Cloki

Cloki

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Author of Tatakai no Mezurashi: Fighting Demons in a Steampunk World! I enjoy all things Fantasy/Isekai/System! If you read my novel, please leave comments and feedback! I really appreciate it!

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Cloki
Cloki
2 years ago
Posted

Author here, leave feedback! I take kindly to constructive criticism and story ideas/other miscellaneous feedback! I hope you are enjoying the story thus far.

Cloki
Cloki
3 years ago
Posted

Pretty good so far! Read the prologue and up through chapter 6, will read more when I have time. I love the dark aspects of it, things such as the voids, darkness and chaos, and space and time all mingling together, with their own jobs in the universe. The encounters between Genesis and Heaven, clashing back and forth, trying to realize a correct way of going about the re-creation of everything, and then whom I assume is the MC, coming about in the Astral Realm! Though, he seems to be experiencing every pain imaginable from the moment he wakes up there haha. I love it so far, and recommend it! The more you read, the more enticed you get! Good job!

Cloki
Cloki
3 years ago
Commented

Yo this just got real, super quick.

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Cloki
Cloki
3 years ago
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Ahhh, I see now. Nevermind then!

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3 years ago
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Ah, his appearance did change.

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3 years ago
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Truly words to consider. I wonder how things are gonna go for Genesis now.

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3 years ago
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Chaos in the Void, though it might not be the "Chaos" as described earlier. It's still fascinating to picture so much going on at once.

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3 years ago
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If this prologue is meant to be an origin story for everything, you're doing a very good job. Heaven and Genisis both seem like level-headed individuals, yet their ideas clash. I like it so far if I'm understanding it right.

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3 years ago
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Read the first chapter. These are some long chaps you have! Are they 5k+ words? I'm used to shorter chaps, so I only read the first, and a little bit into 2. But, I like where it's going. I've never really explored the concept of Yuri, although I am a fan of romance, and the characters seem quite intriguing in terms of their potential in the future. Well done so far!

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