49 ...en fin mi puntuación para este fanfic es un 2/10 salu2

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jhsilver

Alright bro this is pretty great, but I do not understand the purposes of the talking system, especially for a gamer system it doesn’t make sense to have one. The name itself is self-explanatory. And even if it was complicated enough that it needs some things to be explained. Tell me, why it is that such an advanced system can’t just simply put the information the Host needs in their mind already. Like its Limitation what it can or cannot do, what its function does etc. Always besides that this a pretty great and I do recommend if you can look past the Talking System to check this out.