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this is a first fir me a novel really touching the intricacies of gods age in marvel but I dropped it because it's toooo hard for me as a faint hearted person I can't see more than this and being super immersion experience when reading it affects me very badly I am so sad u have to discontinue reading this but for this of brace heart or normal ones please don't unstain from reading this
Is it wrong that i want to raed this more than anything after reading the sypnosis"Don't read".................. .............................
I was going to save this and start reading it when he gets to the start of the MCU. But 146 chapters and it's only in Vol.3. The MCU parts start at Vol.6. I was like okay I can still wait. That was till I saw he hasn't posted a chapter in 2 months so....that's probably not going to happen. IDK but it's probably dropped.
It takes too long to unfold the story, Even if the author explains that it would be a slow story, it still takes a long time, especially for the purpose of getting the jewels.
Great story But i would love some more of dem chapters tho🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🧐🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤫🤫🤔🤔🤔🤔🧐🧐🧐🤔
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What can i say, young people won't understand and internet karens will hate it. This story has a very solid comics background as the mc theoric, his wife, acanti, rock trolls, ughh almost everythibg follow's comic book lore and a great plot twist of acanti, really a breath of fresh air in marvel fanfic, The grammar's great, character introductions are really good and damn man introducing character's not often seen in ff, and even in the comics lol. Kudos to you for this amazing ff, and also hope you finish this book and don't mind the karens you are doing and amazing job.
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I feel bad for the author feel bad 😔 for the author, he’s put so much fucking work into this FanFic but it’s barely appreciated. Vote 🗳 for him with your magic stones!
A good novel and a new take on the marvel universe, awesome characters and good power balance ,makes the mc to be just right, not too op but not too weak either
This is one of my favorite novels of all time. I have already read it two times and I am considering doing it again. I have noticed the author has been slightly less enthusiastic about writing the story and I hope this comment openes his eyes to all the people who love and have been affected by his story.
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Please more. Another great chapter. Story looks good. Cant wait to read more. Please more. Another great chapter. Story looks good. Cant wait to read more.
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Hmm. Really like this story. Please update more. Hmm. Really like this story. Please update more. Hmm. Really like this story. Please update more. Hmm. Really like this story. Please update more. Hmm. Really like this story. Please update more.
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Honestly it started out decent and thought the story would pick up but it just stayed in this arc that was the entire novel so far.... I was going t9 make a review to tell people when to skip but so far at chapter 59 it just ended lol so if you start reading and want to skip that arc or speed read whatever then it has to be after that chapter
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Thanks for letting them know that you have been doing great work and work on Friday and Friday at the end of the week at the end of the week at the end of the week at the end of the week at the end of the week at the end of the week at the end of the week.
this is a first fir me a novel really touching the intricacies of gods age in marvel but I dropped it because it's toooo hard for me as a faint hearted person I can't see more than this and being super immersion experience when reading it affects me very badly I am so sad u have to discontinue reading this but for this of brace heart or normal ones please don't unstain from reading this
Is it wrong that i want to raed this more than anything after reading the sypnosis"Don't read".................. .............................
I was going to save this and start reading it when he gets to the start of the MCU. But 146 chapters and it's only in Vol.3. The MCU parts start at Vol.6. I was like okay I can still wait. That was till I saw he hasn't posted a chapter in 2 months so....that's probably not going to happen. IDK but it's probably dropped.
It takes too long to unfold the story, Even if the author explains that it would be a slow story, it still takes a long time, especially for the purpose of getting the jewels.
Great story But i would love some more of dem chapters tho🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🧐🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤫🤫🤔🤔🤔🤔🧐🧐🧐🤔
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What can i say, young people won't understand and internet karens will hate it. This story has a very solid comics background as the mc theoric, his wife, acanti, rock trolls, ughh almost everythibg follow's comic book lore and a great plot twist of acanti, really a breath of fresh air in marvel fanfic, The grammar's great, character introductions are really good and damn man introducing character's not often seen in ff, and even in the comics lol. Kudos to you for this amazing ff, and also hope you finish this book and don't mind the karens you are doing and amazing job.
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Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem?
I feel bad for the author feel bad 😔 for the author, he’s put so much fucking work into this FanFic but it’s barely appreciated. Vote 🗳 for him with your magic stones!
A good novel and a new take on the marvel universe, awesome characters and good power balance ,makes the mc to be just right, not too op but not too weak either
This is one of my favorite novels of all time. I have already read it two times and I am considering doing it again. I have noticed the author has been slightly less enthusiastic about writing the story and I hope this comment openes his eyes to all the people who love and have been affected by his story.
very very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Please more. Another great chapter. Story looks good. Cant wait to read more. Please more. Another great chapter. Story looks good. Cant wait to read more.
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Hmm. Really like this story. Please update more. Hmm. Really like this story. Please update more. Hmm. Really like this story. Please update more. Hmm. Really like this story. Please update more. Hmm. Really like this story. Please update more.
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Honestly it started out decent and thought the story would pick up but it just stayed in this arc that was the entire novel so far.... I was going t9 make a review to tell people when to skip but so far at chapter 59 it just ended lol so if you start reading and want to skip that arc or speed read whatever then it has to be after that chapter