59รีวิว
4.52
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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
It started bad and gradually became worse. You say He don't trust anyone because of betrayal and then tells kakashi and sasuke everything. Story have no logic at all. Characters have no depth at all, pretty much everyone is a two dimensional character including MC.
I seriously love you and this book, but I also hate you because you single-handedly ruined my sleep schedule because of how long I spent reading it straight. But even though you ruined it, I'm willing to forgive you if you post more of it.
i thought i would check it out because I thought it would be good but after reading a few chapters I just can't continue reading this its so cliche why would hiruzen think a 3 year old would be loyal to the village and why is there so much talk about killing intent its just so cringy to read imo
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Extremely nerfed the more more fruit, portrays mc as smart but when stuff that matters like gaining the rennigan comes up hes dumb, and the power levels are inconsistent At one moment the author says that with The chakra cloak alone mc can be high kage level but the moment he says that even with the chakra cloak, the mangetyo sharingan, and the more more fruit (nerfed) at 30x he can barely achieve mid kage.
i love this book, it is perfectly in line with how i had imagined it to be, a ruthless mc in a dog kill dog world. loved how sarutobi, was treated, same with kakashi and jiraiya, such irresponsible people were undeserving of Naruto's love and respect.
Analyzing sample ............. Naruto Fanfic - Check Mc with brains- Check Revenge - Check Interesting - Confirmed ......................................
Baru pagi ini aku berkata "aku menginginkan cerita dimana Hiruzen, Danzo dan Konoha dilenyapkan". Malamnya aku membaca cerita ini dan sangat puas! Terutama melihat saat Danzo berhasil menjadi Hokage tapi terbunuh di akhir, Hiruzen harus melihat reruntuhan desa dan menjadi pemandu wisata. Ide yang cukup baik. Plot hole nya mungkin Hagoromo yang terlalu koperatif mengingat dia kaku dan terlalu formal pada ide dan prinsipnya. Gamamaru yang gagal melihat masa depan berubah. Tapi menurutku cerita ini cukup apik dengan caranya sendiri. Semoga ceritanya terus berlanjut penulis-san.
ey author did u report the chapter again? if yes I'm gonna re read it again and 5star for you for updating it again hope u not gonna re work it again.
Could you go back? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
story dropped because of the bastard DAOISTIQRBFO I really hope you gucking choke on air and die you son of a bitch. a perfectly good fanfic dropped because of you.
WQ-3 stars Just your average fanfic in webnovel, not good, not bad SD-3 stars pretty meh, it'll be better if the author don't treat ninjas as ignorant, mc always hide his training then all of a sudden displayed all his cards/abilities CD-2 stars MC is cringe factory, with tons of salt and edgyness US-4 stars pretty consistent so far WH-5 stars it's narutoverse, can't go wrong with that
I love how this story shows the hypocrisy of the shinobi village. So many dark secrets revealed! Recommended for people who that are Danzo haters!!!
REALLY GOOD............................................................................................................................................
Será que naruto vai reconstruir a aldeia do redemoinho 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
story is awesome as naruto is not stupid anymore and has better understanding of his powers , surrounding and story . he has my favorite devil fruit ability too but has only only one drawback the power of more more fruit is needed by the author as we have seen in original plot that the speed of naruto is faster the raikage after using 9tail chakra in the 4 shinobi world War but here even after using 9 tail chakra cloak and multipying his speed by 30 times he still consider himself only strong as an average kage as he can easily overpower 8 gates gai by using 9 tail chakra cloak and multiplying his speed and strength by 30 times
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épico, favorito instantâneo hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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kinda a short chps.. but stable update.... so far good progress......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Надеюсь романтики здесь не будет не будет👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌********************************* А так все супер спасибо большое за это
interesting read, thx for writing interesting read, thx for writing interesting read, thx for writing interesting read, thx for writing interesting read, thx for writing
I hurt when reading the start of the story. I mean he gets rewarded for killing off the entire population which is his "punishment". Bad start but unique. Lastly it gets better thankfully but that start makes my review 3.8.
I got nothing to say ... it's a good novel to enjoy and past your time and I like it so ... (GIVE FIVE STARS TO THE GENTLEMEN!!) ...........
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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
It started bad and gradually became worse. You say He don't trust anyone because of betrayal and then tells kakashi and sasuke everything. Story have no logic at all. Characters have no depth at all, pretty much everyone is a two dimensional character including MC.
I seriously love you and this book, but I also hate you because you single-handedly ruined my sleep schedule because of how long I spent reading it straight. But even though you ruined it, I'm willing to forgive you if you post more of it.
i thought i would check it out because I thought it would be good but after reading a few chapters I just can't continue reading this its so cliche why would hiruzen think a 3 year old would be loyal to the village and why is there so much talk about killing intent its just so cringy to read imo
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ More more fruit, where r you?? More more fruit, where r you?? More more fruit, where r you?? More more fruit, where r you?? More more fruit, where r you?? More more fruit, where r you?? More more fruit, where r you?? More more fruit, where r you?? More more fruit, where r you?? More more fruit, where r you??
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Extremely nerfed the more more fruit, portrays mc as smart but when stuff that matters like gaining the rennigan comes up hes dumb, and the power levels are inconsistent At one moment the author says that with The chakra cloak alone mc can be high kage level but the moment he says that even with the chakra cloak, the mangetyo sharingan, and the more more fruit (nerfed) at 30x he can barely achieve mid kage.
i love this book, it is perfectly in line with how i had imagined it to be, a ruthless mc in a dog kill dog world. loved how sarutobi, was treated, same with kakashi and jiraiya, such irresponsible people were undeserving of Naruto's love and respect.
Analyzing sample ............. Naruto Fanfic - Check Mc with brains- Check Revenge - Check Interesting - Confirmed ......................................
Baru pagi ini aku berkata "aku menginginkan cerita dimana Hiruzen, Danzo dan Konoha dilenyapkan". Malamnya aku membaca cerita ini dan sangat puas! Terutama melihat saat Danzo berhasil menjadi Hokage tapi terbunuh di akhir, Hiruzen harus melihat reruntuhan desa dan menjadi pemandu wisata. Ide yang cukup baik. Plot hole nya mungkin Hagoromo yang terlalu koperatif mengingat dia kaku dan terlalu formal pada ide dan prinsipnya. Gamamaru yang gagal melihat masa depan berubah. Tapi menurutku cerita ini cukup apik dengan caranya sendiri. Semoga ceritanya terus berlanjut penulis-san.
ey author did u report the chapter again? if yes I'm gonna re read it again and 5star for you for updating it again hope u not gonna re work it again.
Could you go back? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
story dropped because of the bastard DAOISTIQRBFO I really hope you gucking choke on air and die you son of a bitch. a perfectly good fanfic dropped because of you.
WQ-3 stars Just your average fanfic in webnovel, not good, not bad SD-3 stars pretty meh, it'll be better if the author don't treat ninjas as ignorant, mc always hide his training then all of a sudden displayed all his cards/abilities CD-2 stars MC is cringe factory, with tons of salt and edgyness US-4 stars pretty consistent so far WH-5 stars it's narutoverse, can't go wrong with that
I love how this story shows the hypocrisy of the shinobi village. So many dark secrets revealed! Recommended for people who that are Danzo haters!!!
REALLY GOOD............................................................................................................................................
Será que naruto vai reconstruir a aldeia do redemoinho 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
story is awesome as naruto is not stupid anymore and has better understanding of his powers , surrounding and story . he has my favorite devil fruit ability too but has only only one drawback the power of more more fruit is needed by the author as we have seen in original plot that the speed of naruto is faster the raikage after using 9tail chakra in the 4 shinobi world War but here even after using 9 tail chakra cloak and multipying his speed by 30 times he still consider himself only strong as an average kage as he can easily overpower 8 gates gai by using 9 tail chakra cloak and multiplying his speed and strength by 30 times
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ épico, favorito instantâneo hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]. Neeeeeeeeed Moore chapter [img=recommend][img=recommend]
kinda a short chps.. but stable update.... so far good progress......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Надеюсь романтики здесь не будет не будет👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌********************************* А так все супер спасибо большое за это
interesting read, thx for writing interesting read, thx for writing interesting read, thx for writing interesting read, thx for writing interesting read, thx for writing
I hurt when reading the start of the story. I mean he gets rewarded for killing off the entire population which is his "punishment". Bad start but unique. Lastly it gets better thankfully but that start makes my review 3.8.
I got nothing to say ... it's a good novel to enjoy and past your time and I like it so ... (GIVE FIVE STARS TO THE GENTLEMEN!!) ...........
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