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Definitely enjoyed reading this book quite interesting and intriguing especially with how the OC trained and gave a choice to all of his pokemon and to ones that he either captured or wanted to not just that but way how they are quite strong especially of their species definitely look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book overall enjoyed everything
The title and description along with the OC with the way that he trains his pokemon as well as himself and works to master aura and his physic abilities not to mention of the starter pokemon he has a variant pokemon of Riolu but with 3 different types was quite interesting and intriguing to say the least not to mention the shiny Charizard and overall everything of this book I have enjoyed reading not to mention like the idea of him having a business and doing different kinds of business there in the Hoenn Region instead of just Kanto look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book would love to read more and find out what will happen next especially after this last chapter
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It's extremely good just don't drop this story and im being honest when I say I would like to see this fan fic as manga or anime. It's definitely better than other pokemon fan fics I have read
I love your start so far. The way you’ve made the story so far makes it really interesting and an amazing story. The only comment I would make would be to not be afaraid to catch the higher evolved forms of some of these Pokémon instead of just the stage one Pokémon to raise up. It would make sense for him to rather pick a Pokémon that is closer to where his team is in power level than just start from the beginning again. Thank you for the work you’ve done so far and I look forward to more.
Story is very good. And i like the idea of artifacts. Overall it is very good fanfic but updates are very veerrryyy slow. Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update
your story is amazing and it also sometime follows the cannon and i also like the pokemon but almost all of them are male come on we need female pokemon like gardevoire, espeon. also update is slow
An excellent fanfic.... A must read for all pokemon fans.okayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy?
Is this Dropped? Also amazing fanfic one of my favourite Pokemon fics can’t wait for more if this isnt dropped 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
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Very good very good amazing as fook ye read it i recommend u to read it i recommend u to read it its so amazing and unique and thingy........
Jamon........................................................................................Jamon..................................................................
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
There is no force power used in this fanfic lol maybe a tiny bit in the absolute beginning or him healing Pokémon who fainted but that’s it. It’s name of this fanfic yet it’s not used. The MC is beyond extremely childish and moody at random times that just don’t make sense. He’s able to beat legendaries like it’s nothing and captures them wayyyyy to early in his journey. Lastly his family that does nothing for him but ask the world from him and when he was going to get a “sister” who is actually a cousin since her parents died he started to throw a hissy fit. Don’t waste your time
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It could be better if you don't make the protagonist op too quickly and rather write longer volumes and add multiple supporting characters. Follow some of the thing from original Pokemon series but make it a bit realistic. Don't take the same Pokemon as ash but take different useful and cool Pokemon. Add different Pokemon backstory and don't skip different training parts.
Just Perfect. ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
One of the best book for Pokemon , it has good character development and story doesn't feel rushed . The story is mix of action with little bit of humour and fun .. I definitely recommend this book ...
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
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Terrible grammar, even if it's not your first language, proofreading is required. One dimensional characters and MC's character is too childish for my liking. It's just my personal opinion so don't stop the work. I am dropping it because the grammatical errors are irritating me and sentence formations sometimes are even worse. Sorry dude.
I absolutely love this novel! The plot and story is so good! I was hooked on this until the author stopped writing... Please keep writing! We will support you no matter how many grammar mistake there are, we love the story all the same. Great characters and plot. As someone who played Pokemon Sapphire, I was really sad when the story stopped. Keep writing!
Definitely enjoyed reading this book quite interesting and intriguing especially with how the OC trained and gave a choice to all of his pokemon and to ones that he either captured or wanted to not just that but way how they are quite strong especially of their species definitely look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book overall enjoyed everything
The title and description along with the OC with the way that he trains his pokemon as well as himself and works to master aura and his physic abilities not to mention of the starter pokemon he has a variant pokemon of Riolu but with 3 different types was quite interesting and intriguing to say the least not to mention the shiny Charizard and overall everything of this book I have enjoyed reading not to mention like the idea of him having a business and doing different kinds of business there in the Hoenn Region instead of just Kanto look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book would love to read more and find out what will happen next especially after this last chapter
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
It's extremely good just don't drop this story and im being honest when I say I would like to see this fan fic as manga or anime. It's definitely better than other pokemon fan fics I have read
I love your start so far. The way you’ve made the story so far makes it really interesting and an amazing story. The only comment I would make would be to not be afaraid to catch the higher evolved forms of some of these Pokémon instead of just the stage one Pokémon to raise up. It would make sense for him to rather pick a Pokémon that is closer to where his team is in power level than just start from the beginning again. Thank you for the work you’ve done so far and I look forward to more.
Story is very good. And i like the idea of artifacts. Overall it is very good fanfic but updates are very veerrryyy slow. Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update
your story is amazing and it also sometime follows the cannon and i also like the pokemon but almost all of them are male come on we need female pokemon like gardevoire, espeon. also update is slow
An excellent fanfic.... A must read for all pokemon fans.okayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy?
Is this Dropped? Also amazing fanfic one of my favourite Pokemon fics can’t wait for more if this isnt dropped 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
Update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update
Update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update
Update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update updates update
please updateee................................................................................... ..........................................
Very good very good amazing as fook ye read it i recommend u to read it i recommend u to read it its so amazing and unique and thingy........
Jamon........................................................................................Jamon..................................................................
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
There is no force power used in this fanfic lol maybe a tiny bit in the absolute beginning or him healing Pokémon who fainted but that’s it. It’s name of this fanfic yet it’s not used. The MC is beyond extremely childish and moody at random times that just don’t make sense. He’s able to beat legendaries like it’s nothing and captures them wayyyyy to early in his journey. Lastly his family that does nothing for him but ask the world from him and when he was going to get a “sister” who is actually a cousin since her parents died he started to throw a hissy fit. Don’t waste your time
Goooooooooooo9ooooooodddddddd GoooooooooooooooooooodddddddddGoooooooooooooooooooodddddddddGoooooooooooooooooooodddddddddGoooooooooooooooooooodddddddddGoooooooooooooooooooodddddddddGooooooooooooooooooooddddddddd
It could be better if you don't make the protagonist op too quickly and rather write longer volumes and add multiple supporting characters. Follow some of the thing from original Pokemon series but make it a bit realistic. Don't take the same Pokemon as ash but take different useful and cool Pokemon. Add different Pokemon backstory and don't skip different training parts.
Just Perfect. ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
One of the best book for Pokemon , it has good character development and story doesn't feel rushed . The story is mix of action with little bit of humour and fun .. I definitely recommend this book ...
EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES EXPERIENCES
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
................................................................................................. ................................................................................................. .................................................................................................
Exp 😉😙😌😜😌😛😲😧🤐😜😊😗😋🤔😆🤣😄😚😍😎😚🤣😎😚😋😋🤔😗🤣😄😙🤣😉🤣😎😙😋🤔😆🤔😋😗🤣😍😗🤣😄😚☺️🤗😚🤗😚😅😚☺️😅😚😚🤣😄😙😎🤔😉😎🤔😉😀😎😙😎😘😙😎😙🤣😉😅😂🤣😆😂😗😋🤔😗🤣😘😆😄😙🤣😄😚🤣😄😙😎🤔😍😎😄😎😘😎😘😙😘😙
Terrible grammar, even if it's not your first language, proofreading is required. One dimensional characters and MC's character is too childish for my liking. It's just my personal opinion so don't stop the work. I am dropping it because the grammatical errors are irritating me and sentence formations sometimes are even worse. Sorry dude.
I absolutely love this novel! The plot and story is so good! I was hooked on this until the author stopped writing... Please keep writing! We will support you no matter how many grammar mistake there are, we love the story all the same. Great characters and plot. As someone who played Pokemon Sapphire, I was really sad when the story stopped. Keep writing!