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Does this one have lemons like Conquerors Path? I am wondering because I really like the authors other work and was thinking of checking this one out.
The author said and I quote "read my new novel. You won't regret it." But I do regret it. This novel is not bad per say but it is mid compared to the other novel "The conqueror's path". I had high expectations because I thought it would be better than that but I was wrong. The characters are bland, their interaction and relationship looks forced. And most of the dialougues come out as cringe. All these things worked in the author's previous novel because we knew that we mc was behaving that way intentionally but here it falls disgracefully. Even the heroines that are introduced so far are not as likeable as they should be. As for the reason why I am only mentioning bad points, it's because almost every other review talked about its good things. 3.5 if i take out my frustaration and disappointment from rating
My honest opinion on this story is that it's good but not the best it could be honestly it doesn't help it doesn't have as much update(for a good reason obviously)on it so it take a while before we get a new chapter it's doesn't help mc is edgey (because everyone loves edgey mcs for some reason)and it's overcomplicated in some areas when it shouldn't be and some time overused plot armor to explain things specially the reason for him to be dense and finally mc powers I say it's here moment I saw death I have a feeling I know who author using for mc Powers second I saw the shadow I know it mc just the cultivator version of shadow monarch from Solo leveling honestly I'm tried of seeing shadow monarch and Hades in story's like they are overused just like the sharingan
Simply put, the novel is amazing, and even though I would prefer it to be a little faster, I still love it I could say I like it better than the author's other novel.... Keep up the good work author, don't disappear!
**REVIEW AFTER CH135** This is one of the best novels. Not only OP, but also smart MC. Excellent world building. Good romance. Only the problem is the updates.
Here I come back I notice this novel is finally getting updates and I am so excited 😆 honestly last time their was around 180 chapters if I remember but now it currently have over 200 😭 more more plz focus more on this one for now author ✍️🙄
it's a slow pace story but when you get the hang of it then it is the best of any novel you have read
Yun Xiao / Azrail D Xavon💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕.........💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
this author is the type to love an op mc but this time he's kinda overdone it. the mc is directly related to powerful women who end up falling in love with him.it's not bad but it is overdone. for all 180 chapters it has almst all been about the mc's development giving off the vibe that the author is setting up a very big stage for later on in the story. whether the author can handle the expectations remains to be seen. on tthe other hand, if the harem is gonna start let it start with the mc's mother and sister. overall, a story with with a lot of potential
Author why did you stop updating this? this was one of my favourite novels in this app.
I have reached the end of this fascinating world, this was a truly amazing journey you have given me.I had the pleasure of immersing myself in a captivating novel that left me spellbound from start to finish. The book I'm referring to is a masterpiece of storytelling, with its unique blend of worldbuilding, intriguing characters, and a protagonist whose mysterious ability to traverse time adds a layer of fascination that kept me glued to its pages. One of the standout aspects of this novel is its exceptional worldbuilding. The author skillfully crafted a rich and intricate universe that effortlessly transported me into alternate histories and realms. Every detail, from the vivid descriptions to the intricacies of the societies portrayed, was brought to life in a way that made me feel fully immersed in the story. Speaking of characters, the protagonist's tragic past and his enigmatic time-traveling abilities added a depth and complexity to his journey that tugged at my heartstrings. I found myself empathizing with his struggles and rooting for him every step of the way. The exploration of alternate histories and the consequences of his actions in those worlds were nothing short of sorrowful, leaving a profound impact on me as a reader. But it wasn't just the protagonist who stole the show. The diverse cast of women that the protagonist mingled with created a compelling and heartfelt harem romance that added another layer of depth to the narrative. Each woman was intricately developed, and their interactions with the protagonist felt authentic and meaningful. What impressed me the most was that none of them came across as annoying or one-dimensional; they all had their unique stories and contributions that made me appreciate their presence in the protagonist's life. Throughout this emotional journey, I found myself engrossed in the tale, eagerly turning the pages to uncover the next twist and revelation. The author's ability to evoke a range of emotions, from joy and excitement to heartache and longing, is a testament to their skillful storytelling and the powerful impact of their words.I am also deeply intrigued by the hidden forces and mysteries that lie within the pages of this book. The author has skillfully woven a web of intrigue and secrets that kept me on the edge of my seat, eagerly anticipating each new revelation. As I turned the final page, I couldn't help but feel a bittersweet longing for more, yearning to delve further into this captivating world. With each chapter, the author's grace and mastery over storytelling shone through, leaving me hungry for the next installment. I am eagerly awaiting any new developments and eagerly anticipating the future chapters that will continue to unfold this extraordinary narrative. In summary, this book has enthralled me with its fascinating concepts, intricate worldbuilding, and complex characters. Its ability to evoke a range of emotions, from excitement to sorrow, and its ability to keep me guessing, has truly made it a standout piece of literature. I wholeheartedly recommend it to any reader seeking a mesmerizing blend of romance, mystery, and alternate history.
It's an alright story. Better than cliche reborn stories, but still nothing too great as great stories need great characters. So, I gave it 6.8/10
novel is too generic, predictable, cringe. the writing quality is bad. yikes
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I have to say i didn't expect much form the novel for pass my time or because i like the other novel author write , but this great gem hidden in mist, writing is top notch pace the story goes is awesome & the way mc deployed is so great that I want to kiss the author if she is girl, if you are man you have my respect i will not kiss you ☺️, but till now i read till 160 CHP that's the game start and i have huge expections form it hope if I could go future to read the whole novel in one go, that's will clear the doubts of most you so i recommended this is must read novel 🥰
The amount of run on sentences are dreadful. Please learn to use a period. Otherwise, the novel is just fine. Nothing terrible and nothing outstanding.
definitely one of the best novels I have read in a while ...the story just pulls you in and you end up scrolling through the whole book unable to stop..the characters are wonderfully portrayed with each girl having her own story...the mc true past is a mystery...please update soon.cant help but regret that I have read through all chapters till yet...
Update sucks... Needs sope time skips. .. .......... .. .. ,. ,.,.,. ,., ..,. ., ., .. ,. ,. ,., ..,.,.. ,.,,. ,. ,. ,.. ., ..,. ,. ,.,., .. ,. ,. .,
•I love this novel, it’s addicting, the world building is so good (yeah I love world building that contains higher planes,etc…), also I like reading cultivation related novel so this novel is just the right one for me. •The writing quality is good there’s some few mistakes but that can be corrected easily, the story is full of mystery which I don’t like but this novel made me love that element and add the thirst to know and discover more of it. < So author hopefully u won’t drop this novel ;) 💕
i like the story ..........................................................................................................................
what a masterpiece definitely reading it till the end, although it's slow paced
No la e leído pero su descripción me llamo le daré 5 por ahora... Luego volveré y veré si se merece 5 estrellas o menos, suerte en tu historia. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Caught up.now my nemesis (Boredom) is attacking my will. anyway this is story is good.
Nah this author is TOO GOOD, author knows how to make someone feel any emotion, author hit my heart way to many times, author definitely has something with yanderes too
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Honestly the story is fantastic, i truly like the elements governing around the novel, it peaks your interest again and again. And I like the way the story is moving, interesting to the say the least So you wonder why my rating was so low? Well 2 points really. 1) way to much cringe, its like a Shakespeare read gone bad, and the dialogue between the characters seems bit forced 2) the relationships are way to forced, mc comes of as someone who is intelligent and ruthless and a genius strategist, but 90% he thinks with his lower part and make decisions based on his emotional state. For god sake the MC is like a Pokémon tamer, basically the cold jade empress beauties in his previous life are crawling in his backyard and BOOM into the harem gang! And another thing that disturbs me is, his contradictions. Apparently his desire for strength is immeasurable, but for some reason he chooses to hamper is growth even though he has probably THE best qi technique in the universe, because he doesn’t want to draw suspicious upon him, hate to say it you bro even if your Cultivation speed was 10x faster you would still be so-so compared to the other geniuses. And when he encounters a deadly situation where his strength it’s not enough he roars to the heavens for more strength so he can defeat his opponents Anyway the idea for this story impeccable honesty, just few elements above whose bit irritating to read through. But overall it won’t ruin the good story for you. Hopefully it gets better in the future chapters
Does this one have lemons like Conquerors Path? I am wondering because I really like the authors other work and was thinking of checking this one out.
The author said and I quote "read my new novel. You won't regret it." But I do regret it. This novel is not bad per say but it is mid compared to the other novel "The conqueror's path". I had high expectations because I thought it would be better than that but I was wrong. The characters are bland, their interaction and relationship looks forced. And most of the dialougues come out as cringe. All these things worked in the author's previous novel because we knew that we mc was behaving that way intentionally but here it falls disgracefully. Even the heroines that are introduced so far are not as likeable as they should be. As for the reason why I am only mentioning bad points, it's because almost every other review talked about its good things. 3.5 if i take out my frustaration and disappointment from rating
My honest opinion on this story is that it's good but not the best it could be honestly it doesn't help it doesn't have as much update(for a good reason obviously)on it so it take a while before we get a new chapter it's doesn't help mc is edgey (because everyone loves edgey mcs for some reason)and it's overcomplicated in some areas when it shouldn't be and some time overused plot armor to explain things specially the reason for him to be dense and finally mc powers I say it's here moment I saw death I have a feeling I know who author using for mc Powers second I saw the shadow I know it mc just the cultivator version of shadow monarch from Solo leveling honestly I'm tried of seeing shadow monarch and Hades in story's like they are overused just like the sharingan
Simply put, the novel is amazing, and even though I would prefer it to be a little faster, I still love it I could say I like it better than the author's other novel.... Keep up the good work author, don't disappear!
**REVIEW AFTER CH135** This is one of the best novels. Not only OP, but also smart MC. Excellent world building. Good romance. Only the problem is the updates.
Here I come back I notice this novel is finally getting updates and I am so excited 😆 honestly last time their was around 180 chapters if I remember but now it currently have over 200 😭 more more plz focus more on this one for now author ✍️🙄
it's a slow pace story but when you get the hang of it then it is the best of any novel you have read
Yun Xiao / Azrail D Xavon💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕.........💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
this author is the type to love an op mc but this time he's kinda overdone it. the mc is directly related to powerful women who end up falling in love with him.it's not bad but it is overdone. for all 180 chapters it has almst all been about the mc's development giving off the vibe that the author is setting up a very big stage for later on in the story. whether the author can handle the expectations remains to be seen. on tthe other hand, if the harem is gonna start let it start with the mc's mother and sister. overall, a story with with a lot of potential
Author why did you stop updating this? this was one of my favourite novels in this app.
I have reached the end of this fascinating world, this was a truly amazing journey you have given me.I had the pleasure of immersing myself in a captivating novel that left me spellbound from start to finish. The book I'm referring to is a masterpiece of storytelling, with its unique blend of worldbuilding, intriguing characters, and a protagonist whose mysterious ability to traverse time adds a layer of fascination that kept me glued to its pages. One of the standout aspects of this novel is its exceptional worldbuilding. The author skillfully crafted a rich and intricate universe that effortlessly transported me into alternate histories and realms. Every detail, from the vivid descriptions to the intricacies of the societies portrayed, was brought to life in a way that made me feel fully immersed in the story. Speaking of characters, the protagonist's tragic past and his enigmatic time-traveling abilities added a depth and complexity to his journey that tugged at my heartstrings. I found myself empathizing with his struggles and rooting for him every step of the way. The exploration of alternate histories and the consequences of his actions in those worlds were nothing short of sorrowful, leaving a profound impact on me as a reader. But it wasn't just the protagonist who stole the show. The diverse cast of women that the protagonist mingled with created a compelling and heartfelt harem romance that added another layer of depth to the narrative. Each woman was intricately developed, and their interactions with the protagonist felt authentic and meaningful. What impressed me the most was that none of them came across as annoying or one-dimensional; they all had their unique stories and contributions that made me appreciate their presence in the protagonist's life. Throughout this emotional journey, I found myself engrossed in the tale, eagerly turning the pages to uncover the next twist and revelation. The author's ability to evoke a range of emotions, from joy and excitement to heartache and longing, is a testament to their skillful storytelling and the powerful impact of their words.I am also deeply intrigued by the hidden forces and mysteries that lie within the pages of this book. The author has skillfully woven a web of intrigue and secrets that kept me on the edge of my seat, eagerly anticipating each new revelation. As I turned the final page, I couldn't help but feel a bittersweet longing for more, yearning to delve further into this captivating world. With each chapter, the author's grace and mastery over storytelling shone through, leaving me hungry for the next installment. I am eagerly awaiting any new developments and eagerly anticipating the future chapters that will continue to unfold this extraordinary narrative. In summary, this book has enthralled me with its fascinating concepts, intricate worldbuilding, and complex characters. Its ability to evoke a range of emotions, from excitement to sorrow, and its ability to keep me guessing, has truly made it a standout piece of literature. I wholeheartedly recommend it to any reader seeking a mesmerizing blend of romance, mystery, and alternate history.
It's an alright story. Better than cliche reborn stories, but still nothing too great as great stories need great characters. So, I gave it 6.8/10
novel is too generic, predictable, cringe. the writing quality is bad. yikes
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I have to say i didn't expect much form the novel for pass my time or because i like the other novel author write , but this great gem hidden in mist, writing is top notch pace the story goes is awesome & the way mc deployed is so great that I want to kiss the author if she is girl, if you are man you have my respect i will not kiss you ☺️, but till now i read till 160 CHP that's the game start and i have huge expections form it hope if I could go future to read the whole novel in one go, that's will clear the doubts of most you so i recommended this is must read novel 🥰
The amount of run on sentences are dreadful. Please learn to use a period. Otherwise, the novel is just fine. Nothing terrible and nothing outstanding.
definitely one of the best novels I have read in a while ...the story just pulls you in and you end up scrolling through the whole book unable to stop..the characters are wonderfully portrayed with each girl having her own story...the mc true past is a mystery...please update soon.cant help but regret that I have read through all chapters till yet...
Update sucks... Needs sope time skips. .. .......... .. .. ,. ,.,.,. ,., ..,. ., ., .. ,. ,. ,., ..,.,.. ,.,,. ,. ,. ,.. ., ..,. ,. ,.,., .. ,. ,. .,
•I love this novel, it’s addicting, the world building is so good (yeah I love world building that contains higher planes,etc…), also I like reading cultivation related novel so this novel is just the right one for me. •The writing quality is good there’s some few mistakes but that can be corrected easily, the story is full of mystery which I don’t like but this novel made me love that element and add the thirst to know and discover more of it. < So author hopefully u won’t drop this novel ;) 💕
i like the story ..........................................................................................................................
what a masterpiece definitely reading it till the end, although it's slow paced
No la e leído pero su descripción me llamo le daré 5 por ahora... Luego volveré y veré si se merece 5 estrellas o menos, suerte en tu historia. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Caught up.now my nemesis (Boredom) is attacking my will. anyway this is story is good.
Nah this author is TOO GOOD, author knows how to make someone feel any emotion, author hit my heart way to many times, author definitely has something with yanderes too
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
Honestly the story is fantastic, i truly like the elements governing around the novel, it peaks your interest again and again. And I like the way the story is moving, interesting to the say the least So you wonder why my rating was so low? Well 2 points really. 1) way to much cringe, its like a Shakespeare read gone bad, and the dialogue between the characters seems bit forced 2) the relationships are way to forced, mc comes of as someone who is intelligent and ruthless and a genius strategist, but 90% he thinks with his lower part and make decisions based on his emotional state. For god sake the MC is like a Pokémon tamer, basically the cold jade empress beauties in his previous life are crawling in his backyard and BOOM into the harem gang! And another thing that disturbs me is, his contradictions. Apparently his desire for strength is immeasurable, but for some reason he chooses to hamper is growth even though he has probably THE best qi technique in the universe, because he doesn’t want to draw suspicious upon him, hate to say it you bro even if your Cultivation speed was 10x faster you would still be so-so compared to the other geniuses. And when he encounters a deadly situation where his strength it’s not enough he roars to the heavens for more strength so he can defeat his opponents Anyway the idea for this story impeccable honesty, just few elements above whose bit irritating to read through. But overall it won’t ruin the good story for you. Hopefully it gets better in the future chapters