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I think this story is one of the best, if no the best one on this site. It can get a little dark at times but that is just part of its charm. Hense i'm writing this review with one question for the other readers. Do you know of any similar books, they don't have to be on this site, but just in general i really liked the feel of this book and especially the mc and the whole story with its developments.
*SPOILERS AHEAD* This book follows the story of a man in the modern era who inherits a system from a goddess that grants access to levels and stats and turns him into a vampire girl. The main character (now named Eira) proceeds to prepare for the return of the cosmic mana stream, which is the original source of stats (separate from the goddess's system). This book also receives regular updates three times a week. I will warn you that there are some dark and potentially disturbing scenes, but nothing too bad, and it adds a realism to the story that many other books don't have. Main Character Eira is a vampire who is not adverse to killing to get what she wants and/or needs. Great personality and good background. Although she was a man before, she now fully identifies as a girl. One thing to note is that she is constantly getting more powerful, and is much stronger than a regular human. Some could argue that she is evil, others would argue that she is neither good nor evil. Side characters There are a number of side characters in this book, some of which do die. Overall, Eira's companions are well developed, especially Eden, who has a well-developed background. The author isn't afraid to kill certain characters, but that doesn't mean important characters are dying all the time, likely due to Eira's strength. Plot If you like a clearly laid out plot, where the character clearly know their enemy and has to stop them, this might not be for you. The main antagonist (or who I think the main antagonist is) has not been developed, however, the book is likely still in its early stages. I use the word antagonist as an enemy of the mc, not an evil person (although they could be) because Eira isn't exactly "good," but nor is she truly "evil." Back to the plot, this is similar to a survival-apocalypse story, but not quite. Instead of just "survive" Eira has a clear goal in mind, however complicated it may be to get there. Overall, a good plot. World The story takes place on earth, with a few changes. First of all, an extremely small amount of people have strange abilities, however this is not common knowledge. There also exists other dimensions and other races, however pureblooded members of these races are not found on earth (at least not at the start). Since the book is first-person, we learn about other races and such at the same pace Eira does (with some exceptions). Writing The writing of this story is good, with well chosen words and a flowing narrative. We can see all of Eira's thoughts, as it's first-person, but the point-of-view also changes to other characters (also in first-person), allowing us to see Eira and the world from other perspectives. The PoV changes are really nice to see and fit well in the writing. The only problems are some minor grammar mistakes that are scattered throughout the book, but they don't break the immersion, and everything else more than makes up for it (most of them get fixed anyway). Overall, this is a really good book and is definitely worth a read. If you like the gender change part, good for you, if you don't, it doesn't have too big of an impact on the plot so you don't have to worry.
I wish you write more chapters. The story is amazing in the character. It is awesome.
One of the best books I have read. the characters are fun and feel alive. The setting and world are unique. The plot is well written and interesting. there are hardly any errors, and those pointed out by others are fixed. the updating schedule was decently smooth, but it has been on hiatus for 3 years, and I have not found any new information. (I realize authors have lives and should put mental and physical health above writing.)
update pleaseee 😢 i lovee this novel and i am still shaking in excitement for what could happen next (even after two years..) anyway not pushing but i would love to see this continued !!
its the best book i have read so far but its sad that it seems like its dropped. Anyway it has a great story development and the worldbuilding is just so good. The pacing is also perfect not to fast not to slow. But its most charm comes from the switch between funny and dark sences.
please for the love of God bring this back, it's such an amazing story and i love every bit of it. we need this back, even though i do not know whats going on in the authors life i hope they're well and being back this story.
yea idk if it's your choice or what but I really enjoyed It but there a question when is the update bro when is it ?so idk if you dropped it so pls reply.
Freaking amazing. I’ve read hundreds of books, and I kind of get tired of all the “good” MC’s. Or the “I’m evil, but in reality the good guys are evil” novels. This right here, a masterful story of a genuinely evil (or at least ruthless) MC who’ll do what they like regardless of circumstance.
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I was here about a week ago, and it was about 12 pages but this was the most drastic change of pages I’ve ever seen and the story all in all it’s by far one of the most taken care of Webb novels I’ve seen, thank you for this. 10/10
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This book is amazing ive binged all 124 chapters in just over a week! I very much want to read more, when will more chapters be coming? [img=update]
This is so good. I like the plot, it's quite unique. Writing quality is good. My only complaint is that I wish it had more stable updates. One chapter a week would be nice.
As far as I noticed it has been almost a month since the last chapter making it seem like you dropped it or something, but with how earnestly you answered every review I don't really expect that. So I am asking: Is it that you can't continue writing the story and have to drop? Or is just that you can't write at the moment, but you definitely will again someday?
t is a true Vampire story, no beefcake hunk Vampires with women falling all over them, Or forbidden lycan romance. A person turned vampire that is pragmatic and understands what they are. Oh and lest I forget a gender-bender where the MC does not think they are weak just because they are a female. I could go on. There are only two other stories I am read that are like this. And no one is a sparkling pedo vampire. And that was enough to get me to read it. If anyone wants to know the other stories I am talking about let me know. I do not want to offend the author by posting other stories and stealing his thunder. I hope the writer continues this story for a long while. As a disabled Vet, it is a great escape for me. Author thank you
This is really good and i hope you never drop, books like these where the MC is the villian is much better then hero MC.
It's a good read where you don't need to take It seriously but it's overly ridiculous and it's fun. Author does a good job with character interactions and the it's not those books that over explain for a whole chapter. Good read
Love it 😍 i cant believe i haven’t already written a review i started reading ages ago sorry, Eira is best girl (I ship Eira and Eden even tho it probably won’t happen but i can have dreams ok)
Im dropping this novel. Its Just another author trying to make an edgy mc who does bad thing because thats all th e rage these days. The mc is evil for the sake of being evil, All the evil things she does could be easily avoided and replaced with something that would not just backfire on her. first, Lets talk about the most blatant one. the fact this smooth brain desided it was a good Idea to show off her powers and kill a group of cops in the middle of a busy subway station for literally no reason. why You might ask? Because they were not even blocking Her exit and she ran away right after. she is faster and stronger th en the aberage male which makes running away the easiest choice. but then again author wants a delusional mc who locks higher brain function to do evil things for, Repeat after me, being evil. second she hidEs under a room and desides to kill its occupants on a cruise ship. You lnow what she is trying to do? Go from jApan to america. And you know what 2 Murderd people on a cruise ship lead to? No arriving at its destination. TLDR if You are looking for a a smart mc who Acts logically this is not for you. this is just another stupid mc like 90% of novels on this website. however if you want to read about a brainless moron from a race who wants to act all sympathetic for being killed but then go around murdering innocent people this book is for you.
Buffy the vampire slayer reversed, and a little dash of Loli! Gret horror, action, system, workd, and way funnier than it has any right to be!
A man who moved to Japan (original I know) find himself transformed into a ancient vampire queen on a quest to restore her race before the mana apocalypse. I'll be honest here. While this story does have plot progression, its mostly second fiddle to watching a horror movie from the monster's perspective. In fact the first major arc takes place on an isolated location and we get to see how it slowly goes from suspencefoly manageable all the way to catastrophically bad. Actually, I would say this story is at it's best when it shows how a monster actually overcomes the odds of logic and preparation to gain a terrifying edge. A fantastic spin on classic horror.
Really liked this story so far! Hope it Will keep updating and making good content. One of my favorite on this platform by far! Well done! 9/10 for a webfic!
Really a got book, one of the best I read. The Story is good, the System makes sense, the writing is amazing and the author is nice. Just read it, it really is a good story!
This is a truly brilliant novel. Has a brilliant blend of light humour, action, mystery and a few other things which I can’t be bothered to talk about. All the events flow seemlesly into each other and the description and detail is amazing. I have yet to find a vampire novel that is as good as this one, that stays interesting.
This was one of the best novel I’ve read so far that I’ve read all the published chapters overnight.This novel makes me curious as to how the story will unfold in the future.[img=recommend] Thanks for the chapters and will be waiting for the chapters that to come[img=recommend][img=update]
seriously a great story over all my only problem with this is the genderbender part over all the story is one of the best i've seen on this website and after some time you even the GB aspect gets lost in the great story so errm..... TAKE MY 5 STARS!
This novel is great. If you like systems or video game farming aspects to your fantasy, this is for you. There's some gender bender at the beginning, but for the most part it's in the background as the character is more interested in rebirthing blood races and being an evil goddess. I like the slow pacing for the major plot as smaller events take center stage.
The author here being a little shameless rating my own work, but I thought I could at least use it to clarify a few things for those that are thinking about reading. - The release schedule is Monday, Wednesday, and Friday, if a chapter is released any other day just think of it as a surprise. - It's a gender bender novel, but due to story elements, the MC doesn't make a huge deal out of it. However, it still brings the MC some interesting and fun situations. - Is the novel yuri? Yes, but romance isn’t my focus with this novel. So there won’t be chapter after chapter of the MC romancing other women. - The MC is a vampire if you like that kind of thing. - Goddess refers to the actual definition of goddess and not in the sense of beauty like some novels use it, although the MC can be considered beautiful. Hopefully, this novel can be an entertaining and enjoyable experience for those who choose to read it. Have any other questions or suggestions feel free to comment on this review. Thanks, everyone.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I think this story is one of the best, if no the best one on this site. It can get a little dark at times but that is just part of its charm. Hense i'm writing this review with one question for the other readers. Do you know of any similar books, they don't have to be on this site, but just in general i really liked the feel of this book and especially the mc and the whole story with its developments.
*SPOILERS AHEAD* This book follows the story of a man in the modern era who inherits a system from a goddess that grants access to levels and stats and turns him into a vampire girl. The main character (now named Eira) proceeds to prepare for the return of the cosmic mana stream, which is the original source of stats (separate from the goddess's system). This book also receives regular updates three times a week. I will warn you that there are some dark and potentially disturbing scenes, but nothing too bad, and it adds a realism to the story that many other books don't have. Main Character Eira is a vampire who is not adverse to killing to get what she wants and/or needs. Great personality and good background. Although she was a man before, she now fully identifies as a girl. One thing to note is that she is constantly getting more powerful, and is much stronger than a regular human. Some could argue that she is evil, others would argue that she is neither good nor evil. Side characters There are a number of side characters in this book, some of which do die. Overall, Eira's companions are well developed, especially Eden, who has a well-developed background. The author isn't afraid to kill certain characters, but that doesn't mean important characters are dying all the time, likely due to Eira's strength. Plot If you like a clearly laid out plot, where the character clearly know their enemy and has to stop them, this might not be for you. The main antagonist (or who I think the main antagonist is) has not been developed, however, the book is likely still in its early stages. I use the word antagonist as an enemy of the mc, not an evil person (although they could be) because Eira isn't exactly "good," but nor is she truly "evil." Back to the plot, this is similar to a survival-apocalypse story, but not quite. Instead of just "survive" Eira has a clear goal in mind, however complicated it may be to get there. Overall, a good plot. World The story takes place on earth, with a few changes. First of all, an extremely small amount of people have strange abilities, however this is not common knowledge. There also exists other dimensions and other races, however pureblooded members of these races are not found on earth (at least not at the start). Since the book is first-person, we learn about other races and such at the same pace Eira does (with some exceptions). Writing The writing of this story is good, with well chosen words and a flowing narrative. We can see all of Eira's thoughts, as it's first-person, but the point-of-view also changes to other characters (also in first-person), allowing us to see Eira and the world from other perspectives. The PoV changes are really nice to see and fit well in the writing. The only problems are some minor grammar mistakes that are scattered throughout the book, but they don't break the immersion, and everything else more than makes up for it (most of them get fixed anyway). Overall, this is a really good book and is definitely worth a read. If you like the gender change part, good for you, if you don't, it doesn't have too big of an impact on the plot so you don't have to worry.
I wish you write more chapters. The story is amazing in the character. It is awesome.
One of the best books I have read. the characters are fun and feel alive. The setting and world are unique. The plot is well written and interesting. there are hardly any errors, and those pointed out by others are fixed. the updating schedule was decently smooth, but it has been on hiatus for 3 years, and I have not found any new information. (I realize authors have lives and should put mental and physical health above writing.)
update pleaseee 😢 i lovee this novel and i am still shaking in excitement for what could happen next (even after two years..) anyway not pushing but i would love to see this continued !!
its the best book i have read so far but its sad that it seems like its dropped. Anyway it has a great story development and the worldbuilding is just so good. The pacing is also perfect not to fast not to slow. But its most charm comes from the switch between funny and dark sences.
please for the love of God bring this back, it's such an amazing story and i love every bit of it. we need this back, even though i do not know whats going on in the authors life i hope they're well and being back this story.
yea idk if it's your choice or what but I really enjoyed It but there a question when is the update bro when is it ?so idk if you dropped it so pls reply.
Freaking amazing. I’ve read hundreds of books, and I kind of get tired of all the “good” MC’s. Or the “I’m evil, but in reality the good guys are evil” novels. This right here, a masterful story of a genuinely evil (or at least ruthless) MC who’ll do what they like regardless of circumstance.
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I was here about a week ago, and it was about 12 pages but this was the most drastic change of pages I’ve ever seen and the story all in all it’s by far one of the most taken care of Webb novels I’ve seen, thank you for this. 10/10
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This book is amazing ive binged all 124 chapters in just over a week! I very much want to read more, when will more chapters be coming? [img=update]
This is so good. I like the plot, it's quite unique. Writing quality is good. My only complaint is that I wish it had more stable updates. One chapter a week would be nice.
As far as I noticed it has been almost a month since the last chapter making it seem like you dropped it or something, but with how earnestly you answered every review I don't really expect that. So I am asking: Is it that you can't continue writing the story and have to drop? Or is just that you can't write at the moment, but you definitely will again someday?
t is a true Vampire story, no beefcake hunk Vampires with women falling all over them, Or forbidden lycan romance. A person turned vampire that is pragmatic and understands what they are. Oh and lest I forget a gender-bender where the MC does not think they are weak just because they are a female. I could go on. There are only two other stories I am read that are like this. And no one is a sparkling pedo vampire. And that was enough to get me to read it. If anyone wants to know the other stories I am talking about let me know. I do not want to offend the author by posting other stories and stealing his thunder. I hope the writer continues this story for a long while. As a disabled Vet, it is a great escape for me. Author thank you
This is really good and i hope you never drop, books like these where the MC is the villian is much better then hero MC.
It's a good read where you don't need to take It seriously but it's overly ridiculous and it's fun. Author does a good job with character interactions and the it's not those books that over explain for a whole chapter. Good read
Love it 😍 i cant believe i haven’t already written a review i started reading ages ago sorry, Eira is best girl (I ship Eira and Eden even tho it probably won’t happen but i can have dreams ok)
Im dropping this novel. Its Just another author trying to make an edgy mc who does bad thing because thats all th e rage these days. The mc is evil for the sake of being evil, All the evil things she does could be easily avoided and replaced with something that would not just backfire on her. first, Lets talk about the most blatant one. the fact this smooth brain desided it was a good Idea to show off her powers and kill a group of cops in the middle of a busy subway station for literally no reason. why You might ask? Because they were not even blocking Her exit and she ran away right after. she is faster and stronger th en the aberage male which makes running away the easiest choice. but then again author wants a delusional mc who locks higher brain function to do evil things for, Repeat after me, being evil. second she hidEs under a room and desides to kill its occupants on a cruise ship. You lnow what she is trying to do? Go from jApan to america. And you know what 2 Murderd people on a cruise ship lead to? No arriving at its destination. TLDR if You are looking for a a smart mc who Acts logically this is not for you. this is just another stupid mc like 90% of novels on this website. however if you want to read about a brainless moron from a race who wants to act all sympathetic for being killed but then go around murdering innocent people this book is for you.
Buffy the vampire slayer reversed, and a little dash of Loli! Gret horror, action, system, workd, and way funnier than it has any right to be!
A man who moved to Japan (original I know) find himself transformed into a ancient vampire queen on a quest to restore her race before the mana apocalypse. I'll be honest here. While this story does have plot progression, its mostly second fiddle to watching a horror movie from the monster's perspective. In fact the first major arc takes place on an isolated location and we get to see how it slowly goes from suspencefoly manageable all the way to catastrophically bad. Actually, I would say this story is at it's best when it shows how a monster actually overcomes the odds of logic and preparation to gain a terrifying edge. A fantastic spin on classic horror.
Really liked this story so far! Hope it Will keep updating and making good content. One of my favorite on this platform by far! Well done! 9/10 for a webfic!
Really a got book, one of the best I read. The Story is good, the System makes sense, the writing is amazing and the author is nice. Just read it, it really is a good story!
This is a truly brilliant novel. Has a brilliant blend of light humour, action, mystery and a few other things which I can’t be bothered to talk about. All the events flow seemlesly into each other and the description and detail is amazing. I have yet to find a vampire novel that is as good as this one, that stays interesting.
This was one of the best novel I’ve read so far that I’ve read all the published chapters overnight.This novel makes me curious as to how the story will unfold in the future.[img=recommend] Thanks for the chapters and will be waiting for the chapters that to come[img=recommend][img=update]
seriously a great story over all my only problem with this is the genderbender part over all the story is one of the best i've seen on this website and after some time you even the GB aspect gets lost in the great story so errm..... TAKE MY 5 STARS!
This novel is great. If you like systems or video game farming aspects to your fantasy, this is for you. There's some gender bender at the beginning, but for the most part it's in the background as the character is more interested in rebirthing blood races and being an evil goddess. I like the slow pacing for the major plot as smaller events take center stage.
The author here being a little shameless rating my own work, but I thought I could at least use it to clarify a few things for those that are thinking about reading. - The release schedule is Monday, Wednesday, and Friday, if a chapter is released any other day just think of it as a surprise. - It's a gender bender novel, but due to story elements, the MC doesn't make a huge deal out of it. However, it still brings the MC some interesting and fun situations. - Is the novel yuri? Yes, but romance isn’t my focus with this novel. So there won’t be chapter after chapter of the MC romancing other women. - The MC is a vampire if you like that kind of thing. - Goddess refers to the actual definition of goddess and not in the sense of beauty like some novels use it, although the MC can be considered beautiful. Hopefully, this novel can be an entertaining and enjoyable experience for those who choose to read it. Have any other questions or suggestions feel free to comment on this review. Thanks, everyone.
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