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this may sims like I am giving it high ratong but the book is actually good the only problem you may have with this is that its chapters are longer than abridged books.
The first thing I noticed was the quality of writing. It was pretty good. The beginning was slow and some part was a little monotonous. But the action started soon enough. Overall it's a well-written story.
I have a soft spot for systems, as they take you away from daily life and bring you into a world you can enjoy. This story's writing is well done, the main character seems interesting too. As this is only the beginning, I'm excited to see where it goes. Thanks for the story so far, author! Best of luck to you!
A great story that creates a nice and sympathetic mood. I loved the dynamics of the story and the details of the world in this book. Especially the personality traits of the characters in the book are nice. Thank you for your creativity author and good luck with the sequels.
Hi, Your story seems like something I would be nose deep in on a daily basis. Totally loved your writing style and the character development. Happy writing! :)
First of all, the genre it's not my cup of tea, but I have to admit that is a pleasure to read your story. The descriptions are nicely written, the main lead is expressive and the storyline is addictive. Well done! You don't struggle with the language so it's your advantage over the rest (non-English speakers), use it well! All the best!
The world building is going well and the writing style is very unique. As the book still only has 15 chapters, there's not much to say but Great work by the Author! It's written very well.
I don't know what it is about this story that attracted me. It could be the excellent artwork that represents the character and the feel of the story well. It could also be that this is just a great story that deserves your time. Check it out!
The writing quality in itself is good. You can understand the situation of the main character, even the part at the beginning when he was slowly regaining his senses. Every part after that, the rescue and the fight scene were both nice creating an overall wholesome first chapter. I've yet to read the other chapters but from this point I know that it'll be something epic!
I liked how the heroes portrayed differently rather than just "level-up-and-go-all-out-power" type heroes. But here, the heroes are classified based on their field of mastery, such as being an engineer(I think). Now imagine; the engineering department is vast, then blend it with fantasy's concept of system… you get the creative idea, which is strongly analogous to offensive type, defensive type, and healer type found in RPG elements. Or, a programmer went crazy. The main character is indeed well-written, and so, writing quality. You can understand his thoughts and emotional reactions with other characters as well. It's because the narrative is written in first-person POV, which allows you to have an immersive view inside the MC's head. But, it has the limits of not being an omniscient narrator, which puts the mystery of what's the deal with that shade guy. The world background seems to be in the modern era with the mix of medieval-ish atmosphere where they wore outfits such as robes, shields, and weapons like swords and spears. Do they have guns, too? Overall, a great story! And yes, it's an isekai, but give this a try, you won't regret it!
This is the genre I like. So, chances are I am going to be far more forgiving than those who don't like the genre. That being said, the book is good in it's own right. The language is smooth, the story flows neither too fast, nor to slow, it's a compelling read to the end.
Solid first few chapters, really gives the feel of a classic rpg without actually being gamey about it. Has a much better flow and level of description than a lot of other first person narratives. Looking forward to reading more in the future for sure.
Potential massive .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This story's beginning isn't bad I like how it was detailed and let you know what was happening in a single moment makes me have to imagine I like it a nice book to the author.
This is great. A nice first pov that makes sense and you can feel the main character and the others as well, I was surprised by this last one. It's pretty hard to keep those two emotions in check so that it doesn't feel one-dimensional. And then the way that the author presented the world didn't feel like an info dump, but you already figured a lot about it. Keep up the good work.
I read the synopsis, and it intrigues me to give it a go, and better than I expected, The story building is superb, The characters are lifelike especially The Main Characters Characteristics can be relatable to a slightly smart person IRL. not too smart like aka. Albert and not too stupid like aka Karens calling the stores manager.. overall its good 5/5. keep up the great work author! Kudos to you!
How to join Hero Camp? This book is quite interesting to read and when the author write "prey and predators", I never come across to a novel like this before. Author is descriptive enough to let the readers imagine the world where the MC is in.
Reviewed after chapter 6: The Pros: Great grammar and pace World building is well developed and fused into the story The Cons: Characters seem a bit flat and accepting the story without any doubts or panic Characters who die so far leave you without any emotional attachment like cannon fodder Idiotic level 7 All in all it was entertaining so far.
The protagonist was likeable and has his emotions fleshed out. It was very nice reading this novel as I saw potential in this author's work. The narration was splendidly done for the readers to easily read and has its immersion within it. Its charm was very good as I saw the story development was in a good pacing. Overall, a nice read! Gotta recommend this to others!
The main character is really sharp, yet not too powerful or clever to be relatable. I find this story easy and enjoyable to read due to the fact that the language flows naturally. The central concept is also very intriguing. Everyone loves an underdog story, because there is room for the MC to progress and grow. Great work!
Author here, I appreciate all feedback. If you think something was interesting, let me know! If you thought something was disinteresting, let me know! I wanna make sure this story appeals to a wide audience.
The start of the book is pretty generic with mc being summoned to a new world and given a mission to accomplish. The mission is not yet revealed, it might be saving the world and killing monsters or it might be anything. The main antagonist is introduced pretty early, adding spice to things. The story unfolds at a nice pace, with little to no grammatical errors. Though I have only read a few chaps, I still found it interesting. Worldbuilding is nicely done and action scenes are detailed. Overall it's great work. If you like Hero, Action, Adventure then you should give this a try.
this may sims like I am giving it high ratong but the book is actually good the only problem you may have with this is that its chapters are longer than abridged books.
The first thing I noticed was the quality of writing. It was pretty good. The beginning was slow and some part was a little monotonous. But the action started soon enough. Overall it's a well-written story.
I have a soft spot for systems, as they take you away from daily life and bring you into a world you can enjoy. This story's writing is well done, the main character seems interesting too. As this is only the beginning, I'm excited to see where it goes. Thanks for the story so far, author! Best of luck to you!
A great story that creates a nice and sympathetic mood. I loved the dynamics of the story and the details of the world in this book. Especially the personality traits of the characters in the book are nice. Thank you for your creativity author and good luck with the sequels.
Hi, Your story seems like something I would be nose deep in on a daily basis. Totally loved your writing style and the character development. Happy writing! :)
First of all, the genre it's not my cup of tea, but I have to admit that is a pleasure to read your story. The descriptions are nicely written, the main lead is expressive and the storyline is addictive. Well done! You don't struggle with the language so it's your advantage over the rest (non-English speakers), use it well! All the best!
The world building is going well and the writing style is very unique. As the book still only has 15 chapters, there's not much to say but Great work by the Author! It's written very well.
I don't know what it is about this story that attracted me. It could be the excellent artwork that represents the character and the feel of the story well. It could also be that this is just a great story that deserves your time. Check it out!
The writing quality in itself is good. You can understand the situation of the main character, even the part at the beginning when he was slowly regaining his senses. Every part after that, the rescue and the fight scene were both nice creating an overall wholesome first chapter. I've yet to read the other chapters but from this point I know that it'll be something epic!
I liked how the heroes portrayed differently rather than just "level-up-and-go-all-out-power" type heroes. But here, the heroes are classified based on their field of mastery, such as being an engineer(I think). Now imagine; the engineering department is vast, then blend it with fantasy's concept of system… you get the creative idea, which is strongly analogous to offensive type, defensive type, and healer type found in RPG elements. Or, a programmer went crazy. The main character is indeed well-written, and so, writing quality. You can understand his thoughts and emotional reactions with other characters as well. It's because the narrative is written in first-person POV, which allows you to have an immersive view inside the MC's head. But, it has the limits of not being an omniscient narrator, which puts the mystery of what's the deal with that shade guy. The world background seems to be in the modern era with the mix of medieval-ish atmosphere where they wore outfits such as robes, shields, and weapons like swords and spears. Do they have guns, too? Overall, a great story! And yes, it's an isekai, but give this a try, you won't regret it!
This is the genre I like. So, chances are I am going to be far more forgiving than those who don't like the genre. That being said, the book is good in it's own right. The language is smooth, the story flows neither too fast, nor to slow, it's a compelling read to the end.
Solid first few chapters, really gives the feel of a classic rpg without actually being gamey about it. Has a much better flow and level of description than a lot of other first person narratives. Looking forward to reading more in the future for sure.
Potential massive .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This story's beginning isn't bad I like how it was detailed and let you know what was happening in a single moment makes me have to imagine I like it a nice book to the author.
This is great. A nice first pov that makes sense and you can feel the main character and the others as well, I was surprised by this last one. It's pretty hard to keep those two emotions in check so that it doesn't feel one-dimensional. And then the way that the author presented the world didn't feel like an info dump, but you already figured a lot about it. Keep up the good work.
I read the synopsis, and it intrigues me to give it a go, and better than I expected, The story building is superb, The characters are lifelike especially The Main Characters Characteristics can be relatable to a slightly smart person IRL. not too smart like aka. Albert and not too stupid like aka Karens calling the stores manager.. overall its good 5/5. keep up the great work author! Kudos to you!
How to join Hero Camp? This book is quite interesting to read and when the author write "prey and predators", I never come across to a novel like this before. Author is descriptive enough to let the readers imagine the world where the MC is in.
Reviewed after chapter 6: The Pros: Great grammar and pace World building is well developed and fused into the story The Cons: Characters seem a bit flat and accepting the story without any doubts or panic Characters who die so far leave you without any emotional attachment like cannon fodder Idiotic level 7 All in all it was entertaining so far.
The protagonist was likeable and has his emotions fleshed out. It was very nice reading this novel as I saw potential in this author's work. The narration was splendidly done for the readers to easily read and has its immersion within it. Its charm was very good as I saw the story development was in a good pacing. Overall, a nice read! Gotta recommend this to others!
The main character is really sharp, yet not too powerful or clever to be relatable. I find this story easy and enjoyable to read due to the fact that the language flows naturally. The central concept is also very intriguing. Everyone loves an underdog story, because there is room for the MC to progress and grow. Great work!
Author here, I appreciate all feedback. If you think something was interesting, let me know! If you thought something was disinteresting, let me know! I wanna make sure this story appeals to a wide audience.
The start of the book is pretty generic with mc being summoned to a new world and given a mission to accomplish. The mission is not yet revealed, it might be saving the world and killing monsters or it might be anything. The main antagonist is introduced pretty early, adding spice to things. The story unfolds at a nice pace, with little to no grammatical errors. Though I have only read a few chaps, I still found it interesting. Worldbuilding is nicely done and action scenes are detailed. Overall it's great work. If you like Hero, Action, Adventure then you should give this a try.