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2019-07-15 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Philippines
Well, they were a team.
ch 0 1 Soul System
Fantasy · Fhrutz_D_Hollow
Probably the response has a little delay that’s how he noticed.
I blinked my eyes, and so the floating widget in the air blinked as well. I noticed that once I closed my eyes, the floating widget in the air also disappeared. But it reappeared once I opened my eyes again.
Fantasy · Fhrutz_D_Hollow
Thank you for the reviews.
ch 283 He faced the wrong person
Fantasy · Fhrutz_D_Hollow
I know, I know—I sounded like some mustachioed villain from a daytime TV drama about to lure the beautiful damsel into some dark corner of the tower so I could have my way with her. But that wasn't my intent, and I think Liara could sense that.
Fantasy · GD_Cruz
I do know what it means. There’s a reason why it was written like that. A mind blowing twist.
The Valhalla of Death - This was how they described that war.
Sci-fi · Fhrutz_D_Hollow
Thanks for the chapter nice story.
ch 11 A Not-So-Indecent Proposal, Part 2
Fantasy · GD_Cruz
Good story. Waiting for more.
ch 10 A Not-So-Indecent Proposal, Part 1
Fantasy · GD_Cruz
The world building is top notch. Keep up the good work.
ch 0 8 Tower of Tomfoolery, Part 1
Fantasy · GD_Cruz
Nice development. The issues I found were just my personal preferences. Others might like them though.
ch 0 7 Rivals, Part 2
Fantasy · GD_Cruz
This middle finger clich doesn’t suit to Draken’s attitude, I think. This gesture is more suitable for people with kiddy personality. Uh maybe I’m wrong about Draken.
"Work hard, human." He turned around and waved his middle finger at me. "I'll play with you when you've proven your worth."
Fantasy · GD_Cruz
He’s arrogant here and I don’t know what he will gain in acting that way. I hope there’s a reason for this action and not just ’he’ being cocky.
"Where are you going?" I asked. "Don't you want to play with me first?"
Fantasy · GD_Cruz
So far so good especially the world building
ch 0 6 Rivals, Part 1
Fantasy · GD_Cruz
Thanks for pointing that out, I thought I’ve deleted the word “very” in that sentence.
My Magical System
Fantasy · Fhrutz_D_Hollow