Alan: Tale of Origin Blood

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Greymark

I'm writing this review mainly to adhere couple of things for people before they started to read the book. 1) MC is a kid with some book knowledge. He is not an a_dult in kids body. Auxiliary chapter Eternal Mind Awakening explains why it is so. It is explained in the story too, but somehow there were people not understanding it. 2) Amalgal is an AI and he can do very little. Language of magic is not spells. It has nearly zero practical application, unless one learns actual spells. So he is not some helping grandpa. The story in Harry Potter ark can be a bit dark, but Witcher ark is different and more lighthearted, as MC already grew up to the level where he can't be a victim overly and the world itself help him open up to people, becoming lighter in interactions. The style of the story in witcher is more action oriented with more fun dialogs between characters. Of course there will be not so funny cases, but it is witcher for you. A synergy of lightheartedness, drama and cruelty. And love interest is still undecided. Everything is possible.

LV 5

Harvald

This story is for emos. People who want to get depressed or just like to see their mc suffer for no other reason than character building. In this case a sort of numb case that follows daddy system sorry AI. The whole ISU shebang doesn't make much sense. Yes, it is there but it doesn't really add something to the story and is more like a new background. I sometimes started skipping and then re-reading until chapter 44 but it is more like a chore then that I get any sense of enjoyment out of it. I really tried but this story is just depressing for the sake of it and later ditches into a different verse.

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Ark_the_Legend

This book hits deep. It is such an amazing novel that really shows what life could and has been for some people. It doesn’t **** around and tells about the ****ed parts of life without the bull****. This novel is 1000% worth the read even if it is really dark and depressing through the first ark. Please read and decide for yourself while widening your horizons. - Thank you author for the amazing book!

LV 10

StarWriting

I made it like 15 chapters, I gave your story a shot but it’s just not readable in it’s current state. I have no idea what’s happening at all. You need a better translator/beta

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Debojit_Debnath

He was supposed to be a 80 something year old man.. not a puppy of 8 years old who has taken a liking to being petted by a girl he just met after years of being tortured.. I might puke.. wtf is going on. Like change drastic change in personalities in seconds.. and what is it with this constant guilt and all that ****. A person who has aged in soul doesn't have such intense reactions..

LV 4

Conquestor

It's really great the character interaction the world buliding the characters growth authors know what he is doing and he is really good at it. And I really want mc and ciri as a couple, you can do it author👍👍👍😍😍😍

LV 4

God_King_Heath

in all honesty, I like it a lot yeah it has some grammy issues but still, I like the hell out it so give it a shot. I hope it gets better with time

LV 14

Xcolibur

Excellent Story, This Fic has a plot and enjoyable, MC is likeable he's growing and has characters development, side characters is spot on and felt like the og, please don't drop this fic, it's the first Witcher that truly explore the world of witcher. Thank you author

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Spankdady

The story is definitely getting good specially about Alan family history and not mention his bloodline powers r Badass and Romance is good too and we also learn many things in Witcher world before 1st Witcher game come out.

LV 4

The_butcher

excellent story...loved it perfectly narrated... best fan fiction on witcher if you haven't read it, you seen nothing Loved it alot specially the characters

LV 3

Spankdady

I like the story it’s has great background and I like how u make Alan not Op from beginning because it will make story boring and fights too

LV 5

DrDoom0

Hufflepuff MC. do I need to say anything else?.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 6

Phoenix1998

Really good chapters. And story. I really like this story.Really good chapters. And story. I really like this story.Really good chapters. And story. I really like this story.

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Tzevaot

who is the main love interest ?.........

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Zakaria_S

La storia in se non è buona è deprimente... Affrettata e confusa con una pessima qualità di scrittura ...sviluppo dei personaggi e della storia inesistente...azioni inutili e forzate dei personaggi oc ...mc ha una personalità troppo confusa che cambia di continuo...per il primo arco trama quasi inesistente... Forzata la chiusura del arco con la maledizione su fluer per tradirlo e dimenticarlo quindi costringendolo ad abbandonare tutti quelli a cui tiene per cambiare mondo... Dopo di che ho abbandonato quindi non saprei...cmq non ci sono aggiornamenti da 2 anni Google Translate The story itself is not good is depressing ... Hurried and confused with a poor quality of writing ... development of the characters and of the story non-existent ... useless and forced actions of the characters or c ... mc has a too confused personality that changes constantly ... for the first arc almost non-existent plot ... Forced the closure of the arc with the curse on fluer to betray him and forget him therefore forcing him to abandon all those he cares about to change the world ... After that I abandoned so I don't know ... cmq there have been no updates for 2 years

LV 5

TheSystemFan

I really really really love this novel........ I wish the author will continue writing this and not drop this great piece of work..... Here's to hoping that it won't be dropped...

LV 4

Killerarrow007

just saying bro if you want a cold character as mc you need to apply murders and torture and if you want a sad character you need to just kill mc parents or something like that but your mc doesn't make sense he suffered all that after instead of dark mc you portrayed a light mc and also he with his powers itself he should be cold and Ruthless character but you made him a bit meak for his bg story

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The_butcher

I don't know about some people but they should read it first.....it's awesome story Ho ark is dark but witcher world is so awesome....he almost cover everything in the novel especially that idiot bard....god so annoying but we'll done author....you perfectly narrated it