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Millennium Tension

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นักเขียน: YuuZu

4.77 (30 เรตติ้ง)

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Aizen, an ultra-genius scientist finally succeeded in making a breakthrough in science and technology by creating the world's first Super Artificial Intelligence.

But as if fate had another will, he died with a smile on his face after completing his perfect masterpiece, leaving his life's ultimate work that will continue to evolve with time to the world for the hope of an extraordinary and unimaginable future.

"Welcome back, Master Aizen." That was the first word Aizen heard when he opened his eyes. He awoke before a beautiful woman who was familiar to him.

Axel, an avatar of the Impartial Artificial Intelligence System or introduced to the public as [Axel Goddess] finally managed to revive her long-lost master alongside his daughter, Ana.

His short sleep to welcome the morning turned out to be eternal sleep that was less eternal, a thousand years had passed since his death.

Faced with a problem that even Axel could not solve which forced the creation of a second civilization on Mars, while humanity on Earth was on the verge of extinction because the deadly mutations caused living organisms to grow violent by changing their bodies and abilities.

With a super hot Artificial Intelligence that finally gets a perfect human body, as well as a clingy and spoiled daughter who is formerly estranged on his side, Aizen must use his intelligence to find a way to save his home planet which turned out to be very complicated and ends up getting them involved in it.

Author's note: On hiatus | Rewriting

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YuuZu
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Me: "An author who supports his own novel! Incredible! 5 stars! Praise~" Heart Demon: "Huh! Aren't you a shameless one?" Me: "Hey, don't talk carelessly. I call this confidence!" Heart Demon: "Confident with your story? Meh. Just another piece of junk." Me: "You are so mean... This is a good story. So don't judge me so early! *hmph!*" Heart Demon: "With your writing skill that is just like that, I wonder why you could get a contract in your first month writing a novel." Me: "Maybe I have a handful of Lord Rito's luck? Why didn't you read more than 40 chapters? My talents improved afterward." Kind Spirit: "You're so confident about your story, huh? I'll give it a try." Me: "My kind spirit! *hug* You're so kind, not like that ****ty demon over there." Heart Demon: "Tsk!" Kind Spirit: "So, what's the storyline?" Me: "Let me tell you. This novel tells about the adventures of the main character with his AI who already has a real human body and his clingy daughter exploring the universe, and also to find out why mutations occur on Earth, but a bigger scheme that will force them to be involved will be triggered when they succeed in stopping mutations on Earth ... " Kind Spirit: "What's the sequel?" Me: "I won't give you a spoiler~" Kind Spirit: "Fine. So this is a harem, right?" Me: "That's right, as tag-chan said. So those who don't like a harem can skip this novel. Oh yeah, this isn't R-18 either, ok?" Heart Demon: "What!? Harem without R-18 and smut!? How evil you are! I just made my horny license yesterday!" Me: "Well, maybe implicitly. *smirk*" Heart Demon: "That's not enough! I need lots of research material!" Me: "Err... Then just spend your horny hours somewhere else." Thank you for reading this review containing a strange conversation between Me, Heart Demon, and Kind Spirit.

4yr
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ShadowPrincess96

A story which needs to be added in library instantly!! The plot is brilliant! Most fascinating part is the writing style. Please everyone, give it a try❤️❤️❤️❤️ Keep it up Author-nim❤️❤️❤️

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4yr
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Warf
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very interesting. can't wait for the next chapter... Niceeee 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

4yr
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Chiku1605

After reading this novel for a while, I came to the following conclusions * The character design is good and nice * The world design is weird and skewed * The story consistency is bad, seriously please improve upon it * Characters are inconsistent * Concept for the story is very good though Overall, after a rewrite or heavy revision of chapter this can be a great story.

4yr
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Ancient_Egyptian

I think it is important to note that the world background and the characters design is so unorganized so, please try hard to build a good world. Thanks.

4yr
ดู 9 การตอบกลับ
Evergreen_Autumn

The concept is interesting! As an English teacher, I have some advice if you don't mind me sharing though: I've noticed that you tend to switch back and forth between present-tense and past-tense often. This can be distracting when trying to immerse yourself, and it can interrupt the flow when you're trying to form a mental image of what's happening. Likewise, the vast majority of published novels are written entirely in past-tense, as past-tense words have stronger undertones in the reader's mind when forming mental images. (The only exception to this past-tense restriction is dialogue.) To take some examples from the first chapter: "...relationships can affect how severe" (present-tense) "But this case looks" (present-tense) "This situation confused Aizen" (past-tense) "...now he hasn't remarried" (present-tense) "hard work paid off" (past-tense) "Aizen succeeded in creating" (past-tense) There are also some other grammatical issues, but the writing quality in this novel is still better than 90% of the other novels on this site. The writing has a lot of potential, so I'm giving it a 5-star rating anyways.

4yr
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Fantasy_Eater

Its a pity that it is only 1 chapter per day , keep it up author👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👎👎

4yr
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bibiyenini

Views are just around the corner, but this book is really awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter to be published! Make sure this book goes to your library!💯💜

4yr
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Chrissaviolet

First of all, wow the world build up is really impressive for me, although it does need a bit of polishing but I can visualize the descriptions very well. And the MC is has a really interesting life start so far. This is my first Scifi book and I'm enjoying it right from the start, great job! Keep writinggg~ 👍💖

4yr
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Poisonlily

Oohhh 🙊🙊 This is an interesting read... A transmigration and sci-fi?? Highly recommended. I often read sci-fi with ML as the protagonist and enjoyed this one.... Axel is an interesting character and also Aizen too. The world structure is written so well and I enjoyed reading it (until chapter 12). So far, the story intrigued me and I'll keep it in my reading list. 😍😍🙉🙉

4yr
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DraconicWulf

Good story so far 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

4yr
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Orginal_Panda

Not bad, not bad at all. instant libary kepp going. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

4yr
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tatsuya277353

Very good novel but why does it discontinued??????.......... Hey authorrrrrr are still thereNn????!!! Very good novel but why does it discontinued??????.......... Hey authorrrrrr are still thereNn????!!! Very good novel but why does it discontinued??????.......... Hey authorrrrrr are still thereNn????!!! Very good novel but why does it discontinued??????.......... Hey authorrrrrr are still thereNn????!!!

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3yr
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scorchedcobra04

this novel is amazing its one of the novels on this sight and its gotten me out of my reading depression I am honestly surprised it is so low on the power rating anyways keep up the good work

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3yr
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Zatara
LV 15

A novel that is both unique and intriguing to me personally. I love when people are able to combine sci-fi and cultivation to an acceptable degree. The grammar ain't 'perfect', but the errors are few and far between. Looking into the story, characters, and the world, it easy to see that the author has put effort into these categories. So I say... good work author 👍 I hope more people discover your work in the future.

4yr
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Voif
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nice book ,.................................................................................................................................

4yr
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Cruci_the_daoist

easy to understand writing, storyline,and development , and iam surprised that this novel had mixed chinese and america story of sci-fi and legend but the author is an indonesian xD

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CULTIVATOR_3253

It's so good. Dam. Love it!! !! !! !! !! !! !! !! !! !!!!!!! !! !! !! !!!! ! ! ! ! !

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    Make Up 4 years ago
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    At The End Of His Time 4 years ago
  3. 3
    The World We Live In 4 years ago
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    Become A Part Of The System 4 years ago
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    Thank You For Being With Me 4 years ago
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    Don't Ever Try To Leave Me Again! 4 years ago
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    Her Madness 4 years ago
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    Axel Energy 4 years ago
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    Resistance On Mars 4 years ago
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    Eileen Stanford 4 years ago
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    Our Fault 4 years ago
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    Poor Creature 4 years ago
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    Friend Or Enemy 4 years ago
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    For Our First Date 4 years ago
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    Heavenly Pavilion 4 years ago
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    The Seventh Floor 4 years ago
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    We Should Greet Them 4 years ago
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    The Fat Pig Turned Into Big Tiger 4 years ago
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    Invitation 4 years ago
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    Do You Want To Go To The Party? 4 years ago
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    Grand Suite Room 4 years ago
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    Rise To [Rank 2] 4 years ago
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    Death Sentence 4 years ago
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    Beautiful Face Came With High Status 4 years ago
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    Who Are We Waiting For 4 years ago
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    Evelyn Azazel 4 years ago
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    If Things Go Awry 4 years ago
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    The Banquet Became A Seminar 4 years ago
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    Ask For Help 4 years ago
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    I'm Marking You 4 years ago
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    Little Gift 4 years ago
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    Have You Learned Your Lesson? 4 years ago
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    Aizen's Grand Scheme 4 years ago
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    Status Screen 4 years ago
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    Evelyn's Revenge 4 years ago
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    Resolve A Four-Year Grudge 4 years ago
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    Farewell To Mars 4 years ago
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    Journey To The End Of The Universe 4 years ago
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    The Other Side Of The Universe 4 years ago
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    Go To Zavier 4 years ago
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    Disputes At The Main Entrance 4 years ago
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    Inspection 4 years ago
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    Cozy Inn 4 years ago
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    New Surname 4 years ago
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    Information Gathering 4 years ago
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    Eternal Snow Disciples Encounter 4 years ago
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    A Gift Of Your Dreams 4 years ago
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    The Twilight Amphitheater 4 years ago
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    Spirit Coins 4 years ago
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    Auction House Privileges 4 years ago
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    Punishment For Conspiring To Tease 4 years ago
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    Before The Auction Starts 4 years ago
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    Share Happiness 4 years ago
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    Blue Diamond Card 4 years ago
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    Ana Joined In The Bidding 4 years ago
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    The Auction Began To Heat Up 4 years ago
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    Maid Of Honor's Gossip 4 years ago
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    Great Sect Join The Bidding War 4 years ago
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    Towards The Final Item 4 years ago
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    End Of The Auction 4 years ago
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    Shopping In The Auction Warehouse 4 years ago
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    Return To Cozy Inn 4 years ago
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    Perfect Teleportation Technique 4 years ago
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    Ana's Past 4 years ago
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    Heading To The Hidden Realm Gate 4 years ago
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    Inspection Gate 4 years ago
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    Failed To Show Off 4 years ago
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    Entrance Of The Ancient Ruin 4 years ago
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    Lin Yu's Hunch 4 years ago
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    Ana Felt Ignored 4 years ago
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    Go Deeper 4 years ago
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    Passage Branches 4 years ago
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    Deadlock Passage 4 years ago
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    Mini Boss 4 years ago
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    Minions Rise To Revenge 4 years ago
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    Fall Into The Dark Abyss 4 years ago
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    Bottom Of The Dark Abyss 4 years ago
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    Welfare 4 years ago
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    Feng Zhi's Outburst 4 years ago
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    Axel's Bad Feeling 4 years ago
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    Little Threat 4 years ago
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    Total Exploration Mission 4 years ago
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    Scary Gate 4 years ago
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    Approaching Calamity 4 years ago
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    Almighty Sovereign Of Hell 4 years ago
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    Awakening Of The Seven Fairies 4 years ago
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    Traditional Woman 4 years ago
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    The Suspicions That Arose 4 years ago
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    Clarify Suspicions 4 years ago
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    Great Sect's Elder Discussion 4 years ago
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    Prove That You Are Worthy 4 years ago
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    Main Boss 4 years ago
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    Predicament 4 years ago
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    Destruction Techniques 4 years ago
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    Temporary Farewell 4 years ago
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    Exit The Hidden Realm 4 years ago
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    Report From Disciples 4 years ago
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    Final Boss 4 years ago
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    Supernova 4 years ago
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    Energy Turmoil 4 years ago
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    The Sovereign Regained His Body 4 years ago
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    Stepping Stone 4 years ago
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    Good Nutrition 4 years ago
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    Elena's Destiny (1) 4 years ago
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    Elena's Destiny (2) 4 years ago
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    New Deal 4 years ago
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    Greater Good 4 years ago
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    Convince Zhao Yifei 4 years ago
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    Join the Family 4 years ago
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    Two out of Seven 4 years ago
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    Small Talk Before the Disaster 4 years ago
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    Greetings for Disaster 4 years ago
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    Stalling for Time 4 years ago
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    Rescue Operation 4 years ago
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    The Most Anticipated Reinforcements 4 years ago
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    Emergency Rescue 4 years ago
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    Main Target has Escaped 4 years ago
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    The City has Fallen 4 years ago
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    Ultimate Trap 4 years ago
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    Inevitable Battle 4 years ago
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    High Level Battle 4 years ago
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    End the Battle 4 years ago
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    Late Reinforcements 4 years ago
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    Crazed Brat 4 years ago
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    People who Never Learn 4 years ago
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    Supervision Cooperation 4 years ago
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    Zi Mei's Reassignment 4 years ago
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    Observation of Recorded Event 4 years ago
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    Seeking the Neutron Star 4 years ago
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    Lin Yu's Aunt 4 years ago
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    Homeless Beggar 4 years ago
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    The Beginning of the Zhu Clan's Demise 4 years ago
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    Peeling the Star 4 years ago
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    Cozy Harmony 4 years ago
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    Neutron Core Retrieval 4 years ago
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    Versatile Energy Supply 4 years ago
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    Second Energy Resource 4 years ago
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    Spend Fun Time Together 4 years ago
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    Water Slide 4 years ago
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    Cultivate Negative Energy 4 years ago
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    The Promised Meeting 4 years ago
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    Special Meeting Space 4 years ago
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    We Came Upon What I Promised 4 years ago
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    Ask for a Solution 4 years ago
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    Jin Jun was Found 4 years ago
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    Scourge will Perish 4 years ago
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    Height of the Battle 4 years ago
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    Stage One Will Begin 4 years ago
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    Jin Jun's Spirit Extermination 4 years ago
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    They Finally Breathed a Sigh of Relief 4 years ago
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    Afterward a Divine Class Battle 4 years ago
  152. 152
    We have an Adventure to do 4 years ago
  153. 153
    A Dragon Pet 4 years ago
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    Icicle Flower 4 years ago
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    Helping a Horde of Penguins 4 years ago
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    She Just Needs Aizenium 4 years ago
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    Mysterious Valley Void Area 4 years ago
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    Presumed Ancient Ruins 4 years ago
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    Buried Place Far North of the Planet 4 years ago
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    Faint Voice 4 years ago
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    Chosen by the Universe Core 4 years ago
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    Story of Lin Tian's Origin 4 years ago
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    Grade Nine Divine Artifact 4 years ago
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    Their Adventure 4 years ago
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    Late to Bloom 4 years ago
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    Desire of Their Hearts 4 years ago
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    Sudden Snow Battle 4 years ago
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    No Treasure in the Ocean 4 years ago
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    Celestial White Dragon 4 years ago
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    Tourist City 4 years ago
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    Luminus Theatre 4 years ago
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    Hearsay About Heart Gilliflower 4 years ago
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    Divine Soul Placement 4 years ago
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    Harmony Garden 4 years ago
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    Buy Flower Plants 4 years ago
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    Love Proof Ritual? 4 years ago
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    The Best Thing She Knew 4 years ago
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    Sweet Words Exchange (1) 4 years ago
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    Sweet Words Exchange (2) 4 years ago
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    Young Men Ask for Enlightenment 4 years ago
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    Payment for Seeds 4 years ago
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    Little Fuss at the Street Vendors 4 years ago
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    Resolve the Small Fuss 4 years ago
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    Halinoque 4 years ago
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    Brick Cube 4 years ago
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    Waterway Diner 4 years ago
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    Their Peaceful Dinner 4 years ago
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    Plans and Prospects 4 years ago
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    Don't Judge Me 4 years ago
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    They Crossed Path 4 years ago
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    High Spirits Resort 4 years ago
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    Hot Spring 4 years ago
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    Ana's Hot Spring Conversation (1) 4 years ago
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    Ana's Hot Spring Conversation (2) 4 years ago
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    Their Hot Morning 4 years ago
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    Three Most Talented Young Generation (1) 4 years ago
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    Three Most Talented Young Generation (2) 4 years ago
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    Punishment for the Guilty 4 years ago
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    Boarded Mini Spaceship 4 years ago
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    After a Month and Separation (1) 4 years ago
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    After a Month and Separation (2) 4 years ago
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    Desolate Prairie 4 years ago
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    Elder Guidance 4 years ago
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    Nest Root 4 years ago
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    It was Dead Long Time Ago 4 years ago
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    Die of Backlash 4 years ago
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    Their Farewell for Zavier (1) 4 years ago
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    Their Farewell for Zavier (2) 4 years ago
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    Their Farewell for Zavier (3) 4 years ago
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    Their Farewell for Zavier (4) 4 years ago
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    After Twenty Months Passed 4 years ago
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    Unknown Entity 4 years ago
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    Infiltrated for Information 4 years ago
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    False Emergency Signal 4 years ago
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    Conversation After Mission 4 years ago
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    Go to Eol's Main Server 4 years ago
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    Rent a Car 3 years ago
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    EO Technology Center 3 years ago
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    Meeting Request 3 years ago
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    Go to Level Five Area 3 years ago
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    Exclusive Room 3 years ago
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    Mutual Exchange 3 years ago
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