Tilted_Axis

Tilted_Axis

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I am currently writing two novels: Evil Goddess System and The Stained Tower. The second is not on WebNovel.

2019-10-26 เข้าร่วมแล้ว United States
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Tilted_Axis
Tilted_Axis
4 months ago
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The girl immediately froze and glared at me. “You’re not Reiré…”

Not the Heroine, Not the Villainess, But a Side Character... or not?

Not the Heroine, Not the Villainess, But a Side Character... or not?

Fantasy · Shiena Gin

Tilted_Axis
Tilted_Axis
4 months ago
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Her present life’s memories should be stronger or just as strong as her past life’s memories.

She burst out crying, “But I’m only a thirteen-year-old otaku from another world that’s actually really bad with animals! Even though I love them so much, they always bark or hiss at me!”

Not the Heroine, Not the Villainess, But a Side Character... or not?

Not the Heroine, Not the Villainess, But a Side Character... or not?

Fantasy · Shiena Gin

Tilted_Axis
Tilted_Axis
4 months ago
Commented

She should be a little more thoughtful with her actions. After all, shutting down a bakery wouldn’t be that difficult for a future king.

Once the prince released my hand, I quickly wiped it against my skirt. “I do hope our paths never cross again,” I clearly and happily spoke.

Not the Heroine, Not the Villainess, But a Side Character... or not?

Not the Heroine, Not the Villainess, But a Side Character... or not?

Fantasy · Shiena Gin

Tilted_Axis
Tilted_Axis
4 months ago
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Tilted_Axis
Tilted_Axis
4 months ago
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It’s obviously not a game.

'Reality or in the game, people are all the same.'

Death Is The Only Ending For The villain

Death Is The Only Ending For The villain

Fantasy · selcouthself

Tilted_Axis
Tilted_Axis
4 months ago
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"...What? No. That'd be committing a crime."

Death Is The Only Ending For The villain

Death Is The Only Ending For The villain

Fantasy · selcouthself

Tilted_Axis
Tilted_Axis
5 months ago
Commented

I feel like at this point it should be ‘from Earth’ rather than ‘from the real world.’

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Building the Strongest Undead Empire from Scratch

Building the Strongest Undead Empire from Scratch

Fantasy · PikaQ

Tilted_Axis
Tilted_Axis
6 months ago
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"Hey, you. You're finally awake. You might have attempted to flee the dungeon, but I regret to inform you that escape is a futile endeavor for someone of your stature. However, I would like to inform you that you are currently imprisoned on the 4th Floor of the dungeon, also known as The Labyrinthine Thicket," she announced.

Summoning the Empire

Summoning the Empire

Others · TheKnightOfDark

Tilted_Axis
Tilted_Axis
6 months ago
Posted

It’s a very interesting premise and I look forward to the future developments. And if I didn’t like it I wouldn’t bother reviewing. That being said, there’s a glaring issue that really brings this novel down… there’s basically no character descriptions and this includes Christine aka the MC. In fact let me go ahead and list all the things we know about Christine: - They’re female. - They presumably have fox ears and fox tail(s), though this is never explicitly stated in the actual text. - They were called beautiful once in chapter 9 or 10. That’s the extent of Christine’s character description. Hair color, eye color, height, figure, all of these things are left to the imagination, I guess. It’s somehow even worse for the NPCs who are basically just names without descriptions and have no memorable quirks. Not that Christine has any memorable quirks either, nor has she or any of the NPCs had the opportunity to show them it they did. No time was spent assessing the internal situation or exploring the Solstice Empire before the story began focusing exclusively on external matters. That would have been the best time to write some fun NPCs.

Tilted_Axis
Tilted_Axis
6 months ago
Commented

There’s a severe lack of character descriptions.

  • Evil Goddess System original

    Evil Goddess System

    Fantasy ACTION SYSTEM DARK VAMPIRE LEVELUP APOCALYPSE

    4.72

    In the distant past, mana flowed freely across all the Earth. There were numerous races, ferocious beasts, monsters, and even gods. These forces put considerable pressure upon humanity, pushing their population to the lowest point in history. In an effort to save his worshippers, the God of Heaven initiated his so-called "War of Righteousness". Many races were devastated, however none more so than the blood race. With her people facing extinction, the Goddess of Blood created the spitefully named Evil Goddess System to preserve her legacy in the worst-case scenario. Eventually, the Goddess fell, and the blood race went extinct. Not long after the Earth was cut off from the cosmic mana stream and the numerous magical creatures inexplicably and suddenly vanished. Tens of thousands of years passed, and humanity spread across the Earth. Finally, having sensed the slow return of the Earth's mana, the Evil Goddess System began to search for the inheritor of the Goddess's legacy. ~~The cover was commissioned for use with this novel only.~~ Discord New as of 4/28/20: https://discord.gg/Bjcgf9E

    124 Chs 4.3k คอลเลกชัน