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it was good And very interesting but the author just had to drop it in the name of a short ending like it would've been nice is she got to all arcs and get into a “funny relationship” with sabito but instead the author dropped the story **I am only criticizing the author for ending the story in an abrupt way the story would've been good**
the book became absolutely depressing for no reason. you had her meet daki , muzan and kokushibo and had her teared away from her new family and turned into a demon AT JUST 5 YEARS OLD out of nowhere , her system has been absolutely useless since she was a baby bruh
i just found your novel! it was Amazing, kinda sad it ended so fast.im going to check to see if you have any other novels out. Keep up the good work.
Author-sama, I liked your novel. I've just read 12 chapters but the story is perfect. I wanna give my honest review and things that I didn't like so much. Let's start. First of all, the quality of the writing is really good. However, there are some moments where the writing could be perfect. For example, it seems like you've overreacted in the 11th chapter. You had the mindset of an adult but you acted like an immature kid. It was cute yet annoying. Secondly, the system ruined my interest. I know you've already mentioned the system but the Demon Slayer series doesn't fit for the system. At last, some characters such as Tanjuro and Kokushibo didn't act like they should. They were more like an oc to me. Their characters are different from the actual series. PS: Why did Muzan even call the other upper moons just for the kitsune girl? The Upper Moon meeting is so rare that it happens in centuries. But this fanfic is one of the best Demon Slayer fanfictions for me. Great work, Author-sama.
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Started out great but halfway through it started to get worse.............................................................................................
I liked it until they revealed the systems were evil. I’m not a huge fan of that. Also a lot doesn’t make a ton of sense in this story, but I like the characters enough to overlook these flaws.
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Writing Quality 5☆ Updating Stability 5☆ Story Development 3☆ ( because the ending is too rushed ) Character Design 5☆《 no doubt about that 》 world background obviously 5☆. Anyway thanks for this awesome piece of work author. Hope there will be more story like this with 1 million chapters in every story.☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
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ONLY PROBLEM IS RUSHED ENDING. Other than that, I have 0 problems with this fanfic. It got a little confusing after chapter 40. But I think thats because author tried to rush it from that point
I think it's good, but can be better at some points....................................... ............. ............. ............. ............. ............. ............. .............
I really liked the direction you went with this story, the way how both of main character-kun's (I forgot how to spell his name) sisters go turned into demons, and he didn't know about one of them.
Ending bit abrupt but you should read ................................ ......................jejsheusisieheheuwieuejejeirurururhrhehehehehehdhdhdheheheheheheuud
The author made a very good fanfiction which cant be easily found on this website and simply dropped it in the name of a short ending ... DON'T WRITE A FANFIC SIMPLY IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO END IT PROPERLY IT IS BETTER TO DROP IT AND LET SOMEONE ELSE CONTINUE IT
good at first then ot become boring🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
That's one of my favortie ff ...........................,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,,.,.,.,..,
To lazy to write a proper review................................................................................................................................................
I really been enjoying this fanfic since I came across it,I hope you never drop this _________________________________________________________I don't type much need something to get pass the post limit
its just the usual tbh .eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I've only read 2 chapters so far and finding it better that mose other fan fic's... everything is written well so far so I'm going to continue to read the rest and hope the author doesn't drop this story...have a good day author 🙂
its good man, keep it up man i support you, but i'm broke＼(￣▽￣;)／ ＼(￣▽￣;)／.......... don't worry man i'll vote you later.... even in power stone.... i'm broke 😅😅😅
If you read this and you’ve read Kimetsu no Yaiba (Demon Slayer), You will not regret it. The plot strays from the original but it’s a fanfic so that makes sense, World background is exactly the same, The characters are PERFECT, the comedy is abundant, Story development and Writing quality. Perfection. This is a 5 Star Novel.
A superb story. The MC is loveable, the demon slayer universe is well used, the plot is good, there is sad and funny events, read it, this story is 2 good.
Full star. I've been reading fanfics a lot so this is the first time reading that the protagonist female and all I could say it's TOP NOTCH the story development is perfect the mc is pretty good and the best of all it is the world systems making it much more livelier!
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It's really good! it has good Grammer good development and isn't just "mc train" *5year later* mc op and able to demolish god himself. it has a good story and I hope to see more from the author!
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Currently, I believe my character design is perfect, the writing quality is also pretty good, no typos nor are there any grammar issues. The story development is technically the plot of the Anime, but with little tweaks here and there, so it's good. And same with world background. Stability of Updates... heck, I hate this. I update whenever I want, whether it'd be a day, an hour, a month, or a year. It's my decision to update, you as viewers have no say in this.
it was good And very interesting but the author just had to drop it in the name of a short ending like it would've been nice is she got to all arcs and get into a “funny relationship” with sabito but instead the author dropped the story **I am only criticizing the author for ending the story in an abrupt way the story would've been good**
the book became absolutely depressing for no reason. you had her meet daki , muzan and kokushibo and had her teared away from her new family and turned into a demon AT JUST 5 YEARS OLD out of nowhere , her system has been absolutely useless since she was a baby bruh
i just found your novel! it was Amazing, kinda sad it ended so fast.im going to check to see if you have any other novels out. Keep up the good work.
Author-sama, I liked your novel. I've just read 12 chapters but the story is perfect. I wanna give my honest review and things that I didn't like so much. Let's start. First of all, the quality of the writing is really good. However, there are some moments where the writing could be perfect. For example, it seems like you've overreacted in the 11th chapter. You had the mindset of an adult but you acted like an immature kid. It was cute yet annoying. Secondly, the system ruined my interest. I know you've already mentioned the system but the Demon Slayer series doesn't fit for the system. At last, some characters such as Tanjuro and Kokushibo didn't act like they should. They were more like an oc to me. Their characters are different from the actual series. PS: Why did Muzan even call the other upper moons just for the kitsune girl? The Upper Moon meeting is so rare that it happens in centuries. But this fanfic is one of the best Demon Slayer fanfictions for me. Great work, Author-sama.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Started out great but halfway through it started to get worse.............................................................................................
I liked it until they revealed the systems were evil. I’m not a huge fan of that. Also a lot doesn’t make a ton of sense in this story, but I like the characters enough to overlook these flaws.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Writing Quality 5☆ Updating Stability 5☆ Story Development 3☆ ( because the ending is too rushed ) Character Design 5☆《 no doubt about that 》 world background obviously 5☆. Anyway thanks for this awesome piece of work author. Hope there will be more story like this with 1 million chapters in every story.☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ ONLY PROBLEM IS RUSHED ENDING. Other than that, I have 0 problems with this fanfic. It got a little confusing after chapter 40. But I think thats because author tried to rush it from that point
I think it's good, but can be better at some points....................................... ............. ............. ............. ............. ............. ............. .............
I really liked the direction you went with this story, the way how both of main character-kun's (I forgot how to spell his name) sisters go turned into demons, and he didn't know about one of them.
Ending bit abrupt but you should read ................................ ......................jejsheusisieheheuwieuejejeirurururhrhehehehehehdhdhdheheheheheheuud
The author made a very good fanfiction which cant be easily found on this website and simply dropped it in the name of a short ending ... DON'T WRITE A FANFIC SIMPLY IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO END IT PROPERLY IT IS BETTER TO DROP IT AND LET SOMEONE ELSE CONTINUE IT
good at first then ot become boring🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
That's one of my favortie ff ...........................,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,,.,.,.,..,
To lazy to write a proper review................................................................................................................................................
I really been enjoying this fanfic since I came across it,I hope you never drop this _________________________________________________________I don't type much need something to get pass the post limit
its just the usual tbh .eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I've only read 2 chapters so far and finding it better that mose other fan fic's... everything is written well so far so I'm going to continue to read the rest and hope the author doesn't drop this story...have a good day author 🙂
its good man, keep it up man i support you, but i'm broke＼(￣▽￣;)／ ＼(￣▽￣;)／.......... don't worry man i'll vote you later.... even in power stone.... i'm broke 😅😅😅
If you read this and you’ve read Kimetsu no Yaiba (Demon Slayer), You will not regret it. The plot strays from the original but it’s a fanfic so that makes sense, World background is exactly the same, The characters are PERFECT, the comedy is abundant, Story development and Writing quality. Perfection. This is a 5 Star Novel.
A superb story. The MC is loveable, the demon slayer universe is well used, the plot is good, there is sad and funny events, read it, this story is 2 good.
Full star. I've been reading fanfics a lot so this is the first time reading that the protagonist female and all I could say it's TOP NOTCH the story development is perfect the mc is pretty good and the best of all it is the world systems making it much more livelier!
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It's really good! it has good Grammer good development and isn't just "mc train" *5year later* mc op and able to demolish god himself. it has a good story and I hope to see more from the author!
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Currently, I believe my character design is perfect, the writing quality is also pretty good, no typos nor are there any grammar issues. The story development is technically the plot of the Anime, but with little tweaks here and there, so it's good. And same with world background. Stability of Updates... heck, I hate this. I update whenever I want, whether it'd be a day, an hour, a month, or a year. It's my decision to update, you as viewers have no say in this.