Arpious of the Planes

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PancakesWitch

Hello I have noticed your novel, I read it and it was pretty fun, it makes me happy that my novel inspired someone to write their own story, keep going, may Kireina-sama bless your writing

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Ivan_Ivan_2798

I love the story of this novel. Especially I also like Yuri's story. The character development is well made. Also, the MCs don't have a naive side that makes me love this novel. And for the building of his empire, I hope it is not too hasty. I hope his world background is expanded even further.

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reboot23

Ok let me start off by saying tat this novel isn't bad but it's not that good either. The starting is quite good when the mc starts to lvl up and saying that she wants to get as strong as possible until it got to the kingdom building genre the mc stops leveling up at that point the novel got boring and I basically skipped some paragraphs. I think this novel will get better in the future (hopefully). That's all fokes

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Shira_ori

This book is great its the first yuri harem ive seen that isnt just smut. there is some minor punctuation and spelling errors but nothing major honestly this book deserves more recognition its a bit fast paced but thats fine cant wait to continue reading and see where this novel goes in the future.

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Nail_Kaizer

TRUTH AUTHOR why did you make the MC of this novel into D girl more better than genderbender female or male..That's why I hate EPIC OF CATERPILLAR that novel is so dumb with a gender bender. the novel is centered male hero but why is THE MC Kureina female always it dumb why not D GIRL . EPIC OF CATERPILLAR IS DUMB NOVEL Kureina is a total marriage sue who those not work hard for anything and she eats the human children because they are useless and for the skill points..kireina is so dumb she did not take science and technology skills SCIENCE IS GOD..why was your novel this FTNR

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Hunter_Fitch

~I put both good and bad in the reviw so scroll down to see both~ Good things~ Okay so ive only reas about 40 chapters so far so take with a grain of salt buti thunk the author has a really good idea and good direction she went with the story as a whole and the development while fast makes sense for the Mc. there are also hardly any gramatical errors and that makes reading this story that much smoother. another thing i loved about the story is the evolution part as EoC was one of my favorite books and i thought it had a great system. Bad things~ Ive only read about 40 chaps in the story but i wanted to say something. In the story you dont explain all of the skills and what they do like the skills she got from the phonix or some of those from the harpys and i just think its bad world building. i can accept that but the kingdom thing when she got back is just terrible i mean they the people there evolved from not even having anything above stone tools to staight up having lamps and a city in like 10 days. Then there is the whole population issue as the coty should only have around 50-100 people when the non combatants were evacuated before the fight but in just like 3 days since that happened there was unprecedented development. it just dosent make sense in my opinion. another criticism i have is that the pacing is just so incredibly break neck that it makes it hard to follow as it took the mc like 20 days to go from being a chicken to killing a phonix and having a kingdom.

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Stephen_Maher_4802

A great start and really enjoyable and as it gets later on MC becomes a bit of a wimp, getting dominated by her loved ones including pretty much getting r*ped and forced pregnancy. Ended up dropping it after that, shame they turned a strong character into something lesser.

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Ancient_Rebel

I have read more than 200 chapters. one thing I found is don't use status for word filler. .. If the annoying same status screen is removed the your book will be half the chapters I think. [stop using status to increase words and it's annoying , also people pay for it so dont waste their money on chapters where half chapter is status some is something from last chapter and just 35% new chapter..

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metal_head132

small pet peave just got to around chapter 100 but she checkes her states like 2 times every chapter and instead of shorting it as the author only wants to shoe one thing they show the whole states I Swear I've seen the status about every chapter and by the time I'm done reading I'll probably have memerized every skill in there. this gets about 5 times more annoying when you use the audio setting on here your sitting there for like 3 minutes listening to the status for the 100th time and as it gets longer I Swear I'm going to spend 15 minutes in class just listening to the status.

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RudelRammler

Good........................................................Good........................................................Good........................................................Good........................................................Good........................................................

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BigMarch

the genre is so refreshing and the character is distinct, I cannot wait for their further development ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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hottiegamer

There is no hate, only joy For you are beloved by the goddess Hero of the dawn, Healer of worlds Dreams of the morrow hath the shattered soul Pride is lost Wings stripped away, the end is nigh

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hottiegamer

There is no hate, only joy For you are beloved by the goddess Hero of the dawn, Healer of worlds Dreams of the morrow hath the shattered soul Pride is lost Wings stripped away, the end is nigh

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Almighty_Fool

super enjoying the charachter developments is quite good the story is quite slow

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Mechanicas

I hope that you dont make the same mistake which a novel very similar to this,the epic of butterfly did by involving the family and kids too much into the story where mc gives them her benifits and they leech off mc everywhere.Make the mc explore the world and explore the system

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ThouShaltNotDie

good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

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Suleman_abdulazeez

very very very very good boo....but need more chapter......a loot more.........................................................................

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Rafael_Da_Silva

Best iVe read ......................................................................./. ............ .... . . . . . . . . . . .

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Sharpenedsword726

I like it! Just please keep posting, no drop please.......................................................................................................