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The is a great novel I want moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Chhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaqppppptttttttttteeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrssssssssssssssssss
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
Hey, making another review, after this arc make a poll to vote on what region he would go next. I also have a feeling that you would take a short break, 1-2 weeks or so, after this arc then continue. Please don't drop this, this still has a lot of potential. The only time i would understand you on dropping this fanfic is that if you finish the 3rd or 4th arc and sadly it maybe when you finish the 2nd arc but hey, it isn't your job and its just a hobby. In regards to the fanfic, it is still really good and atleast doesn't have that "cringey" factor that most pokemon fanfics have but I have a bad feeling it would lose its touch in the 2nd arc but from the looks of it, it still has its potential so good luck in that front.
Really great novel👍 Though it does need some editing but it's 100% good enough to not distract me every time i get passes a few words.
Haven’t read it yet but I’m giving an automatic 5 stars for 25 seemingly high quality chapters every week. Like seriously you gotta teach me your ways.
I like it ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I will be there at this point I don't know if I can help in any way I can get a ride to the airport on the past few days and I have a few questions about the fun of it and I will be there at this point I don't know if I can help in any way
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Gyuy nag but I mean I mean I don't know if you have any questions please feel free to contact me at any time and I will be there at this point I don't know if I can help in any way
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The grammar is terrible and is in need of proofreading or perhaps you could hire an editor. Still, don't drop this book because of my review, you have a lot of fans. Keep up the work and good luck! I'm sorry but grammar mistakes really irritate me. It ruins not only the writing quality but also the plot because it would be hard to comprehend. Stability of Updates, this is an automatic five stars for me. I usually rate all novels five stars when it comes to this category. The plot is good but common. Most Pokemon fanfic plots are usually like this. Basically, the mc meets god type of fanfic. I've read a lot of fanfics with this type of beginning but still, your plot is good and interesting. I'm sorry but I have to drop this novel in chapter fourteen. There are too many errors and mistakes, it not only irks me but deters me from my read. All the best to the author and I hope this review will not leave you disappointed or angry. Do not drop the novel for your fans!
I love that this fan fic isn't like others where there is a multiverse or mc is immediately op I also love that you are not completely changing the world but rearranging it to suit the new mc
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Never done a review with this acc before. So i've read till the battle with Erika. Do take note, i wrote this review to give my two cents of what i would like to see more of. Storywise: I'm a bit in a conflict with this, i like it but i don't. It's interest but the whole progress is going too fast and too smooth. There are hardly any battles and the few battles there are, finish too fast. It makes the story rather dull and boring. But again i like some of the ideas that are in there that keeps it interesting. Updates: No complaints Characters: Soul feels like a marty stu, capable of doing anything and everything. I haven't noticed any actual flaws in him which makes it difficult to make a connection. Do like how he can talk with his pokemons. But i can't help but wish to see him in some hardship. Maybe a pokemon of his hurt or a pokemon that doesn't get along with him that he catches. I simply want to see him go trough some difficult times and see him grow as a person. There are no major complaints about the other characters. World: There is no major fault in the surrounding scenes. Altho more wild pokemons would be nice. And if there would be more wild pokemons, to see or rather read what they are doing. Overall i would give it around a 3 if this was the work of someone who would earn money of it. For a free to read novel and a perhaps a more novice writer, id score it a 4.
I love it and hope you continue to make quality content and don't drop the story but I hope for more romance cause ALL good stories NEED some lovey dovey stuff
Really enjoyable book and a must read of pokemon fans. Keep up the good work author! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Well, this fanfic is really good but... you could make the fight scenes a little epic. I think this fanfic is more like a slowlife one than a more "adventurous one. Anyway, its still good 5 stars
it seems like the author likes to delete teviews he does not like on this story because there is no almost no bad reviews for a bad story. so chances are this review will not stay. first the story is very generic becauae somebody dies and meets the almighty god thats gives him every thing that person wants when he recarnate. second I found the author moved too fast with the main character because he is only six in the story but his parents leave him alone at home all the time and let him cook at six. plus the fact the main character is basically doing bodybuilding at six with zero suspension. I find system books like this have a habit of giving their main character too much at the beginning so the characters never grow it become he did this and that for some reason.
Haven’t read the story so I don’t know if this is worth anyone’s time. Just want to say that the rating is rigged because some benjamin dude is spamming five star reviews. So I’m going to go out on a limb and say the story is not worth my or anyone else’s time. There are more than 8 of those 5 star reviews from this benjamin dude. Since the rating is already rigged I’ll just leave this at 1 star for now and change it later if I feel like the story is good enough for anything above a 1 star rating.
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JUST HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT AND I ALSO HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WILL MAINTAIN THE UPDATE RATE OF CHAPTERS (REQUEST) NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
A good story. But please don't let him go all solo. Having a traveling partner is good whether it is male or female. travelling gets boring if you don't have someone to talk to. Believe me. Pokémon is fine and all but they don't actually talk. Your story is good I love it. Just write it.
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Character wise, grammer wise is definitely not 5 stars. Updates, maybe. Dialouge feels so lacking in emotion, like its emotionless characters talking.
Novel bagus jadi sya akan beri natu daya agar membuat anda semangat dalam berkarya dan sempha unggah bab nya lebih sering 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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The is a great novel I want moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Chhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaqppppptttttttttteeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrssssssssssssssssss
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
Hey, making another review, after this arc make a poll to vote on what region he would go next. I also have a feeling that you would take a short break, 1-2 weeks or so, after this arc then continue. Please don't drop this, this still has a lot of potential. The only time i would understand you on dropping this fanfic is that if you finish the 3rd or 4th arc and sadly it maybe when you finish the 2nd arc but hey, it isn't your job and its just a hobby. In regards to the fanfic, it is still really good and atleast doesn't have that "cringey" factor that most pokemon fanfics have but I have a bad feeling it would lose its touch in the 2nd arc but from the looks of it, it still has its potential so good luck in that front.
Really great novel👍 Though it does need some editing but it's 100% good enough to not distract me every time i get passes a few words.
Haven’t read it yet but I’m giving an automatic 5 stars for 25 seemingly high quality chapters every week. Like seriously you gotta teach me your ways.
I like it ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I will be there at this point I don't know if I can help in any way I can get a ride to the airport on the past few days and I have a few questions about the fun of it and I will be there at this point I don't know if I can help in any way
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Gyuy nag but I mean I mean I don't know if you have any questions please feel free to contact me at any time and I will be there at this point I don't know if I can help in any way
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The grammar is terrible and is in need of proofreading or perhaps you could hire an editor. Still, don't drop this book because of my review, you have a lot of fans. Keep up the work and good luck! I'm sorry but grammar mistakes really irritate me. It ruins not only the writing quality but also the plot because it would be hard to comprehend. Stability of Updates, this is an automatic five stars for me. I usually rate all novels five stars when it comes to this category. The plot is good but common. Most Pokemon fanfic plots are usually like this. Basically, the mc meets god type of fanfic. I've read a lot of fanfics with this type of beginning but still, your plot is good and interesting. I'm sorry but I have to drop this novel in chapter fourteen. There are too many errors and mistakes, it not only irks me but deters me from my read. All the best to the author and I hope this review will not leave you disappointed or angry. Do not drop the novel for your fans!
I love that this fan fic isn't like others where there is a multiverse or mc is immediately op I also love that you are not completely changing the world but rearranging it to suit the new mc
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Never done a review with this acc before. So i've read till the battle with Erika. Do take note, i wrote this review to give my two cents of what i would like to see more of. Storywise: I'm a bit in a conflict with this, i like it but i don't. It's interest but the whole progress is going too fast and too smooth. There are hardly any battles and the few battles there are, finish too fast. It makes the story rather dull and boring. But again i like some of the ideas that are in there that keeps it interesting. Updates: No complaints Characters: Soul feels like a marty stu, capable of doing anything and everything. I haven't noticed any actual flaws in him which makes it difficult to make a connection. Do like how he can talk with his pokemons. But i can't help but wish to see him in some hardship. Maybe a pokemon of his hurt or a pokemon that doesn't get along with him that he catches. I simply want to see him go trough some difficult times and see him grow as a person. There are no major complaints about the other characters. World: There is no major fault in the surrounding scenes. Altho more wild pokemons would be nice. And if there would be more wild pokemons, to see or rather read what they are doing. Overall i would give it around a 3 if this was the work of someone who would earn money of it. For a free to read novel and a perhaps a more novice writer, id score it a 4.
I love it and hope you continue to make quality content and don't drop the story but I hope for more romance cause ALL good stories NEED some lovey dovey stuff
Really enjoyable book and a must read of pokemon fans. Keep up the good work author! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Well, this fanfic is really good but... you could make the fight scenes a little epic. I think this fanfic is more like a slowlife one than a more "adventurous one. Anyway, its still good 5 stars
it seems like the author likes to delete teviews he does not like on this story because there is no almost no bad reviews for a bad story. so chances are this review will not stay. first the story is very generic becauae somebody dies and meets the almighty god thats gives him every thing that person wants when he recarnate. second I found the author moved too fast with the main character because he is only six in the story but his parents leave him alone at home all the time and let him cook at six. plus the fact the main character is basically doing bodybuilding at six with zero suspension. I find system books like this have a habit of giving their main character too much at the beginning so the characters never grow it become he did this and that for some reason.
Haven’t read the story so I don’t know if this is worth anyone’s time. Just want to say that the rating is rigged because some benjamin dude is spamming five star reviews. So I’m going to go out on a limb and say the story is not worth my or anyone else’s time. There are more than 8 of those 5 star reviews from this benjamin dude. Since the rating is already rigged I’ll just leave this at 1 star for now and change it later if I feel like the story is good enough for anything above a 1 star rating.
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JUST HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT AND I ALSO HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WILL MAINTAIN THE UPDATE RATE OF CHAPTERS (REQUEST) NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
A good story. But please don't let him go all solo. Having a traveling partner is good whether it is male or female. travelling gets boring if you don't have someone to talk to. Believe me. Pokémon is fine and all but they don't actually talk. Your story is good I love it. Just write it.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Character wise, grammer wise is definitely not 5 stars. Updates, maybe. Dialouge feels so lacking in emotion, like its emotionless characters talking.
Novel bagus jadi sya akan beri natu daya agar membuat anda semangat dalam berkarya dan sempha unggah bab nya lebih sering 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Лсллулслслвлмллвьвъл Лсллулслслвлмллвьвъл Лсллулслслвлмллвьвъл Лсллулслслвлмллвьвъл Лсллулслслвлмллвьвълрчдисдрсбичбосдр Ты же знаешь как 💗 как 💗 как 💗 Ты мне понравилось как 💗 как 💗 как 💗 как 💗 Ты же знаешь как 💗 Ты же знаешь как 💗 Ты же знаешь как 💗 Ты же знаешь как 💗 Ты же знаешь как 💗 Ты же знаешь как 💗 Ты же знаешь как 💗 Ты же знаешь как 💗 Ты же знаешь как
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