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Wow! your book is amazing! Adventures is my favorite genre. I hope got to learn more about magics. Kinda excited to read more of this chapter. Keep it up the good work author!
I like the premise. Very anime-feels. The Mc staring some gallant warriors in the parrade while dreaming of becoming one someday. Really, it is one of the best opening for me in all anime I’d watched. The following chapters is unexpectedly interesting. Immersive and enjoyable. I recommend this book to readers who love system and anime feels.
3+1+1+3+2)/5=2 I'm not even sure I made it to chapter three. that's how annoying this was...... and i mean ANNOYING! congrats to those of you who soldiered further before dropping. glad I'm not you tho. i just can't even recommend this. mc: "i want to be an adventurer!" everyone: "what you have, nothing. will kill you. we don't want that. there's no value!" mc: "I've trained for years! even when nothing worked! I'm not giving up now!" probably out of shape merchant pushed mc; mc falls and bruises......... excuse me but the duck?! then finally this was what lead to the mc breaking down. except it made no sense considering he was accepted to a guild just before meeting the merchant. also..... it seems like the mc's father, a potential former best in the world might've have been in that guild?? the guild becoming the absolute weakest guild is a novel standard but seriously makes ZERO SENSE!
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I couldn't force myself past chapter 2 the story was so poorly written. Every interaction felt forced and the MC is 18 but he acts like a toddler. I heavily recommend that the author rewrite the begining chapters. Best of luck.
Wayyyyy too many characters. Every chapter basically introduces a new person. It becomes a mess and clutter trying to remember everyone. At this point it’s not even about MC. It’s like a story about each and every person in that world.
This review comes from reading the first couple chapters. The waiting quality is good - few grammar mistakes, and easy to understand. The story feels... uninteresting, though the synopsis was good. It's just, the plot feels forced and unnatural, so I can't get immersed in it. The characters - particularly the main character - is abysmally stupid, and his main motivation feels fake and forced by the almighty hand of plot-sama. The world design is exactly identical to every other adventurer fantasy world - so identical that even all the beginner monsters have been memorized by me at this point. There's little to no imagination in it, so this has my lowest rating so far. The updating stability is below average, since I saw that it read "1 chapter / week" on the info page.
pretty much a waste of time, first 20 chapters I already hated it because not only is the MC stupid the author was pretty lazy writing the whole thing.
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Only read about 20 ch. mc is extremely dumb childish and basically gives away the fact that he has abilities that no one else does all the time. Fight scenes are pretty bland. The story doesn’t flow very well at times like mc will be doing something then bam scene shift with no transition. Good luck if you decide to read
I read the first 20 chapters and I couldn't take anymore. the character designs are pretty bad, things seem quite forced and just appear out of nowhere, the grammar is horrible and you can barely tell what is going on throughout the chapters. The story also doesn't really explain why things happen and that it just happens randomly causing quite a lot of people to be confused The story doesn't progress in any natural way. The author wants something to happen, thus it does. It gets pretty unbearable pretty fast, and you can tell from the comments people leave. Wouldn't recommend wasting your time.
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This story overAll is pretty good. Its your typical no rival insane leveling up story. The mc has no rivals whatsoever. very unfortunate in my opinion. He goes from lecel0to like 25 in 5 chapters. i wonder what the rest of the book will be like now. Author, I hope you add some true struggles fir the MC, give me a reason to sympathize with him and toot for him. Being an orphan isnt enough since its too common of a thing. Also please make things harder for the mc. thats all im at about chp 50
What can I say. I just like the story ╮(￣▽￣"")╭ Not much else to elaborate on I mean, I’m just a sucker for these kinda novels, so maybe this ain’t the best review if u wanna judge quality
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The mc is annoying even quite a few chapters in and things are changed around randomly by the author mixed with things like people getting mad at a merchant cause he called his friend weak in front of him yet they magically appeared in said store with no mention of where he was called weak
This book is a mess... It's so inconsistent it already changed the power rating system at least 5 times and I didn't even read till the 40th chapter. The character suddenly loses levels or xp, randomly gains new abilities only because he complains about it and all in all it's just a dumpsterfire. A lvl 2 human wins against a lvl 15 merman. He is able toneasily battle with enemies twice his level and grades, ranks and whatever don't matter at all. If you can turn your head off, like really really off, you might enjoy this, otherwise there's just way too much to throw you off
Meh. Can't get myself to read past the 40th chapter, the MC is just not my cup of tea. He and the other characters gave me a cringe, it's quite force in my opinion. His driving force, his desperation and motivation to move on. The MC is also quite slow and a mama's boy. The stats and other terminologies are also quite confusing. I'm just hoping that it gets better as the story progresses.
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So I read it (almost 400 chapters) and thus is an overall. Most of the comments didn't read past the 100th chapters so....(*￣︶￣)...Anyway, I think the Mc is pretty cute. Sure, Mc is an idiot, but his way of thinking is nice. Also, there are a lot wholesome moments when you read further (His party and their funny moments). The grammar is okay, but the storyline is too messy. Like REALLY MESSY. I read the Twilight War and all I can think about is "why are there so many people." Please make the story plot more simple author. So, the overall review is : Great wholesome moments. Messy storyline. (I simply LOVE Ch.300 Gorge and his bubble XDXD.)
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It was really great. From the beginning to the end. . ...... .. .. ...... .. . .. .. .. . .... ,.. .. .. .... ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . ..
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I'm sorry but this was a no for me. The start was very promising but soon enough it go so but I lost my desire to read further. The battle scene transitions and descriptions were so bad I can hardly understand what the author really wanted to portray. Worst part about it was the fact that the title says surpass level 100 but after detailing a level 59 for the MC they just stopped telling his level and show his status. Then what was the point of this story if its not related to the title? There was this part with the elf hoot where she attacked everyone yet for some reason she was then put to trial even after engaging on an attack? *facepalm
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ not much to comment really, just a missed opportunity, the story could have been so much better, the idea behind it was fascinating the way it was executed was terrible, who knows tho I stopped reading a while ago and it might have gotten somewhat better.
Exp……….:hxx uxucy jg jg jf ur ur it t irzcur it it jg ng kb m. Mb mb h b j mh lol I think we should be fine lol I Have it lol I Have To I was like wow wow I Have To lol I Need Durability lol I Need lol I just got the new phone and I’m not gonna be able to do anything but I’m not going back lol I Need To lol I Have yuyyy What do I do for a few days and The and Then A lol and I will send it
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I want to give this novel a good review, but I can't really do that. I refuse to pad my review to make someone feel better. Author, your premise is decent. I can clearly see from the dialogue that you have a plot planned and there's a deep story being written. The problem that I'm having is that there isn't enough. At some point between conceptualization and actualization your story falls short. We can clearly tell that there's a story behind all the numbers that you want to invent, but the story isn't coming through well enough. While reading this novel, I felt like I was in a cellphone with spotty service. Sometimes it would be there, and other times it would be missing. You're not transitioning your thought processes enough to allow the story to flow properly. It's all jerky and uncoordinated. I feel like for every two or three plot devices, there's only half or less than half of the amount of world building that's required being put in. Sometimes your characters introduce things with zero Segway into them. No build up, no explanation. It's a random thing throw into the middle of a scene that is supposedly used to transition into another scene, the problem is that there's no transition. It feels shoddy.
Things goes way too fast + the MC is not bright. I felt that my common sense was challenged too much. There is a lot of « fortunate » coincidence I felt like it’s rushed. I don’t recommand that novel
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Hello! Author here~ I just wanted to say that I am grateful for everyone who had supported this book. Writing these novels had been my rock since my studies are giving me tons of headache. Hope you all would enjoy! Have a great day~
Wow! your book is amazing! Adventures is my favorite genre. I hope got to learn more about magics. Kinda excited to read more of this chapter. Keep it up the good work author!
I like the premise. Very anime-feels. The Mc staring some gallant warriors in the parrade while dreaming of becoming one someday. Really, it is one of the best opening for me in all anime I’d watched. The following chapters is unexpectedly interesting. Immersive and enjoyable. I recommend this book to readers who love system and anime feels.
3+1+1+3+2)/5=2 I'm not even sure I made it to chapter three. that's how annoying this was...... and i mean ANNOYING! congrats to those of you who soldiered further before dropping. glad I'm not you tho. i just can't even recommend this. mc: "i want to be an adventurer!" everyone: "what you have, nothing. will kill you. we don't want that. there's no value!" mc: "I've trained for years! even when nothing worked! I'm not giving up now!" probably out of shape merchant pushed mc; mc falls and bruises......... excuse me but the duck?! then finally this was what lead to the mc breaking down. except it made no sense considering he was accepted to a guild just before meeting the merchant. also..... it seems like the mc's father, a potential former best in the world might've have been in that guild?? the guild becoming the absolute weakest guild is a novel standard but seriously makes ZERO SENSE!
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I couldn't force myself past chapter 2 the story was so poorly written. Every interaction felt forced and the MC is 18 but he acts like a toddler. I heavily recommend that the author rewrite the begining chapters. Best of luck.
Wayyyyy too many characters. Every chapter basically introduces a new person. It becomes a mess and clutter trying to remember everyone. At this point it’s not even about MC. It’s like a story about each and every person in that world.
This review comes from reading the first couple chapters. The waiting quality is good - few grammar mistakes, and easy to understand. The story feels... uninteresting, though the synopsis was good. It's just, the plot feels forced and unnatural, so I can't get immersed in it. The characters - particularly the main character - is abysmally stupid, and his main motivation feels fake and forced by the almighty hand of plot-sama. The world design is exactly identical to every other adventurer fantasy world - so identical that even all the beginner monsters have been memorized by me at this point. There's little to no imagination in it, so this has my lowest rating so far. The updating stability is below average, since I saw that it read "1 chapter / week" on the info page.
pretty much a waste of time, first 20 chapters I already hated it because not only is the MC stupid the author was pretty lazy writing the whole thing.
Hay salamat at may nahanap din akong magaling na pinoy hehehe. Galing mo lodi🤩Tuloy mo lng po🤞basahin ko lahat mong gawa 😁Try ko din gumawa ng fanfic hehe
Only read about 20 ch. mc is extremely dumb childish and basically gives away the fact that he has abilities that no one else does all the time. Fight scenes are pretty bland. The story doesn’t flow very well at times like mc will be doing something then bam scene shift with no transition. Good luck if you decide to read
I read the first 20 chapters and I couldn't take anymore. the character designs are pretty bad, things seem quite forced and just appear out of nowhere, the grammar is horrible and you can barely tell what is going on throughout the chapters. The story also doesn't really explain why things happen and that it just happens randomly causing quite a lot of people to be confused The story doesn't progress in any natural way. The author wants something to happen, thus it does. It gets pretty unbearable pretty fast, and you can tell from the comments people leave. Wouldn't recommend wasting your time.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This story overAll is pretty good. Its your typical no rival insane leveling up story. The mc has no rivals whatsoever. very unfortunate in my opinion. He goes from lecel0to like 25 in 5 chapters. i wonder what the rest of the book will be like now. Author, I hope you add some true struggles fir the MC, give me a reason to sympathize with him and toot for him. Being an orphan isnt enough since its too common of a thing. Also please make things harder for the mc. thats all im at about chp 50
What can I say. I just like the story ╮(￣▽￣"")╭ Not much else to elaborate on I mean, I’m just a sucker for these kinda novels, so maybe this ain’t the best review if u wanna judge quality
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The mc is annoying even quite a few chapters in and things are changed around randomly by the author mixed with things like people getting mad at a merchant cause he called his friend weak in front of him yet they magically appeared in said store with no mention of where he was called weak
This book is a mess... It's so inconsistent it already changed the power rating system at least 5 times and I didn't even read till the 40th chapter. The character suddenly loses levels or xp, randomly gains new abilities only because he complains about it and all in all it's just a dumpsterfire. A lvl 2 human wins against a lvl 15 merman. He is able toneasily battle with enemies twice his level and grades, ranks and whatever don't matter at all. If you can turn your head off, like really really off, you might enjoy this, otherwise there's just way too much to throw you off
Meh. Can't get myself to read past the 40th chapter, the MC is just not my cup of tea. He and the other characters gave me a cringe, it's quite force in my opinion. His driving force, his desperation and motivation to move on. The MC is also quite slow and a mama's boy. The stats and other terminologies are also quite confusing. I'm just hoping that it gets better as the story progresses.
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So I read it (almost 400 chapters) and thus is an overall. Most of the comments didn't read past the 100th chapters so....(*￣︶￣)...Anyway, I think the Mc is pretty cute. Sure, Mc is an idiot, but his way of thinking is nice. Also, there are a lot wholesome moments when you read further (His party and their funny moments). The grammar is okay, but the storyline is too messy. Like REALLY MESSY. I read the Twilight War and all I can think about is "why are there so many people." Please make the story plot more simple author. So, the overall review is : Great wholesome moments. Messy storyline. (I simply LOVE Ch.300 Gorge and his bubble XDXD.)
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ It was really great. From the beginning to the end. . ...... .. .. ...... .. . .. .. .. . .... ,.. .. .. .... ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . ..
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I'm sorry but this was a no for me. The start was very promising but soon enough it go so but I lost my desire to read further. The battle scene transitions and descriptions were so bad I can hardly understand what the author really wanted to portray. Worst part about it was the fact that the title says surpass level 100 but after detailing a level 59 for the MC they just stopped telling his level and show his status. Then what was the point of this story if its not related to the title? There was this part with the elf hoot where she attacked everyone yet for some reason she was then put to trial even after engaging on an attack? *facepalm
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ not much to comment really, just a missed opportunity, the story could have been so much better, the idea behind it was fascinating the way it was executed was terrible, who knows tho I stopped reading a while ago and it might have gotten somewhat better.
Exp……….:hxx uxucy jg jg jf ur ur it t irzcur it it jg ng kb m. Mb mb h b j mh lol I think we should be fine lol I Have it lol I Have To I was like wow wow I Have To lol I Need Durability lol I Need lol I just got the new phone and I’m not gonna be able to do anything but I’m not going back lol I Need To lol I Have yuyyy What do I do for a few days and The and Then A lol and I will send it
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I want to give this novel a good review, but I can't really do that. I refuse to pad my review to make someone feel better. Author, your premise is decent. I can clearly see from the dialogue that you have a plot planned and there's a deep story being written. The problem that I'm having is that there isn't enough. At some point between conceptualization and actualization your story falls short. We can clearly tell that there's a story behind all the numbers that you want to invent, but the story isn't coming through well enough. While reading this novel, I felt like I was in a cellphone with spotty service. Sometimes it would be there, and other times it would be missing. You're not transitioning your thought processes enough to allow the story to flow properly. It's all jerky and uncoordinated. I feel like for every two or three plot devices, there's only half or less than half of the amount of world building that's required being put in. Sometimes your characters introduce things with zero Segway into them. No build up, no explanation. It's a random thing throw into the middle of a scene that is supposedly used to transition into another scene, the problem is that there's no transition. It feels shoddy.
Things goes way too fast + the MC is not bright. I felt that my common sense was challenged too much. There is a lot of « fortunate » coincidence I felt like it’s rushed. I don’t recommand that novel
It Good, the plot is great and the character are fun.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hello! Author here~ I just wanted to say that I am grateful for everyone who had supported this book. Writing these novels had been my rock since my studies are giving me tons of headache. Hope you all would enjoy! Have a great day~